akiravadel Posted January 20, 2013 Share Posted January 20, 2013 I'm thinking of doing a either dark story or the healing part afterwards. Maybe both. lol I'm thinking of a character whose dating a girl. They went through high school together and now into college. A gang finds them and decides to have some fun. To further mess with them they let them decide whose going to be used. Of course my guy speaks up and the girl shys away. Devastated that she turns her head away and sits there without much of a word he's used in front of her for several days. Finally they get bored and leave them there. She tries to talk to him afterwards and tried to hold him but he feels so betrayed by her and so tainted he can't handle it. Irritated she leaves him. Leaving school he goes back to his home town and starts working at a flower shop where he meets the man who will change his life. Anyone interested in either the beginning or end? Or even both? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gin Posted January 21, 2013 Share Posted January 21, 2013 Wicked story, can I apply? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akiravadel Posted January 21, 2013 Author Share Posted January 21, 2013 Surely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gin Posted January 21, 2013 Share Posted January 21, 2013 shall we start?? :cuteonion58: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akiravadel Posted January 21, 2013 Author Share Posted January 21, 2013 lol sure are you wanting to start from the beginning? You wanting to play through those wonderfully horrible scenes? >. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gin Posted January 21, 2013 Share Posted January 21, 2013 Oh sure, no problem. The darker the better. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akiravadel Posted January 21, 2013 Author Share Posted January 21, 2013 heeheehee this shall be fun ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akiravadel Posted January 21, 2013 Author Share Posted January 21, 2013 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ))-((18-))?p=292252#post292252 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gin Posted January 21, 2013 Share Posted January 21, 2013 @akiravadel ;agree with that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akiravadel Posted January 21, 2013 Author Share Posted January 21, 2013 I'm one of those people that anything can happen to the character. As long as you leave some sort of out and my character doesn't do it then it's free game Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gin Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 Is my chara--a little harsh.. TT gomen, I can adjust it a little. So sorry Akira. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akiravadel Posted January 23, 2013 Author Share Posted January 23, 2013 No your fine, I've had much worse trust me, I'm actually enjoying his fall and seeing what Arata is doing to him. Maybe slow down the sex scenes a little but besides that it's a-ok. There is no overboard unless he started hacking him into pieces but everything else is fair game I like the crazy characters my characters can't understand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gin Posted January 23, 2013 Share Posted January 23, 2013 I'll lessen the sex scenes TT. But I can do the harass thingy? Coz' he's a villian~type of chara. Is that fine? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akiravadel Posted January 23, 2013 Author Share Posted January 23, 2013 I didn't mean lessen them just extend them. Slow them down so my character has more time to respond. lol I mean more graphic over a few posts kind of sex scenes. I'm asking for more sex lol longer sex. Go for it. Honestly if you want to do nasty crazy harassing things go for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gin Posted January 23, 2013 Share Posted January 23, 2013 ok i'll adhere to your suggestions then. So i'll make it longer next---kie dowkie. Hmm I was wondering if Daichi would fall in love with Arata---like that Stockholm syndrome. When the victim falls in love with his captor. Can the story progress where Arata can fuck anyone in front of him heartlessly? Hmmm then after lot's of pain and hurt Daichi broke and went crazy. Hmm with Arata releasing him from his clasps and apologizing at him and expected him not to forgive--he'll leave. what would be the good flow? I'm at a loss as what'll happen next to this love-hate relationship. Ideas perhaps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akiravadel Posted January 23, 2013 Author Share Posted January 23, 2013 Hm, I was thinking the same thing. The mind games and physical abuse. Pushing it from one thing to the next. Taking humiliation from behind closed doors to public. Have him do things out and about is always a good way to break someone down. Toys while working, drugs to turn him on, maybe visit him at school and work to use him or abuse him. Then from there doing other people, maybe bringing more into their group to do Daichi too. Slowly drive him mad. Ever see Night Shift Nurses? Something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gin Posted January 24, 2013 Share Posted January 24, 2013 Nope, haven't seen that one. Hmm I can drive your character mad but there's really no fruitful love in the end. Hmm well if Daichi will forgive Arata then there'll be. Hmmmm O_o Arata can use toys---*snickers. Hmm I was confused, there's a note in the rules, no rape--but it's not stated in there that BDSM is prohibited right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akiravadel Posted January 24, 2013 Author Share Posted January 24, 2013 I don't believe so, I've done BDSM stories on here. And I think the rape thing, at least at other places I've rped, just means don't harm the characters in an rp if the other doesn't want it happening to their character. At least thats how I understand it. I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gin Posted January 24, 2013 Share Posted January 24, 2013 Well effin' the same here mate. I have a penchant of BDSM and doing things in a hardcore way. Hmm so I hope that chara of mine can portray it well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akiravadel Posted January 24, 2013 Author Share Posted January 24, 2013 Sweet ^-^ Sounds good to me, the harder the better for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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