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So guys! I'm basically new here and I was hoping if there are some wattpad authors/readers in this forum I just made a yaoi story and I thought you guys could give it a read and if you have made a story don't be shy you can share it here also! i enjoy reading yaoi even though its text based :DD

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Okay I'm done reading it :o

Lemme tell you some tips...

 

Firstly, you have to put a (boyxboy) beside the title to warn some people that are... um... Homophobic?

 

Secondly, even if it is really troublesome, you have to write the story properly in either a first person manner or a third person way. Not put it like it's some sort of video.

 

Sam:Sorry Max!

 

Max:Eh? You know my name?

 

Write it this way:

 

As Sam rushed out of his house in panic, he bumped into someone he did not expect to meet. "Hey watch it! Moron!" Sam looked up, and came face to face with a person glaring at him. "Sorry Max!" Sam apologized quickly to the person before attempting to get away.

 

"Eh? You know my name?" Max asked him curiously. Sam froze in his tracks, unsure of what to say. He need to get to school! He shuffled his feet to the direction he was heading slowly replying quickly,"Eh...Yes!I mean no!... I mean bye!" with that, he ran as if he was on fire to get to school quickly, leaving the speechless Max behind him.

 

Was that a bit too much? I tend to overdo things a little bit...:hamtaro-005 (21):

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