AomineDaiki Posted January 3, 2014 Share Posted January 3, 2014 Graphic by AomineDaiki Organized by Saga ̢Approved by Key YaoiOtaku's Music Box ❆❆ Do You Remember? ❆❆ Information This month theme shall be ''Do you remember?''. YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people that love music and love to write poems, or simply song lyrics. Giving chance to show your feelings about the current theme and in general - how do you interpret it. We have picked a certain song, based on its melody you have to write down either a poem or a song lyrics. Of course,it's up to you how you name it,as long as you mention once 'Do You Remember?' in the content. ❆❆ Rules Post only one poem/song lyrics text. No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political and no child/animal abuse themes. Minimum 4 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs. Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/song lyrics. The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything,depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody. It's instrumental. Post the final result on this thread. Read the rules again, just in case. ❆❆ Prizes Each user that applies to 'Music Box' contest will get 2,000 points The winner will get 5,000 points + 1 ''Do You Remember?'' themed set made by Saga + 1 Manga Cover card ❆❆ Song ❆❆ Deadline Starts -> 03.01.2014 Ends -> 31.01.2014 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CutiePie Posted January 6, 2014 Share Posted January 6, 2014 Joining~! This Is Poem ------------------- The Old Times you are very perfect for me. my heart started to beat whenever you are near to me. i'm always blushing whenever i see you smiling. that moment was the very first time.. i started to fall in love with people. but..i heard that you are going to leave me.. i was very sad.. i though that we're meant to be together. i never though that my first love will be destroyed. i see you cried that you heard your about to leave. i think that your the one who are really in pain.. this will be the last time we see eachother.. i decided to force a smile.. i wanted to make you smile.. but i never can't... please! atleast give me a chance! i wanted to see your smile so bad..but i never can't.. ------------------------------- ack it looks like a story! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatichan Posted January 22, 2014 Share Posted January 22, 2014 I'm joining, too. This is my poem: Morning Rain The first raindrops began to tumble that day, Pattering gently, steadily, quietly yet continuously onto the succulent green leaves Of the branches of the trees that protected your former driveway The day had yet to properly awaken The chirpings of the earliest birds whispering to us as we gazed out into the shadowy world A light breeze was whistling mournfully, Sending the pearls of rain as a caress against our sleep-drunken faces I wanted to remain inside where it was warm, But the beauty of the stirring world mirrored in your poignant eyes Had me following you out to greet the rousing dawn, My face welcomed by the tender drizzle and the morning’s freshness I breathed in and never before, it seemed, had I properly tasted the sweetness of a sunrise Do? You led the way as you wandered out into the brand new day, Your naked feet dancing over the puddles holding Nature’s Gift of Life Your smile as you stretched your arms out and twirled around to me The watery beads surrounding your head like a sparkling halo that reflected the sleepy sun Matched the dreamlike beauty of the promising blue-pink hue in the sky above Its fingertips streaking across the firmament to chase away the darkness You took my hand as we passed beneath those silently guarding trees The steady, musical stream of raindrops cascading onto us gently I close my eyes now and still hear its tinkling footsteps as it fell Onto you and me and the damp, soft earth of the driveway The droplets bouncing into the miniature pools and dispersing As you led me into the world that was suddenly so mysteriously novel You? You planned to take me for a romantic walk, yet We didn’t go far because a sadness unknownst to me suddenly overwhelmed you, Standing in the middle of your garden with the brittle roses and sleepy daffodils Your lovely smile grew into one of great sorrow As you spied the little bird lying at the foot of that sturdy old oak While all around us Life awoke and peered out into the timid daylight All you could see was the solitary being no longer able to admire the first light’s beauty And there under the unfaltering, muted earthward descent Meant to cleanse the world of old pain, memories and hurt of a previous day You knelt at the foot of that Quercus and cried for that little fledgling Hearing neither the cheerily chirping chickadee nor the cleverly cowering cat- You only had eyes for the Unlucky that was no more. Remember? And there in the rain, My lungs expanding as I shivered from the cold I realized exactly what you meant to me Had I stayed inside where it was warm, I would not so soon have discovered The kindness, magnitude and depth of your compassion As I held you close, my arms and the rainfall knitting you a blanket My heart constricted at the thought of your someday becoming my Doomed Bird And my voice trembled as I whispered those three words into your ear for the first time Now, years later, as the heavens open and my old friend the rain once more begins to tumble I notice you’ve stopped to stare out the window as well and I wonder, If that day is as ever present to you as it is to me, yet I dare not ask you My Love, Do you remember? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss RED Posted January 29, 2014 Share Posted January 29, 2014 It starts from 0.18s Forever Tomorrow Heed the wounded heart and fall back to my arms lay on a warmer bed - away you from harms! Howl of wind leap the face pleasant cold feels cool hear the heart and say - "Sleep my child, forget all." Whispers of daylight rays crept makes it way into the chamber some wild dawn begins to crack a new day has appear! Oh, do you remember? The hovel is no more this humdrum life is gone no tears are shed anymore hope just outside the door days of humour - this is home. Around fills with sound of rhyme songs of joy amuse and shine return us abandon the time a lifelong that should be mine! Will tomorrow come forever? Adjourn those moments should never. Will this sensations waver? That is not for us to hold together. Rest your dither, my dear and chase away your fear for tomorrow will come for sure. Thank you for reading this poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss Blank Posted January 30, 2014 Share Posted January 30, 2014 Endless steps In my dream I'm sure I saw it all The petals that falling like snow drop again and again When I one step behind you Follow every step you take With this helpless falling sensation Endless end of spring Maybe the petals that wither on the ground will be forgotten Because it fly too far from the tree I know I shouldn't be chase after you But if I do it I won't remember you And you won't remember me When just a little bit close to you When I try reach it just seems to fade away But I won't let this take me down Even with helpless falling sensation that full in me I will continue to take every step you take and chase you So one day when I get in front of you I can say the thing that has forgotten And ask if you do remember me And you will feel this like the very first time we meet In the storm of sakura in the end of spring Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 || END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ || [YaoiOtaku Do You Remember Contest] Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest! The choice has been really hard since all of you are skilled and talented. The winner of ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ [YaoiOtaku Do You Remember] is Gatichan with their piece 'Morning Rain'. As promised everyone who participated will get 2,000 points. The winner wins as follow, - 5,000 points - 1 themed set made by Saga - 1 Manga Cover card □▦▦□ Application for the themed Set □▦▦□ Main theme color: Picture to be used (optional): ALT. Colors: □▦▦□ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Macys Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 Congrats Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ! :hamtaro-005 (12): Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss RED Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 Haha, congratulation dear Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatichan Posted February 1, 2014 Share Posted February 1, 2014 Thank you, dear Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. and dear Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ! :-) And thank you for the prize YO- it was a lovely surprise to come home to after a long and tiring seminar day! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted February 4, 2014 Share Posted February 4, 2014 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. , Your set is done. Use the link provided in html box for better quality. If you want changes, PM me! (: http://i60.tinypic.com/2i6e8tc.jpg http://i61.tinypic.com/2rhtjwj.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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