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YaoiOtaku's Music Box

MisUnderstood

 

 

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Organized by

Saga

̢Approved by

Key

 

 

.. Information

This month theme shall be ''Misunderstood''.

YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people

that love music and love to write poems,

or simply song lyrics.

 

Giving chance to show your feelings

about the current theme and in general - how do you interpret it.

We have picked a certain song,

based on its melody you have to write down

either a poem or a song lyrics.

Of course,it's up to you how you name it,as long as you mention once

'Misunderstood' in the content.

 

 

.. Rules

* Post only one poem/song lyrics text.

* No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political and no child/animal abuse themes.

* Minimum 4 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs.

* Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/song lyrics.

* The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything,depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody. It's instrumental.

* Post the final result on this thread.

* Read the rules again, just in case.

 

 

.. Prizes

Each user that applies to 'Music Box' contest will get 2,000 points

The winner will get 5,000 points + 1 ''Misunderstood'' themed set made by Saga + 1 Manga Cover card

 

 

.. Song

 

 

.. Deadline

Starts ->02.02.2014

Ends ->02.28.2014

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Awhile Break

 

Every seconds you're in my mind

in this desolate heart

while I'm still here

you left me without a reason

you left me without an answer

 

Calm your wrath down

I believe in you

that this is all nothing

but misunderstood

nothing more I'm sure

 

Look into my eyes

and you'll understand

I can't bear this

walking this lone path

without you

 

Realizing my own weaknesses

to mend myself better

but you become more distant

you left me without a reason

you left me without an answer

 

Calm your wrath down

before those lies

seep through your mind

I can't live without you

not this way

 

- - -

Different people, different thought. [song/Poem]

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~The Face~

in a thousand countries where i found you.

the smiling face of a handsome young man i loved.

will be soon to change, as a frowned look.

 

a beautiful blue-eyes always will changed.

a cute attitude will always be changed.

the beauty will always be changed.

 

because of my thinkingless attitude.

i always misunderstand you.

your smile, your stare, your attitude, the beauty was all for me.

 

but i though it was all for your friends, not me.

but i guess i was wrong.

i will always misunderstand our love.

 

 

doesn't look like a poem, i could say. well i think so. I THINK.

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  • 2 weeks later...

My submission:

 

 

- Believe Yourself -

 

00:15

Togetherness is where we can find our strength to live on,

Cause what we have will take us through,

No matter where I'll find you,

Like a ball game back and forth,

Want you to belive in me and what we stand for.

 

And I love you so deeply,

Just want you to see me,

I was born to make you happy.

I may be a little crazy,

Stop thinking and just do,

You are not misunderstood.

 

01:16

Let me be your puppet on a string,

I will do whatever you want me to,

Let us turn back time and start over again,

Cause what we have, it's just not worth it,

Baby let us be right here,

Freeze this moment,

it's not misunderstood.

 

02:14

Believe yourself,

This love is not misunderstood.

 

 

DEMO with my vocals:

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Personal notes:

There is a rhyming element but this is more of a ballad/song than a poem.

I really hope you like it and enjoy it as much as I did whilst writing it

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Here's my poem. It's an Acrostic- that means that if you read the first letter of each line, you'll find a "secret" message there ;-) I hope you enjoy it.

 

 

 

Remorseful Regret

 

Pete’s old café, where we used to play our guitars on a small stage to earn some extra cash

 

Looking at each other, I’d strum my classical guitar while you improvised on your electric one

 

Experimentally, I’d strike some chords and you’d put your whole heart into your music,

 

Allowing me and our listeners to know of the sorrow, pain and anguish inside your heart

 

Still I remember the dizzying and intense crescendo cries of your guitar that followed woeful accords

 

Each one harmonizing with the slow, careful plucks of my ringed hand.

 

 

Fridays were our nights- you’d drive in west from Baltimore to meet me in Ellicott City,

 

Our time together was short but so sweet,

 

Right until the night the café owner’s son showed up to listen to our jamming,

 

Gorgeously smiling as he moved his foot in time to your woeful guitar wails

 

I saw you were interested in him by the way you stopped playing near the end of our piece

 

Vertigo overcame me at the smiles that passed between the two of you and that night

 

Enraged that you’d betrayed me, I colorfully told you I never wanted to see you again

 

 

Mercurial as I was, I instantly regretted my words the next day and tried to call you, to apologize

 

Every attempt to reach you, however, failed: after that night, I never saw you again

 

 

Many Fridays I returned to Pete’s old café, but I continue to sit alone on that stage

 

If only you hadn’t misunderstood me and realized I’d felt nothing but insecurity and jealousy

 

Coming back here breaks my heart, because I still see you opposite me on this stage

 

Hear your resonant creations, can imagine your peaceful smile as you gaze into my eyes

 

And yet, I know not where you are nowadays, although I overheard Pete say his son was engaged

 

Embarrassed, disillusioned and filled with regret that I lost you over such a trivial cause

 

Loving you forever, I now sit alone on our old stage, strumming my guitar and losing hope as the music fades

 

 

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|| END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ ||

[YaoiOtaku Misunderstood Contest]

 

Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest!

The choice has been really hard since all of you are skilled and talented.

The winner of ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ [YaoiOtaku Misunderstood] is

Miss R.E.D with

their piece 'Different people, different thought'.

 

 

As promised everyone who participated will get 2,000 points.

 

 

The winner wins as follow,

- 5,000 points

- 1 themed set made by Saga

- 1 Manga Cover card

 

▦▦□ Application for the themed Set □▦▦

Main theme color:

Picture to be used (optional):

ALT. Colors:

▦▦

 

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I kinda don't know what to say but THANK YOU! ^^

 

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I have to fill in for the theme set...

Means I just have to write it here, right?

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Main theme color -Dark blue.

Picture to be used -

 

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What is the diffrences between 'main theme color' and 'ALT. color' ..?

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|| The difference is mainly laid in my brain XD. If one of your main colors don't match something in my head, I use your ALT. colors [alternative]. So this way, I can have a bit more freedom when I throw the imagination there. (:

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Okay,

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Give me what you've got. It makes your work easier and I don't actually mind (=

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Your set is done. Sorry for the delay, I had some block. I hope you'll like the outcome. If you want something changed, do say. Use the links in the html box for better quality. (:

 

 

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