gin Posted July 9, 2013 Share Posted July 9, 2013 Graphic by gin Organized by Saga ̢Approved by Key This month theme shall be F A L L E N YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people that love music and love to write poems, or simply song lyrics. Giving chance to show your feelings about the current theme and in general - how do you interpret it. We have picked a certain song, based on its melody you have to write down either a poem or a song lyrics. Of course,it's up to you how you name it,as long as you mention once the word 'F A L L E N' in the content. Post only one poem/song lyrics text. No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political and no child/animal abuse themes. Minimum 4 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs. Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/song lyrics. The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything,depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody. It's instrumental. Post the final result on this thread. Read the rules again, just in case. Each user that applies to 'Music Box' contest will get 2,000 points The winner will get 5,000 points + 1 F A L L E N themed set made by Saga + 1 Manga Cover card Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Starts: 09.07.2013 Ends: 31.07.2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garumba Posted July 10, 2013 Share Posted July 10, 2013 I CLOSE MY EYES I close my eyes and see cherry trees in bloom, everything is destined to end without an end nothing would make sense. I close my eyes, and see the sun in your eyes, that slowly is dying, I see drops of light, fallen from my eyes that gather in puddles of life. I pray you, come to me now, and then, free me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexia__ Posted July 13, 2013 Share Posted July 13, 2013 Keep Walking Till this day I remember your touch your kiss your warm embrace. It's unforgetable, because how could one forget such bitter sweet love that set the storms in my heart to rest. A wise man once said all hearts are meant to connect, But i'ts not possible to connect when ones mind is not set straight. An overwhelming impulse strikes my heart As I remember the day you said goodbye. Truth is I can't move forward, because I'm a coward. So I'll keep walking with my broken,fallen,beaten heart until I see you again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nephilim Posted July 13, 2013 Share Posted July 13, 2013 For You From grace From Heaven From all that lives within the hearts of men Fallen Your song is fallen angels Doves and demons How is it Hell plays bass so well? That sadness low and deep and slow Beating underneath it all. Fallen From love And still the song plays on an on Like waves on the shore Reaching always for something more Dark eyes closed tight Heart closed tighter But you never forget the music As you fall And fall And fall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1978 Posted July 14, 2013 Share Posted July 14, 2013 No more It still remains.…. I’m walking through the rain…. Why it can’t be refrained? When it’ll be drained? Out of you who I rely on………. Don’t wanna be only your friend Can’t you see my pain? Crazy for you now and then…. Like runaway train… Notice me, into your eyes… Oh no, no way I won’t let you see me cry, So please, do pass me by, I am here full of my pride, I just don’t want to hide, My soul & mind are sliding away Since the day we’ve met My heart’s warm in a shed Our hearts is like a thread Can you interpret? How much you mean to me? So well… All the tears will let me free No sadness, no guilty… No more stories from you and me It is the end… For our lives to go on…… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyonzu Posted July 15, 2013 Share Posted July 15, 2013 Bird's life When I was a child I dreamed about my prince who would come to save me. But the years went by and left nothing but hatred, pain and sadness. I am a pure bird, wanting and needing the freedom. Everything I've got was painful and cruel. So I started to search for you again. My false princes...there were so many I can't count. Please catch me if you can. Come into my loving heart. But every time again my wings got broken as my heart, too. "Is there someone who wants to fill my empty, shredded heart with love?" I can't see nor hear anymore but I know somewhere there you are looking at my fallen, weak body. It's too cruel to think about it… To remember but still everything burnt into my mind. Deep in myself I feel the wounds bleeding… in each hurting place. When can I wake up again? If I could find you, with which voice will I talk to you? Which face will you make? Please cut out my memoires I can feel the breeze and I wish to be as cold as the wind. I hate myself that I can't forgive myself but I can't go back again. Why waiting day by day? Lonely as a broken toy I am still waiting for you. "Break my wings again", I thought still smiling bitterly. I know how to live in this cage. Surrounded by dust, dirt and insects I am still smiling softly...laughing because I went mad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FirstLife Posted July 18, 2013 Share Posted July 18, 2013 Fallen angel: I was searching all my Life, For an angel fallen from the sky. I walked thru all the countries, That are deviding the pepole on this earth. And after all those years of searching I finally found you I remember thinking “I cant belive its true and angel here on earth and that angel is you* For years we were togheter, Togheter thru it all I remember that I was hoping that the day would never come the day that you would leave me, The day that I’d be all alone. And now I sit beside you As you draw your final breath An angel fallen from the heaven Has gone back again Sometimes when In our house I think I hear your voice. But then I realise that Im dreaming and that you are really gone. I know that Im just dreaming that you are in our house But I cant help that im dreaming because you were in my Life And now that I am dying I smile my final smile Because soon Im in your arms again. Somewhere in the sky Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shio Posted July 19, 2013 Share Posted July 19, 2013 Title : Wind You come You gone Without warning All your presence You warmth Your feeling I sense them all The petals blow throughout the sky my heart dance 'Cause I know u are happy When u blow strongly take along with the rain My heart cry along with your tears I can't touch you I can't see you But I still know you are here Your presence Your care Your warmth I sense them all Even you're exhausted You still give me a blow to stand the heat You are my breath You are my strength Your are my everything I'm FALLEN into your Blow deeply. