SCAR Posted April 2, 2014 Share Posted April 2, 2014 again i ll say GLAD U WROTE IT SWEETHEART ! **em a big fan of urs now** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helya Posted April 2, 2014 Share Posted April 2, 2014 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Whoo pretty fast with the update Rai-nichan xD O my my Hibiki so thoroughly, he made sure everything was done and didn't forget a thing. Perfection. Is not often to see a man who take so much time to care about himself, usually womenkind do all those things. His clothing were indeed very gorgeouse, hell he's gorgeouse but this thing just made this *woooaa* noise in my head. V neckline Gucci onion3 Omg and what came next makes him even hotter, i can die happy xD *Aoi you gorgeouse son of a ....* All that preparation and i still look like dog shit compared to this guy... There's no doubt, when you're hot, then you're hot lol, you can't be competed by some other guy no matter how much he try to. And after ALL this, you make him a God, and people look him as a God, poor Hibiki, he's so small now. Everytime i said ''there would not be something better than this'' you came up with something better. Now after the god thing i said it again, and yet you came with something even better, that's it i won't say it again. But still so hot "kyaaaa!" im one of those girls too:Red_fox: H: Oh no stupid penis, dont wake up now!! OMG onion0 is imposible not to say something Hi-bi-ki come on man *pffhehe* haaa :Red_fox7:*swallow empty while read* ummm...ammm...ummm what can i say? there are some things happening here *delicious* "Ha..ha,." Aoi you dirty perv... So there is another one, and he looks pretty much like Hibiki. Im curiouse to see what is he going to say to the actual stalker. Rai-nichan, my dear friend, this ch was (i don't really have the words to say it) fabulicious. Full of hot guys( 'till the end) hot moments, and the description was amazing like always starting with the clothes and 'till the end. Those hot stuff, were really well done (there are still in my head) :3 mmm... If there would be an anime about this, it will be full with hot guys xD Hurry up and do the next one. *hugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhye_Meow Posted April 2, 2014 Author Share Posted April 2, 2014 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. -The grey V neckline Gucci was so gorgeous .. i will look good in Aoi -Hibiki is a funny guy! Isnt he? Dog sh*t! Pfft. -the fangirls with the kyaaaa! Its a marvelous sound.. every yaoi otaku does that from time to time. -oh no.. the stupid P.. XD -yes Aoi, is one sexy perv.. id love to live in his.. *beep beep* -thanks Mia-chan im really hapoy to read your point by point critique. It makes me smile and giggle. Im hapoy aboutthe anime but im unworthy of such praise.. but still makes me really happy. Thank you! Il try to give a good newchapter! - - - Updated - - - ^sorry for the typos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helya Posted April 2, 2014 Share Posted April 2, 2014 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. -yes Aoi, is one sexy perv.. id love to live in his.. *beep beep* let me say it uncensored it was: in his skin right? *giggling* leaf2 ^sorry for the typos The story captivate me, so i didn't see any. *wispering, i know the next one will be very good as well* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhye_Meow Posted April 5, 2014 Author Share Posted April 5, 2014 CHAPTER NINE It was raining hard that night, with thunder and lightning adding to the tention. Hibiki sat akwardly at the sofa and begun to fidget. H: Man i feel like a mistress being question by the legal wife...Ack! I forgot to ask if he likes a drink... "Uhm, Ueda-san you don't have to be nervous about me. I only came here because Zelig... i mean Walter-san - Aoi's father ask me to." Kaname was stuttering and sweating a little in explaining the details why he was here. It appears he is uncomfortable with the situation as well. H: Oh no! The father in law already is sending me a message! "Why would Walter-san would send you here?" Hibiki tilt his head and act like he is relax. H: I've been in tougher shits before. You can't fucking intimidate me. Kaname is taken aback by Hibiki's sudden change of confidence. "Ueda-san i'm sure you knew Aoi is not a normal person, yes?" "Sure." H: Sure, he's filthy rich who likes attention and has menthal issues. "Then here..take this Ueda-san." Kaname gave a brown envelope to Hibiki. When he opened it he saw police reports, medical records that he haven't read, and alot of ...pictures... "This.. is this? " Hibiki was so shock that his face paled vehemently. Kaname just nodded. "I can't believe this!" Hibiki stand and press his temples. Then started