GoodNightSnacks

[Rikimaru]

As Sleep successfully evades me,

As my mind sprays it's paint across my eyes I watch it trickle,

Each breath I trade to the saint with the sickle,

Buys a midnight snack and another look back into the pillows,

 

It Started As an artificial Heart that grew stronger,

Most arteries would part, but yours beat a while longer,

Drumming on my stomach, i could feel you chest plummet,

now its just a fuzzy pillow i wrap arms around.

 

I see it all through your glasses with shades of hot molasses

my sweet tooth yells "Kookies!!" as a box beckons me downstairs.

the cabinet is far too far away but there you are, behind the frosted flakes,

you call my name, I fall,

again,

but this time all that breaks is the lamp in the dark

[Aoi]

Lovely poem! I like it very much! Also I liked how you started some words with caps to accentuate them.

[Rikimaru]

Thank You! for your kind words.

Sometimes reading poetry, some of an author's expression can be lost if you don't hear them speaking it.

Do you write poetry?

[Miro]

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I like very much your poem as well! :Red_fox: Today I was in the mood of reading poems all day long. :_red_fox 2