Saga Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 _____________ ☩ DoomsDay ☩ _____________ Today, .. Drop it. Yesterday, .. Recall it. Tomorrow, .. Catch it. And you know it, same like you, I do breathe. And you forgot it, same like you, I do bleed. Today, .. Drop it. Yesterday, .. Recall it. Tomorrow, .. Catch it. How much time you need? How many lives you wasted? Open a book, - Yes, your own book. How many pages? -Ah... no pages? Close it. - No,wait. Throw it. Today, .. Drop it. Yesterday, .. Recall it. Tomorrow, .. Catch it. - Regrets? I see, too bad. A sea of insanity, a drop of sanity, you are born - humanity. Today, .. Drop it. Yesterday, .. Recall it. Tomorrow, .. Catch it. You can't smile? How bad, you just missed the last second. - Second? Ah, right. Time. - No, a second, a second of joy. .. Catch it. - What? Tomorrow? .. Burn it. - Yesterday? .. Live it. - Today? No, but ''DoomsDay''. ~The lost prayer of a hopeless soul, Nov. 25th, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morinaga's Girl Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 I love your poem, Saga-san! *___* This is my favorite part of the poem *__* - Regrets? I see, too bad. A sea of insanity, a drop of sanity, you are born - humanity. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chibi-Seme Chidori Posted January 5, 2013 Share Posted January 5, 2013 My, my, this one is very nice. Very nice, indeed! And just like Morinaga's Girl, I loved the part "A sea of insanity, a drop of sanity, you are born - humanity." That was the part that really spoke to me the most. I don't know how to explain the various emotions in this poem or how it affected me, just that I've never read a poem that has inflected me feelings on such a level before. Truly fascinating. :Red_fox7: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mangotango Posted January 29, 2013 Share Posted January 29, 2013 I liked this one! It has a great rhythm to it... almost like a song (I think it'd be awesome to hear it performed like spoken word) :3 The repetition is great, too... I really enjoy this type of poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yourstalker Posted April 2, 2013 Share Posted April 2, 2013 "Today, .. Drop it. Yesterday, .. Recall it. Tomorrow, .. Catch it." I wounder what "it" is.......I cannot comprehend it lacks that poetic flowing rhythm which is interesting it's short and sharp kind of like a haiku minus the syllable obsession I like it, even if this poem turned out to be about burning fluffy kittens with big blue eyes of innocence I'd still like it. Fun to read I envy your poetry skills ^^ Kinda cheesy that you worked the tittle into the poem though XD beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jo_suzaku Posted November 6, 2014 Share Posted November 6, 2014 Ah. You've got style, Saga-san, You've got style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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