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hushbeans Posted July 20, 2013 Share Posted July 20, 2013 Heartbreak Triangle I can see it in your eyes When she walks into the room Like an old habit Your eyes still follow her You still whisper her name in your sleep You still look at her with sad eyes As if your world has fallen apart It breaks my heart I don’t want to drown in your eyes I don’t want to hold your hand Because in the end She’s still the one you want But I don’t want to keep doing this We’re just hurting each other We’re in a heartbreak triangle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotoke Posted July 25, 2013 Share Posted July 25, 2013 The Last Goodbye I´m walking through the path. I know what will I see at the end. But I don´t want to think about it. Maybe it´s not true. Maybe I´m only dreaming. But deep inside my heart I know it´s reality. And I know I can´t change it. There, I can see lying person. It´s YOU. I´m afraid to look. No life, no colour in your face. No breath, no smile. You are gone, gone. I can´t see through my tears. My heart will stop from the pain. How can I live when you are gone? I´m standing only standing. You have gone somewhere I can´t reach you. Will I ever smile again? Will I ever be happy? Why? Why? Why you? That´s repeating in my head. But I know you are free now. I´m glad you wouldn´t suffer more. But my heart is still torn apart. I touch your cheek. It´s cold, cold. I´m fallen, fallen dark being. I will be the same old dark person. The person I used to be. This is my last goodbye. This is my last goodbye, goodbye. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss Blank Posted July 29, 2013 Share Posted July 29, 2013 Sadistic Serenade I see that your wings are already broken Still, I can't move and just sitting in quiet watching you struggling Somehow, it's feels so good for me You fighting and try to flapping your wings Whatever you did, just like a fool Are that you can't see your broken wings behind you? It was painful isn't it? You never try to ask why and just letting me watching you I never try to ask why and just sitting watching you in pain I love the fact you can't fly You will never flying through the sky Dancing with the wind and joy Because whatever you did I'll make sure that you will fallen again Just like I always do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dev Posted August 1, 2013 Share Posted August 1, 2013 My submission to the Fallen Music Box contest: The life of a romanticist 00:18 The life of a romanticist Is not one of trifle often a heart paired with a rifle Feelings of love that persist 00:43 A twisted fate for one truly jaded 00:47 Pearls before swine Return whats mine Fallen love is scorned A broken heart is mourned Will this be For eternity Roam this world alone Weeds seen overgrown 01:26 I... Spread my wings Lock my heart tight Cause the pain stings Insatiable appetite Something that wont go right Consumes me at twilight Ephemeral delight 02:10 Years seem to fly 02:21 But the harder I try Still yearning for your touch against my neck 02:41 Laying a teary wreck Recorded demo of the song can be found Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. . Vocals are not that fantastic, actually attempted singing on a day where I found myself having difficulties with my breathing. Was unable to hold a note for long without losing my breath and the strain in my voice was evident. In essence... The vocals SUCK but help for visualising the song I wrote Hope you like! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted August 4, 2013 Share Posted August 4, 2013 || END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ || [YaoiOtaku FALLEN Contest] Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest! The choice has been really hard since all of you are skilled and talented. The winner of ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ [YaoiOtaku FALLEN Contest] is Nephilim with their song lyrics 'For You'. As promised everyone who participated will get 2,000 points. The winner wins as follow, - 5,000 points - 1 Secret Garden themed set made by Saga - 1 Manga Cover card □▦▦□ Application for Spring themed Set □▦▦□ Main theme color: Picture to be used (optional): ALT. Colors: □▦▦□ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YLover Posted August 4, 2013 Share Posted August 4, 2013 Congrats Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ! Your poem is really beautiful *__* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1978 Posted August 5, 2013 Share Posted August 5, 2013 @ Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hotoke Posted August 5, 2013 Share Posted August 5, 2013 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Congratulations! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shio Posted August 5, 2013 Share Posted August 5, 2013 congrat Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ur song is amazing, i admit defeat tho. *bows* ^____^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AceyDey Posted August 5, 2013 Share Posted August 5, 2013 congrats Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss Blank Posted August 6, 2013 Share Posted August 6, 2013 omodetou Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. !!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nephilim Posted August 6, 2013 Share Posted August 6, 2013 O.O I'm feeling really shy right now with this. I looked at all the messages a couple times and my name's still on them so I guess this is real :cuteonion41: Thanks to Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. (I'm looking forward to the set) and to whoever else looked at my poem and liked it and to the poeple who dropped me a congrats. I liked reading everyone's work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted August 6, 2013 Share Posted August 6, 2013 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. , You have no preferences about the set? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nephilim Posted August 6, 2013 Share Posted August 6, 2013 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Oh sorry I thought you were going to make me one freestyle. If I'm allowed to choose I'd love Natsume from Natsume Yuujinchou if possible. Do you need images? I'd be happy with anything if it's nice as yours you have on now. Thank you again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pokeyspot Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Congrats! It was a lovely poem... great name by the way ^u^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted August 10, 2013 Share Posted August 10, 2013 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. , I am done with the signature! (: If you want something changed, please do tell me. I shall correct myself. (: Use the link provided in the html box with P.S The spoiler stretches the image,so do not worry why it looks so stretched. Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. alt='1zve4j7.jpg'> http://oi42.tinypic.com/1zve4j7.jpg http://oi44.tinypic.com/314thtx.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hushbeans Posted August 15, 2013 Share Posted August 15, 2013 congratulations Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. :hamtaro-005 (23): Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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