Chibi-Seme Chidori Posted December 29, 2012 Share Posted December 29, 2012 Yeah, a short poem of mine. Not one of my best ones, either, but.... Oh, well. Here it is.... Forever Dreaming I watch the years go by, not sure of what I'm seeing All I wanted was to be there Just like you were always there whenever I needed you If you didn't want to die alone, then was it really better trying to manage on your own? Reminisching about the past doesn't bring you back, yet I keep dreaming Forever dreaming 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aoi Posted January 1, 2013 Share Posted January 1, 2013 I think your poem is very good even if its a short one! A bit melancholic! I totally like it! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1978 Posted January 1, 2013 Share Posted January 1, 2013 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. I love this part........... If you didn't want to die alone, Like a BET ^^ , COOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katekyo<3 Posted January 2, 2013 Share Posted January 2, 2013 it's nice i like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chibi-Seme Chidori Posted January 5, 2013 Author Share Posted January 5, 2013 Thank you all for your nice comment. Actually, I never thought that I would get any response for this one, so it was really nice to have a few comments. Also, I do hope that my next poem will be better and a tad longer. Well, as long as it's better then I don't complain. :hamtaro-005 (19): Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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