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YaoiOtaku's Music Box

❆❆ Pandora Dreams

 

❆❆ Information

This month theme shall be Pandora Dreams.

YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people

that love music and love to write poems,

or simply song lyrics.

 

Giving chance to show your feelings

about the current theme and in general - how do you interpret it.

We have picked a certain song,

based on its melody you have to write down

either a poem or a song lyrics.

Of course,it's up to you how you name it,as long as you mention once

'Pandora Dreams' in the content.

 

❆❆ Rules


    [*=left] Post only one poem/song lyrics text.

    [*=left] No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political and no child/animal abuse themes.
    [*=left] Minimum 4 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs.

    [*=left] Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/song lyrics.
    [*=left] The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything,depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody. It's instrumental.
    [*=left] Post the final result on this thread.
    [*=left] Read the rules again, just in case.

 

❆❆ Prizes

Each user that applies to 'Music Box' contest will get 2,000 points

The winner will get 5,000 points + 1 Pandora Dreams themed set made by Saga + 1 Manga Cover card

 

❆❆ Song

 

❆❆ Deadline

Starts -> 02.12.2013

Ends -> 31.12.2013

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Come Back

 

 

A pillow of tears

Is all that you left me

A night-time of fear

Is all I know

Won't you come back

Come back to me darling

 

Don't you see that the sky is turning grey

Come back my Pandora Dreams

take me away, from this cold place.

It's cold here without you.

The sky is no longer shining

 

My fear is kicking in

It's no longer safe here

Come back my Pandora Dreams

Come back to me

Come back and be here

 

I need you right now

I'm still shaking

Remembering that promise you have made to me

So Pandora, will you come back..

Will you give me back my Dreams?

 

Cold cold dreams

Are all that I know now

Night-times of tears

Are all that I have

Won't you come back

Come back to me my Pandora Dreams

 

 

{Sorry if it sucks. x.x Not so good with lyrics.}

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Bye bye Love

 

 

 

 

 

 

Since the day we've belonged together

everything seemed brighter

You are my dream catcher

Happier, greater we feel so far...

 

The day you'd come to me

You'd know, you'd know

I couldn't get my eyes off of you

You've been so true

You're real, you're my ideal

Who I'd let my soul into..

 

 

But now..

New one, who's just come in

Made a mess all within...

No more THREE, it's a sin

It's alright

I should give in..

 

 

Am I dreaming?

Am I sinking?

Am I thinking of too much myself?

But now..

Both of you are laughing there...

No more despair..

 

Let me go,

I'll be gone

Just for you......

 

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  • 2 weeks later...

Pandora's Slumber

 

I took in a long, mysterious slumber.

My body felt as light as a feather.

I was then entering into my delusion,

A Dream where my curiosity prevails.

 

I saw you simpered at me,

And then all the wildest fears flee.

I was in an Oblivion, a bliss, unknown oblivion.

But then you were there, so nothing else mattered.

 

I then opened my eyes and woke up.

The stars shone, their light reflected to me.

I knew then that dreams are like Pandora's box.

 

Open and enter it with eager curiosity, and then in the end,

I am the one who will be sad.

To fall in a deep slumber with wonderful phantasms

Is a huge gamble.

 

 

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I Can't Cry

 

Day by day, has now passed

When the time lived memories of togetherness

Now, I had to take a new path

It must be difficult For Me To Forget About You

 

Your face is so beautiful

Your smile is so my everything

But I Realize, It's Hard To Be Together

And I'm Not The One You Wanted.

 

This heart is always chaos

Screaming and rumble

This heart still feels pain

Imprisoned and twisted

 

But, I can not cry

My heart cries for you

Honestly!! I still love you

I still miss you.

 

 

Hope You Like It! :hamtaro-005 (4): It's A Poem By The Way:hamtaro-005 (5):

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Like Shattered Glass

 

-:10-

 

Drifted petals amongst wind

Broken glass seeps within the skin

There's no pain diluting these scattered senses

Is it me or have I finally lost my way

Back to dawn where the stars start to yawn

And we're overcome with desire

 

-1:12-

 

How can we fight it?

And how should we see it?

What is the meaning of things uncompleted?

What are emotions?

And how void is my voice?

 

-1:27-

 

Can you hear our echos?

Is there fear in choices?

In truth what are we told?