to pace the living room. "Ueda-san, let me help you.." *** "You can go home Charlie. We're done for the day." Aoi instructed his secretary as he gave him the last papers that needed his signature. "Thank you sir, have a good night. " Charlie gave him coffee and leave the room slowly. Ring . Aoi's cellphone for personal calls rang and the screen showed it's coming from Hibiki.. "What a pleasant surprise.. what can i do for you?" Aoi reclined in his chair, loosen his tie and lit up a cigarette. "Aoi- can we meet for dinner now. I'm outside your building." Hibiki said. "Ho..actually. Just come up here, i'm at my office." Aoi cut the line and smirk. A: What are you planning to do little rat.. Knock. A few moments later, Hibiki was escorted by the guards at Aoi's office. The room was elegant , with modern architectural structures. Although Hibiki isn't there to marvel at Aoi's taste in furniture and interior design. Aoi was sitting in his black chair, behind his massive brown desk. His hair was tied in a neat pony tail behind his head, but a few rogue hair was dangling besides his forehead. He was wearing a black formal shirt with the top unbuttoned. His tie and jacket was place at his table. He was giving a relax office man look, something Hibiki hasn't seen. Aoi looked at Hibiki and smiled an amused smile. He took a drag at the his cigarette and rest it the expensive looking ash tray. "Come in. Locked the door." Aoi stood up revealing an untucked shirt. He went and pour two shot glasses that looks like a bourbon. He wriggle his hand and point at the small sofa, and eyed Hibiki. A: He seemed... different.. Hibiki followed and sat relaxly at the sofa. Aoi sat on the sofa beside Hibiki and gave him the drink. "Why would you revert your hair back to original color,hmm? Though.." Aoi drank his bourbon and rest the glass at the coffee table. He leaned his face towards Hibiki's neck and lightly breathe in,. "I love this raven hair more." Aoi rub his thumb at Hibiki's lips. Hibiki didn't flinched and drank his bourbon in one gulp. The burn envelope his tongue and throat. As Aoi is still breathing in his neck, Hibiki shifted his seat and face towards Aoi. "Hm.. looks like you missed my touch Hibi~ki." Aoi half kneeled at the sofa and gently knock Hibiki to lie there, he started to kiss Hibiki's mouth and stroke his hair. "Mmm.. uhmmm..." The both of them moaned and began the deep kisses. Their tongues intertwined. Hibiki began unbuttoning Aoi's shirt and let go of the kisses. He began licked and nibbinb at Aoi's chest and removed his ponytail with both of his hands. "Oho.. kinda assertive today aren't we?" Aoi licked his neck and bite it lightly with his lips. He planted a few visible marks around Hibiki's throat. "Aoi, let me sucked you off."Hibiki said and prop himself up with his shoulders. He positioned Aoi to sit, his feet on the floor and back reclined at the headrest of the couch. "I like the service Hibiki.." Aoi looked at Hibiki and licked his upper lip. "Well then Aoi, just relax and enjoy.." Hibiki open Aoi's zipper and dug his penis. It was already half hard. He held it with both his hands and licked just the tip. Aoi gave a low grunt and that made him excited. Aoi's one eye was close, giving him that sexy vibe. This made Hibiki even more excited. He then hungrily open his mouth and began sucking him up and down, twirling his skillfull tongue. "Nggnn .. ha.. you're so good at this!" Aoi held Hibiki's head and thrust It forward, making him feel Hibiki's throat. "Guh,.." Hibiki gave a choking sound. H: My... he is too big! Yanking Hibiki's hair out of him , Aoi leaned down and kiss Hibiki again. After the deep kissing, a spittle was drawn between their mouths. Aoi tug Hibiki to stand and squint his eyes taunting him and smirk again. "Take that fucking pants off." Aoi ordered. After he hurriedly removed his pants and boxer briefs, he sat at Aoi's lap and position himself to face him and grind Aoi's penis to thrust. "Ah,.." it was painful and hot, like something is burning inside him. As Aoi began the wild pounding, he held Hibiki's waist and bury his head at his shoulder. Slam pound slam The leather of the sofa was making a creaking sound, together with the lewd squishy sounds of their joined bodies and the harsh raspy breathing. H: Shit... A: Ah, this is so good. "Ah, Aoi... please do me more.." Hibiki embrace Aoi like a lover would. His eyes was brimming with tears. Aoi, was taken aback by the sight. A: Ho.. looks like somebody has fallen in love with me.. "Then fucking take it all" Aoi said with a chuckle and then the pounding quickened and in a few minutes, both of them convulse and release. "Ha. Ha..." Hibiki's heart was beating madly, as he held Aoi's face and plant a gentle kiss againts that