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YaoiOtaku's Music Box

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Organized by

Saga

̢Approved by

Key

.. Information

This month theme shall be Neverland,

YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people

that love music and love to write poems,

or simply song lyrics.

 

Giving chance to show your feelings

about the current theme and in general - how do you interpret it.

We have picked a certain song,

based on its melody you have to write down

either a poem or a song lyrics.

Of course,it's up to you how you name it,as long as you mention once

the word 'NEVERLAND' in the content.

 

.. Rules

* Post only one poem/song lyrics text.

* No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political and no child/animal abuse themes.

* Minimum 4 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs.

* Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/song lyrics.

* The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything,depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody. It's instrumental.

* Post the final result on this thread.

* Read the rules again, just in case.

.. Prizes

Each user that applies to 'Music Box' contest will get 2,000 points

The winner will get 5,000 points + 1 NEVERLAND themed set made by Saga + 1 Manga Cover card

.. Song

 

.. Deadline

Stars ->12.04.2013

Ends ->12.05.2013

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I will go first then here's hoping you like it

 

A NEW SUMMER LOVE.‎

 

The sun it is shining from a cloudless blue sky,

down on to the lakeside where together we lie.

Passing through branches and leaves oh so green,

it dapples the water,in an ever changing scene.

 

The summer air is warm,still and so sweet,

as l lie here listening to your hearts steady beat.

And the soft words being spoken to calm down my fear ,

and the gentle strength exerted to pull me so near.

 

These things you are doing to show that you care,

soft sweet tender kisses and a deep loving stare.

A warm gentle hand and a light soothing touch,

a physical presence that means oh so much.

 

Your beauty overwhelms, surrounds me completely.

l hold you so tight and you respond so sweetly.

A passion fills my soul that so easy to see,

and the taste of your lips is heaven to me.

 

As l hold you so closely, tight in your embrace,

you caress my neck my chest and my face.

my soul is controled by your eyes and your smile,

and your fingers make even time stop for awhile.

 

The need that we feel is so strong and so true ,

the inevitable happens and l surrender to you.

At first you are tender and gentle and mild,

but later so forceful and passionate and wild.

 

You use me and abuse me and make me your toy,

you throw me around, a rag not a boy.

And after we uncouple you let out a sigh,

and tell me its over and this is goodbye.

 

Everything has altered ,my hopes and my dreams,

completely shattered, torn at the seams.

Our future together was just one big lie,

A fantasy neverland you never would try.

 

 

 

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And here is mine ^__________^

 

 

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I did finish My Cherry :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

You & I

 

 

Here I go, I go here again…

Full of love without no pain,

Come on my friends,

Lay down your soul, and go with me….

 

 

 

Here I am, I am here now…

Why am I too proud?

Wander all around,

And sing merrily……

 

 

 

Here we are, we are here like this…

Join hands, hold your wrist…

Time to make a wish,

Do you agree?

 

 

 

Here we walk, we walk here together…

Open up, brothers, sisters…

Time to cross over…

Can’t you see?

 

 

 

Here you are, and you are here…

Thank GOD with full of cheer….

No more sorrow and no more tear…

Time to be free……

 

 

 

 

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My turn ^^

 

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The land of dreams

 

Flying above clouds with no actual wings

Breathing the air there but there’s no air to breathe

I’m touching a fire that burns hotter than sun

A beautiful flower like there’s no other one

 

We live by our own rules,like forever we will

Reviving a neverland that has never been seen

To choose what you can have is always so tough

There’s nothing I need more just you are enough

 

Let’s run into circles like children that play

Let’s have fun together and find our own way

The darkness surrounds us but it can’t slip inside

Your light is so bright that can chase out the night

 

Do angels have wings made of feathers or stardust?

Do things disappear or there’s chance that they’ll everlast?

I dreamed of a dream were I heard this unknown sound

There are things we can’t find if they’re not meant to be found

 

This land is enchanted and full of unknown

The thoughts come to life and impossible’s not known

The hope will die last but the hope never dies

Let’s stay here forever,not open our eyes

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Not gonna lie, I cried a lot.

 

 

 

The Last Mother's House

 

I am a child of two very different kinds of worlds

By the line of life and death do stories unfurl

I am a girl who was very lost a long time ago

I found refuge in a Neverland

Called it home

 

Past the temple grass, seafoam, rock, and bay

I watched you stand to seize the day

They always said that we were stars that could not shine

Still I held her close and then I

Called her mine

 

[musical interlude]

 

I held her in my arms that night

She laid still as a part of me died

God gave her to me and then He'd taken back that right

Held her close and then I laid down and

Cried

 

My child is one of two very different kinds of worlds

My daughter will never recall

The tears of a mother cold, despair hurled

Her tombstone that will always

Call her mine

 

We the children called it a place safe away from harm

We saw fit to sleep in each others arms

"She" watches over a "Beloved

Child"

 

 

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Alright, I know I'm the last person to post, but it's still 12/05 here, so I hope I'm not out of time for the contest, since I thought I had posted my piece and it turns out I hadn't.

 

(Nothing special, just a quicky, but I love the theme, and I would have regretted it if I hadn't participated. Hope you'll like it!)

 

 

 

(This is a poem about escaping.

Ourselves,

Our realities,

Our demons.)

Crystals

 

 

Where the moon feels just like cotton

and the sea has got no bottom,

Ever-floating,

Ever-gentle,

Ever-dreamy,

Ever-calming and endearing,

there’s a place no man has captured;

a point of beginning,

and departure.

 

Elves go out to dance at night,

Fairies laugh and bathe in starlight,

Mermaids and dolphins swim and nuzzle,

Sailors drink and stroke their stubbles.

