KYOKO Posted June 6, 2013 Share Posted June 6, 2013 _________ YaoiOtaku's Music Box _____________________ ͒ Secret Garden ͒ Graphic by AmemiyaKyoko Organized by Saga ̢Approved by Key .. Information This month theme shall be Secret Garden, YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people that love music and love to write poems, or simply song lyrics. Giving chance to show your feelings about the current theme and in general - how do you interpret it. We have picked a certain song, based on its melody you have to write down either a poem or a song lyrics. Of course,it's up to you how you name it,as long as you mention once the word 'Secret Garden' in the content. .. Rules * Post only one poem/song lyrics text. * No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political and no child/animal abuse themes. * Minimum 4 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs. * Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/song lyrics. * The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything,depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody. It's instrumental. * Post the final result on this thread. * Read the rules again, just in case. .. Prizes Each user that applies to 'Music Box' contest will get 2,000 points The winner will get 5,000 points + 1 Secret Garden themed set made by Saga + 1 Manga Cover card .. Song .. Deadline Stars: 07.06.2013 Ends: 30.06.2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neja Posted June 7, 2013 Share Posted June 7, 2013 I must say this is really interesting contest. I'll try my luck here, too. Sorry for my bad English, but I still hope somebody'll like it. Recommendation: please read while listening to music. The lyrics start at 0:24 The Biggest Loss It was just an ordinary day for an ordinary person like me, I was living together with everybody as everyone in this plain world, However this wasn’t enough, I wasn’t satisfied, I craved to know more about this magic existence, There were a lot of questions bursting inside my head, My soul couldn’t let them go out of my mind, And finally one fatal day, when I was walking nowhere, Fate has abruptly decided to fulfill my innermost wishes, Suddenly my senses became numb. I lost my track of time, And then I saw a light in the black sky full of doubts, I raised my hand to reach this strange presence of faith, I felt a shiver ran down my spine all at once, Thousands of unknown feelings started to frolic inside me, I suddenly understood, I have found the secret garden of ambitions, My empty soul was surrounded by all these familiar yet frustrating emotions, Is this a curse or a blessing? Is this what my heart longed for? Will I ever remember who I was not so long ago? And finally one fatal day, when I was walking nowhere, Fate has abruptly decided to fulfill my innermost wishes, Suddenly my senses became numb. I lost my track of time, And then I saw a light in the black sky full of doubts, I raised my hand to reach this strange presence of faith, I felt a shiver ran down my spine all at once, Thousands of unknown feelings started to frolic inside me, I suddenly understood, I have found the secret garden of ambitions, Now I know what a fool I’m for abandoning my true self. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1978 Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 Done~~~~~ Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. :hamtaro-005 (8): No More… Where have you been, my boy? You’d know how long I avoided…. Do you think I’m just your toy? C’mon, I’d be annoyed…. Don’t wanna be only a choice…. Shame on me, right now I’d die….. Hey guy, don’t run away… Don’t go and have more words to say… I am still here and now I pray… Please look back, right now OKAY? Here to stay, please stay…. I run to you, I will….. Stop right there, could you? I’m reaching to you, it’s true… How far to go for you? Just give me a clue…. It’s the story of us two…. Tell me what I can be……. All is bright and blank for me… I can’t hear no I can’t see… Please let me free….. Be lover or enemy? Say yes, if you agree… Not you and me anymore…….. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AomineDaiki Posted June 12, 2013 Share Posted June 12, 2013 I totolly free-styled...rolf [starts from 0:25] 0:25 till 0:40 Here we go again,at this cage that past has made, Searching for what we lost in this far away place, Nowhere to hide and nowhere to return Just a sword in our hands and a thick shield in our hearts. 0:40 till..... Do we pay the sins of the past? Is that the right way to get a warm heart? What an irony to wish for that, when we know very well what brought as apart. Now i will search for my own peace of mind Where there would me no war nor a fight I will drown myself into this fantasy Then i shall close my eyes and feel the harmony This is your turn to feel regret And this chaos around you is what you get Paradise is far away from hell But I shall guide your way back there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garumba Posted June 25, 2013 Share Posted June 25, 2013 Uh! I like this contest! ^^ My first poem, I hope you like it! BREAKDOWN Strong is the land, firm is the air and flat is the lake all is quiet in the secret garden. A drop, the water ripples the wind, rustle of leaves a seed that fall, it seems inert. All is silent once again. a chirping, at first weak It grow, it fills the air the seed sprouts, put down roots that are destined to go deep. The air is restless, the wind rises the lake is agitated in a sudden fury. It's an embrace of sounds that collide and merge in a dissonant harmony. The earth trembles, shaken by a thousand tremors everything is swallowed in an abyss. only the seed remains, which has become tree. Once again the tranquility is back you can only hear the noise of the last fruit that falls. At the end of everything only a dry tree has remained and a rotten fruit on the ground. