Rikimaru Posted January 24, 2013 Share Posted January 24, 2013 A seed alone cannot become a cherry tree your feet grow weak if they don't beat street repeatedly a river never flows with out a hill to travel down a lotus lives beneath the mud before it grows suppose One day the sun came around but never found a ground to shine on the moon was there, but who cares? the two would soon collide these words are sprouted from one divine ingredient The Earth is ours to keep alive we should be feeding it 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miro Posted January 24, 2013 Share Posted January 24, 2013 The poem is very beautiful and touching! :Red_fox7: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mangotango Posted January 29, 2013 Share Posted January 29, 2013 I liked this one, too Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. For some reason, I especially like the fact that "suppose" has its own line. I think it really sets the poem off and splits it, without seeming to split it (if that makes sense?) xD 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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