How are we reflected?

What to do when the whole world is enlightened?

 

-1:43-

 

Can sense make us stronger?

It is the journey inside

That makes us feel like

Were ready to give up and die

But here we are making the most of this

Pandora of Dreams

 

Copyrighted © Devana 2013-2014

 

 

 

 

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Before i just want to explain a bit what i wrote.

I thought of the legend of the Pandora Box. Once it was open all the evil things were set free but the hope was left inside the box. (or so i read ^^'' )

What i pictured was a person as the box. If we are opened, then all the bad things (including dreams) are gone and we keep the hope of a better day and our minds clean from the things others try to impose on us.

what i used to open that box was Love. (as in friend, family or lover)

anyway, i hope you enjoy it! :D

 

 

PS: i suggest to start reading only after 0:10. i think it has more impact that way. :p

 

 

Awakening

 

The weight of expectations on my shoulders,

The words of the others stuck on my mind,

The ways of society pulling me down,

Forging these chains to keep me from leaving.

My entity is gone,

I lost track of myself.

My freedom was taken from me

The moment I was born into this dark and suffocating hell.

 

But you gave me your hand,

Your warmth made me fly,

You broke free from that prison

People like to call normality,

Just to save my wandering soul

And teach me the ways of freedom.

 

The Pandora was open,

The dreams imposed on me flew away.

Now I clearly see the sun rising

And the hope of a new world shinnying.

All the new dreams I want for myself,

Running alongside the happiness you gave me.

The little box on my mind opened at once,

Setting me free from the old predefined norms,

Clearing away all those stereotyped thoughts,

Awakening my heart to the wonders of singularity.

 

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.:: Pandemonium Promises ::.

 

Hey, have you seen

the tears that I shed?

The sound of my grief

in the depth of my heart?

 

"Where have you been?"

That's all I thought

as those dancing lights

waves their goodbyes

you left me in the dark

and let the light out

to fade away.

 

"Where I had been,

When you are by my side?"

My fault that I let you went away

or is it your fault leaving me

to this lost world

of perturbed heart.

 

You lunged at me with...

Pandora Dream.

 

My heart and my mind

the shades of the darkness

that you create in this world

were nothing but despair.

You left me all alone

to face this unseen days

like the dream I saw somewhere

when you still here with me

When you said you will love me

but it turns out the wrong way

that the promise you spoke of

won't stop weighting my life...

 

And so

raise the truth

and that is all I see.

Pandemonium.

 

 

Submitting my entry (:

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Dancing Alone

 

Shadows they fall, and fireflies glow

Crickets they sing, guarding our grove of trees

Nightmares they fade, and fairy flutes play

1,2,3,4 Moonlight leads the way

 

And now here I stand

Humming to myself, our song from long, long ago

The music plays, and I dance alone

 

My heart whispers, "Come to me

For in my dreams you are my Pandora.

So please, take my hand

And dance slowly with me."

 

I sway back and forth and pretend you are here

Your warm arms, they will hold me

No more pain, no more tears

You'll say that you love me and holding my hand

You will teach me to dance, with sweet words I can't stand

As I waltz 'cross the floor, I will whisper you name

And my heart will glow bright, with the dream of this moment

 

Your arms start to fade

And the dream inside me is slowly decaying

Fading into the hole in my heart, that can no longer be filled anymore

And I dance alone

 

 

First time doing this, I hope it's ok...

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|| END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ ||

[YaoiOtaku Pandora of Dreams Contest]

 

Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest!

The choice has been really hard since all of you are skilled and talented.

The winner of ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ [YaoiOtaku Pandora of Dreams] is

Ariard with

their piece 'Like Shattered Glass'.

 

 

As promised everyone who participated will get 2,000 points.

 

 

The winner wins as follow,

- 5,000 points

- 1 themed set made by gin

- 1 Manga Cover card

Note: This month's reward will be made by gin. (:

 

▦▦□ Application for the themed Set □▦▦

Main theme color:

Picture to be used (optional):

ALT. Colors:

▦▦

 

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Congrats!!!! :D

It was really good!! i even felt like singing along your lyrics! ^_^

Also congrats to everyone else as well! ;D

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Thanks so much you guys! I liked all your poems too (for those of you who entered). I'm looking forward to the next contest to see who wins. Keep writing!

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