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miyahara_sama Posted June 27, 2013 Share Posted June 27, 2013 The garden at the row's end Falling from sky but i don't care I have no wings to break my fall Was this a whim,only a dare? For me it is and will be all Unbroken bonds 's what i created The strongest tie holds me in place But you decide what will be,fated Whatever is i'll only face My heart still beats but just gets colder It doesn't know how much will beat Will we go on and can grow older? Or burn now in this fire's heat To touch a heart is to create A beautiful and healing place But it will vanish,dissipate When you're no more to light my face Oh,full of beauty is this garden With flowers blooming where you go But it can dry and disappear then When it will be i'll never know I don't give up i always go on But there are things i just can't take Don't go away please just don't be gone Without you here don't want to wake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss Blank Posted June 28, 2013 Share Posted June 28, 2013 Don't Come Near Me.. Don't come near me Don't come here Don't come near me Don't come here When you think you understand everything and run after me, you wrong It's already late for you and you can't turn back to the way you are So don't come after me and lost to your curiosity It may look splendid now, but you better run away Never think of me or wondering about me Just think of yourself and go far away from me It's surely draw your interest but don't ever come near me Maybe it's look beautiful now, but you'll regret it later Never think to close to me cause you'll regret it Just run while you can and don't ever go near me Cause you never understand me with all the lies I show you The lies that made you crazy and will regret it later Don't come after me cause you'll lost everything Don't say you want to be with me cause you'll regret it That sacred place which full of lies so you shouldn’t enter It doesn't has any exit and you'll trapped inside You'll regret it and it'll too late You want comeback but it'll be useless because this place is secret, no one can help I said don't follow me, don't think to be with me Cause you'll lost if you're not, so don't come after me You can't go out when you're inside and i'm sure you'll regret it This place is maze and keep in secret within the world Don't come after me cause your regret will be too late When you were trapped inside there will be no exit Because this place is secret from the world where you exsist You better stay away and stop thinking about me Value your life and never think to come near this secret garden Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayasegawa Posted June 28, 2013 Share Posted June 28, 2013 Intro : One day at the park~ Sketching an Eden~ I brought my canvas to the park, What shall I sketch today~ Flora, sunsets, people and larks, Silver hair in Golden rays… He dances there again. Gazing upon his graceful choreograph, He dances in the Golden Light… Sketching his features like a photograph~ How could around him be ever so bright? Wonder if I’ll meet him again… Through my sketch book, I’ve sketched him more than I thought, at him if I could look, To quench my soul this draught. Wait, is that him I see coming into this café? They were mean to him, his pale skin and white hair… Isn’t his fault, I went to him. (heart pounding, face flushing) The world isn’t fair, How about a sit with me? He gazed back, “No one ever sees me.” Fingers through his silver locks, “I’ve got you…” He smiled “No one touches me. Afraid albinism spreads… You’re an artist I see…” Flipped through my sketch book did he… He blushed and smiled, and showed me pages of him… “I love capoiera…” said he.. “If you will… May you dance for me?” I asked with a smile. So he danced while I sketched, Until the Sun Sets~ Everything in the park didn’t matter… We were in our Secret Garden~ He rested in me, I held him close… He’s no longer alone, (He’s with me) Everything lit Golden by the setting sun~ We gazed upon each other (I’ve got you) Embraced the warmth of my pale lover~ A kiss to seal our love… (I’ll love you forever…) Outro : The golden sun sets, an eternal bliss~ P.S Hope you guys enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing my poem/lyrics thingy.... xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Radiance Posted June 29, 2013 Share Posted June 29, 2013 Submitting a poem. Thank you for the opportunity to force myself to think of words that rhyme, I forgot how entertaining it was. Don't Forget Silence seems always around, when I need an answer its not outright Evil tags me to the ground, and all I know is I have to fight Cast away chains