And

Ever-beaming,

Ever-warm,

Ever-forgiving,

they all embrace us dearly.

For we are children of the same earth,

and pain does not become of us.

 

Our dreams dream of the time when everything was nothing but water.

Stories

Never told,

Scents

Never felt,

Sounds

Never heard;

Paths no-one has walked on.

They call,

for the land where the sky is cobalt blue,

and corals grow on trees;

for the land where all our worries

are clouds landing on riverbeds.

 

So when the truth becomes distorted,

and the lies

resemble fragile little butterflies,

remember.

There is this place where all is forgotten,

and our names turn into piles of dust.

Ever-righteous,

to the

Never-repenting,

but

Never-judging,

and

Never-regretting,

Morpheus descends upon us all;

and blithely covers us with his veil of unconsciousness.

 

Fire, they say, is not to be touched.

But still,

our hands are yearning

for that flame that is burning;

setting ablaze, devouring

our souls.

This way we know

that we are

alive,

even though fear nests in our hearts.

And our wounds, when morning dawns,

are nothing but reminders

of that place where flowers cover the sand.

An

Ever-lasting,

Ever-shining,

Ever-caring

Neverland.

 

 

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Drowning.

 

Running around in circles,

As fast as we can,

It never stops like the rain,

That's falling deep down

Down on the ground that has absorbed us

Into pain.

 

Why did you go,

Don't leave me here,

We said it would be our neverland

To protect, to cherish

Don't vanish like you did that day

Stay, and look up at those stars

On this warm summer's night

 

Taking two steps back,

Then three, do you remember

That winter night where everything had started

I looked right and you headed left

But even so

We managed to step foot into one another's world

Somehow..Somewhere

 

Why did you go,

Don't leave me here,

We said it would be our neverland

To protect, to cherish

Don't vanish like you did that day

Stay, and look up at those stars

On this warm summer's night

 

Holding my breath,

Diving with you, under this never-ending ocean

The one that holds you up and brings me down

In thoughts that none could describe

With minds that never knew how to swim,

We only drown

 

Why did you go,

Don't leave me here,

We said it would be our neverland

To protect, to cherish

Don't vanish like you did that day

Stay, and look up at those stars

On this warm summer's night

 

Step outside for once and let me hear your voice

The one that spoke to me when the time was right

This love is sick but we can't help but enjoy it

As this is our neverland so..

 

Don't vanish like you did that day

Stay, and look up at those stars

On this warm summer's night

Let this be our neverland..

 

Okay I know the contest is over but I felt like sharing it anyways haha :hamtaro-005 (6):

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Due to lost posts from the days when YO was off for repairs, I decided to let almost all threads end by the end of May as if started in the beginning of the month. So we can start freshly (and avoid some messy calculations when picking the winner if posts were lost) anew next month!

 

Thank you for the understanding and patience!

- Saga

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|| END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ ||

[YaoiOtaku Neverland Contest]

 

Thank you all for taking part in our second 'Music Box' contest!

The choice has been really hard since all of you are skilled and talented.

The winner of ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ [YaoiOtaku Neverland Contest] is NightAir with

their freestyle lyrics The Last Mother's House.

 

As promised everyone who participated will get 2,000 points + 1 Manga Cover card from our iShop.

 

The winner wins as follow,

- 5,000 points

- 1 NEVERLAND themed set made by Saga

- 1 Manga Cover card

 

▦▦ Application for NEVERLAND themed Set ▦▦

Main theme color:

Picture to be used (optional):

ALT. Colors:

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! I really liked your submission, I've read it at least three times!

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ARARGHARGHGHGG in all honesty, I was really nervous and I'm just so glad it was well received--mostly because emotional things HRNGHH, especially since I'm more of the creepy lurker time of person everyone stares at and then I grudgingly slide out of scene. Thank you for the opportunity to experiment with a mixture of poetry/song lyrics (ACTUALLY FUN FACT THIS WAS ALL I SECRETLY EVER WANTED TO DO), so just arrrrhhhhh THANK YOUUU ;uuu;

 

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Thanks!

 

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Heeeeeee! 8"D Thank you!

 

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Thank you for the kind words--sadfs ;uuu;;

 

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Thank you so much!

 

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SCREAMS AT YOUR FACE SDFJDF THANK YOU holy snap just WOW THAT YOU LIKED IT ENOUGH TO READ OVER AND OVER AGAIN Thank youuuuu! 8"D :hamtaro-005 (5):

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Hahahahahaha~ Please don't scream too much (scream just a bit), my right ear is very sensitive:( ;PPP Hahahaha! Well, I liked it, what more was there to do than re-read it?:) Congrats, once again!

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all that we write is emotional ^^ for me,personally all that i've written,in the contests,my rp with shiro chan and even my original fiction are all connected to what i feel and are somehow inspired by a person very dear to me.

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/lowers voice and whispers THANK YOU TO THE SUNS and I'm really just honoured. Thank you! ;u;b

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That's really inspirational and reassuring to know ;u;--and I think that's one of the best ways to go about writing something, because it means too that you can share it with that special someone. HRNGHGH *EMBRACES*

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Sorry it took me so long with your set. m(___ ___)m

I hope you will like it, but before I give it away I have to say the following thing;

I wanted to make transparent background, but the size was ''over leaking'' and since the maximum size was already far behind the past (lol), I had to make a trick.

I put as background the same color as the signature box' table. So when you put it, it will blend with the YO's table and it will look as if with transparent BG.

The other thing is, please use the link in html box for best quality. (:

 

If there is something you dislike or want changed, do say. (:

 

 

 

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: No worries! If anyone should be sorry for being late, it's me ahaha!

 

Holy snap, though--that looks absolutely fantastic! Is there anyway I can get the signature without my name?

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