Saga Posted August 5, 2013 Share Posted August 5, 2013 _________ YaoiOtaku's Music Box _____________________ ͒ Breathless ͒ Graphic by AomineDaiki Organized by Saga ̢Approved by Key .. Information This month theme shall be Breathless YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people that love music and love to write poems, or simply song lyrics. Giving chance to show your feelings about the current theme and in general - how do you interpret it. We have picked a certain song, based on its melody you have to write down either a poem or a song lyrics. Of course,it's up to you how you name it,as long as you mention once the word 'Breatheless' in the content. .. Rules * Post only one poem/song lyrics text. * No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political and no child/animal abuse themes. * Minimum 4 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs. * Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/song lyrics. * The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything,depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody. It's instrumental. * Post the final result on this thread. * Read the rules again, just in case. .. Prizes Each user that applies to 'Music Box' contest will get 2,000 points The winner will get 5,000 points + 1 Secret Garden themed set made by Saga + 1 Manga Cover card .. Song .. Deadline Stars: 05.08.2013 Ends: 31.08.2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yunake Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 So, this could have been either a poem or lyrics for the song but since they go with the song timeline, I put some guides on how to follow it with the song. Air (0:20) You are here but I am not... and I can't seem to pull myself... together There's no reason for the speach nor for the lies. (0:47) I... can't... take... it anymore. (0:55) Why must I hurt so much like this... when I've tried so very hard... I... can't... fight... screaming forever in my mind, a fear I can't subside. (1:22) I... can't... take... it... anymore. (1:30) There's no reason for me to stay... Yet there's still so much to say... nothing to hold on... And I am left so breathless... tears falling down. (1:58) I... I will fly... I will fly... I will fly... I... will... fly...away. Fly... so far away. (2:43) From here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chelx09 Posted August 10, 2013 Share Posted August 10, 2013 Hmmm.. Just gonna try~ :cuteonion24: But I'm not really good at this.. onion5 onion10 onionn7 onion7 :8onion74: lol.. onion0 I need you I am all alone right now, Thinking 'bout the things we've done.. All the memories we've shared, yeah It was pain Pain.. But then.. Why I'm crying when you're gone? I'm feeling helpless that I'd fall, I'd die, babe I am breathless without you, oh without you, you... Oh why? Why'd you leave me in the dark? What'd you do that I love you? I love you... But I know that you do not.. not anymore no... Please go back.. I can't breath.. I need you.. You and your heart.. Please, go back to me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shio Posted August 13, 2013 Share Posted August 13, 2013 when i listen to this song, i really feel the rain upon my body :Red_fox4: REGRET In the silent street... All i can see is a dead body... He wear a jacket and jeans like i did... My tear flow. As I fear 'cause I'm dead... No... That can't make me cry... But why my tear fall? As if i miss someone... GOD... Please give my life back GOD... Please give me a chance... even a minute... Let me tell her... "I LOVE U" Wind please give this breathless body strength... Strength to go to her... Even i struggle... Even I cry... The person i see already died. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1978 Posted August 19, 2013 Share Posted August 19, 2013 By your side Since the day we’ve known Feeling like the moon glow Melting my heart like April snow But I never show How much you really mean to me When I’m with you I always think we do That we are the perfect two No doubts and no clues Just you and me, it’s alright Every day, seeing your smile Wanna hold you tight All around seems so bright To win your heart, I’d fight To have you by my side, I’d dedicate my life to you At this moment, you’re here with me Can’t you see how much I’m happy? Near you, I’m so lucky Put my trust down on your knees My stomach’s filled with butterflies Run to me, when you feel blue Come to me, I am here for you Tell me, I always listen it through Look at me, I won’t make a fool If you only knew, I’m gonna love you til the end… @ Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marygrace94 Posted August 22, 2013 Share Posted August 22, 2013 this is my first time entering a contest since i am too busy with school related stuff.. so here goes: LOVE i had never loved someone but it doesn't mean that i cant..ooh! all my life i have longed for something.. to experience what love is.. And now that i met you i've known how sweet love is, love brings all types of happiness and it leaves me breathless but why? why did you leave me? am i not enough? in the eerie night, i miss you all i could think about is you.. now i know, that love is not all about happiness in love, there is sadness love is both happiness and sadness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