that surround, I won't let the past steal delight Regret won't even keep me bound, I'll gain all I need to find insight Engage the strength that can be found, keep it always to incite Truth into me to keep lies drowned, and I'll move from black to white And here's the secret, in the Garden is where we keep it. So don't forget, to Silence Evil, Cast away Regret and Engage the Truth. Grasp onto all that you have to say, hold it out for the world to sight Alternative is just another way, always think about your plan of flight Realise your potential today, don't let it die before it comes to light Dream of all the impossible array, of things you can accomplish inspite Eliminate the hurt, hate and betray, there's more to life that's only right Neglect your doubts put them away, and together we can make a new tonight In the Secret Garden is where it waits, I hope this truth inspires the fates. So don't forget, to Grasp every Alternative, Realise your Dream and Eliminate all Neglect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dev Posted July 1, 2013 Share Posted July 1, 2013 Ok so I know this contest ended already but... I wanted to have some fun with this song as a backing track so... Here are MY lyrics: 00:41 Why do you feel so ice cold When I just want you to hold I want us to be together bound well in lace and leather Inseparable bond between us But will this ever be us? Listen to your heart you'll know Ill wait for you in the shadow. 01:10 I'll wait for you in the shadow Grab a writing pencil to make my portfolio Out the way peepz, you'll fall like domino Freeze thaw so cold, you seem cocksure Ain't nobody rolling back here you better withdraw Royalty's here & it's all about the law I see you sitting over there trying to keep a score You open doors for me but I am a carnivore I be eating chickens day and night when they see me soar 01:28 Yes yes this is how I be I like to sing too but this aint no glee Don't worry you just need to stop I implore thee What you talking about lil mama yous a shorty 01:36 To be with you My love's so true This is my cue To start anew Spread my wings out Carry no doubt I can't do without You by my side 01:51 Why do you feel so ice cold When I just want you to hold I want us to be together bound well in lace and leather Inseparable bond between us But will this ever be us? Listen to your heart you'll know Ill wait for you in the shadow. Hold my hand in the darkness Don't fear the talks and gossips Give me your love and promise Together always exists Our love will never eclipse Caress your lips is true bliss Is this a curse or blessing? Is this what I've been missing I decided to record the song so people could understand the WAY the lyrics should flow with the song... You can find the Vocaroo audio Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. My vocals suck and I tried to get the volume right so there would be clarity in my vocals but that was a mission O_O Not uploading to enter the contest. Just wanted to add something to the rest of all these other songs already made. I hope someone can check out my song and let me know what they think. I kind of let the theme "Secret Garden" go over my head XD sowie Have a blessed week, Dev xo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted July 6, 2013 Share Posted July 6, 2013 || END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ || [YaoiOtaku Secret Garden Contest] Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest! The choice has been really hard since all of you are skilled and talented. The winner of ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ [YaoiOtaku Secret Garden Contest] is Dev with their song lyrics 'Why do you feel so ice cold'. As promised everyone who participated will get 2,000 points. The winner wins as follow, - 5,000 points - 1 Secret Garden themed set made by Saga - 1 Manga Cover card □▦▦□ Application for Spring themed Set □▦▦□ Main theme color: Picture to be used (optional): ALT. Colors: □▦▦□ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miyahara_sama Posted July 6, 2013 Share Posted July 6, 2013 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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AceyDey Posted July 6, 2013 Share Posted July 6, 2013 HAHA Knew it! He'd won! Grats Devcchi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dev Posted July 6, 2013 Share Posted July 6, 2013 Thank you so much Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. for this win, I am honored to have won. I don't normally win anything and for many years thought there was no point in ever trying. But this time i decided to attempt this contest with a new frame of mind, "I am doing it for fun and ONLY fun, show people I am capable and just do ME". I guess a positive mental attitude helps with most situations in life Thank you so much Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. , Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. and Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. for stopping by to congratulate me ^_^ I am truly touched by these messages and appreciate the time you have taken to come here and write. *gestures for a big group hug for Saga, Miya, 1978 and Fay* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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