juugatsuni Posted August 23, 2013 Share Posted August 23, 2013 first attempt from joining a contest. > n not really confident with poetry but this sounds interesting so i gave it a shot. well, i tried. lol where am i...am i here again? what exactly is this place? i don't remember... it feels familiar.. so nostalgic... conforting sounds from the air...it's calling me.. walking alone..no one else is there besides me... all in monochrome...dyed all in gray... unsure of surroundings...but it feels like home.. comforting sounds from the air...it's right beside me... after a while...my heart felt heavier.. "what...what's this?" wheezing from pain.. ah...it hurts..what's happening? breathless...my vision blurred as i try to keep walking... "wait...where are you? ...what are you? i want to know why..why am i here?... i don't understand... what did exactly happened?" i repeat the questions over and over... seeking answers from the air...it's abandoning me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limbo Posted August 25, 2013 Share Posted August 25, 2013 Beyond Recollection -:20- Stepping stones to far from reach Tainted hope to soft to keep Grayness in the sky appears, here Breathless thoughts, last -:52- Memories, faintly etched into our minds Fragments of space left in time Don't, look, back What you see might leave you numb Lost, reminiscence, gone -1:27- Nostalgia, drawing streaks across the sky Feelings hide behind the mind One, more, time Endure everlasting fear, still Waves crashing, tall -2:03- Breathless thoughts Musing dreams Abstract trance Once, you and me -2:32- Dark, the ground around Sankyuu~ \(^0^(\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tetsu Posted August 28, 2013 Share Posted August 28, 2013 Entering!! Memories of You and Me I. Crying in a corner,I... reminisce our memories... of the past Letting go,the withered rose... swayed ....to the wet ...floor II. I remember when you smile next to me How I wish to see that smile.. Once Again even if that's meant for some~one.. else... I ...don't care III. The strong wind blows with my thoughts of you I pray with all my heart, that those may reach you If not, I'll pray one last time, that ...you may not... forget CODA I called for you.., I'm breathless... I stretched my hands as I see you walk.. But nothing reached you ... *whispers at the end* Goodbye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anime_Maniac_Leia Posted August 28, 2013 Share Posted August 28, 2013 Hello~ I'm entering!! and this is my entry!! ^O^ --------------------------------------------------> Drowning 1) The sky, so tender it seems. The grass, it's greenery which spreads. The wind, whose cool breezes calm my inner beast. And you, who locked me in a sweet trance. 2) The sea... It's unexplained beauty, Which tardily sucks you in. Just like you; A tempting diamond, Who hypnotized me in your words and actions. 3) The sand feels so soft to touch, So harmless and kind. I remember of your touch;which makes me sink, Into a deep fantasy, even if it only lasts seconds. 4) The sea is so dangerous yet kind. It makes me recall about you, So similar are you two. So alike, that it breaks my heart. Since I still keep wondering; Why did you do that? 5) I am drowning... You pushed me, leaving me dumbfounded... I am drowning... But I can't bring my heart to hate you... 6) I am drowning... They say me, I shouldn't forgive you... I am drowning... But I accept this answer of yours... 7) I am drowning... I don't have much time left; so I'll tell you now... I am drowning... Your my most precious; so I will tell you... 8) I love you; So please forget me... I'll remember you; So please erase all my memories about you... I'll forgive you; So please don't kill yourself... I'm drowning; And thank you... I'm drowning; I'm reaching the bottom... I'm drowning; Bye... Farewell, beloved. Ah! finally~! Oh yeah, I want to thank this competition, because I can finally write my poem (same but somewhat different) in peace ^_^, Thankies~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted August 31, 2013 Author Share Posted August 31, 2013 || END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ || [YaoiOtaku BREATHLESS Contest] Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest! The choice has been really hard since all of you are skilled and talented. The winner of ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ [YaoiOtaku BREATHLESS Contest] is KawaiiMe with their song lyrics 'Beyond Recollection'. As promised everyone who participated will get 2,000 points. The winner wins as follow, - 5,000 points - 1 Secret Garden themed set made by Saga - 1 Manga Cover card □▦▦□ Application for Spring themed Set □▦▦□ Main theme color: Picture to be used (optional): ALT. Colors: □▦▦□ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dai Posted August 31, 2013 Share Posted August 31, 2013 Congrats Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Your poem is *__* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dev Posted August 31, 2013 Share Posted August 31, 2013 Howdy doo yall! This is my submission for the Music Box contest under the theme Breathless. Lyrics in this clicky box + a recorded version of the song for visualisation purposes. The moral or story my song is painting is not crystal clear to me, I was trying to put down thoughts and emotions in a way that felt true to me. The result, this song Apologies for the volume of the vocals as at some points it is really quiet. I was whispering the song for a stylistic effect. Title: Expectations 0:20 Why don't we just say goodbye, Feels like death personified, Do we classify as a lie, Take a breath, and I shall try, to find you peace. 0:55 Fitting a square into a circle, Same old game almost eternal, You unnerve but say I deserve, What is worse, than to observe, Crumbling all around me. 1:30 Always breathless from your touch, When was all affection lost, Feels so cold all too much, now Slipping through, My finger tips, Do you not like me. 2:10 Memories, Misty coloured memories, Of the way we were, Now that you are mine, Locked inside, My kill of the night. Recorded version is Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Hope you enjoy! Take care and god bless, Dev - - - Updated - - - Omgosh I was late in submitting... *sad face* Maybe next time Congratulations Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limbo Posted September 1, 2013 Share Posted September 1, 2013 Congrats Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Your poem is *__* Aw, thank you so much :3 I appreciate your comment! Btw, I forgot to add on the orig. thread but all my work is copyrighted "officially" 2013-2014 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chelx09 Posted September 1, 2013 Share Posted September 1, 2013 Wah! Omedetou Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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