beautiful eyes. H: Why do i have to love you?.. *** It's been three days since Hibiki acted weirdly that night. Eversince then, Aoi has not recieve any phone calls, emails from him. He was suspicious of what could have happen. He drove to Hibiki's residence that night, a few guards and resident gawk at the beautiful man in dark sharp suit. He just smiled at them and rode the elevator all the way to the top floor. As he punch in the door codes, a man from the nextdoor opened his. "Oh hello, are you Ueda -san's friend?" He asked in a friendly manner. He was probably in his 50's and was wearing glasses. He was a small man and have a round built. "Yes sir i am." Aoi answered politely. "Then please come inside my house just a bit,Ueda san asked me to do something.. come." The man waved at him and left his door open. Aoi followed hesitantly and stood just behind the door. The man gave him a letter a few minutes later, "He gave that to me two days ago. Said a friend will come here and all.. anyways i'm heading out so.."he signalled Aoi out the door but he still has a friendly manner."Ofcourse , thank you for this.." Aoi bowed and went his way. As he sat at Hibiki's chair, he open the letter nervously. Inside was a neat hand writting in four words. "Please forgive me Aoi." Aoi looked around the apartment and realize the situation. Hibiki left him. He was full of rage and emotions he cannot explain. He slammed the table and flip it. "You cannot do this to me!! YOUR WORLD REVOLVES AROUND ME!! ME! Anyone who meddles- dies!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helya Posted April 5, 2014 Share Posted April 5, 2014 Hey Rai sorry my comment came so late. A very good chapter as well, but thats not something new. Again the descriptions was very good, and hot in some parts (i could just imagine how Aoi looks with his hair tied, and with that shirt *.* ) you are great at doing this. Aoi don't be mean.*but i still luv u xD* A: What are you planning to do little rat.. Hmm hot scenes again H: My... he is too big! ohohoho Hibiki x Aoi what can i say more? This is madness xD Did you said something about love? H: Why do i have to love you?.. I am curious about what Hibiki found in that envelope, that he was so shocked about, and finally make him leave without saying a word. It must have been something very big. So please come with next as soon as you can Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhye_Meow Posted April 5, 2014 Author Share Posted April 5, 2014 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Imouto chan arigatou na!! Yes, im doing you a fan service with that shirt unbuttoned.. ! Aoi us a snooty bastard but i think that's his way of showing "affection?????" And.. ahahaha i love the nose bleeding fangirl!! onion0 Yes,madness i tell you! Madness!! Did you say something about love? Yes Imouto chan.. ahahaha yay!!love love love rabbit2 I'll try to write the next one so you wont wait for long.. (but the envelope thing will not be revealed yet ) Thank you Mia-chan.. my personal critique! Lets do our best next time! Aoi-sama fan club members! yoyo1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCAR Posted April 5, 2014 Share Posted April 5, 2014 wow .... what the hell happened :cuteonion43: ... awesome one !aww u gave me butterflies in stomach! eager to know whats in the brown envelope .... onion3 em all melted wid the s** scenes u write ....:banhbao21: rai kunnn ( ONE HELL OF A WRITER ):cuteonion45: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhye_Meow Posted April 5, 2014 Author Share Posted April 5, 2014 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Kitty-chan! Thank you very much! The envelope thing.. will be revealed later, as in not in the next chapter.. (unless i change my mind) The beep beep scenes.. Ahaha im glad you melted sweetie that's the point hihi.. Thanks kitty for supporting and for your words of encouragement. Im unworthy of such praise but thank you.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCAR Posted April 5, 2014 Share Posted April 5, 2014 rai kun .. u so damn deserve these appreciations dont be so **do not deserve* types ... u r awesome n u shud know that ... *hugss** (hell of a writer) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elmeida Posted April 5, 2014 Share Posted April 5, 2014 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. heck Hibiki!! What have you done?!!onion7 CAPTIVATING STORY AS ALWAYS, I was at the edge of my seat reading it Keep it up, Rai Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhye_Meow Posted April 5, 2014 Author Share Posted April 5, 2014 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Yes that stupid Hibiki left after revealing us he loves Aoi.. Ahaha but seriously, thank you for the praises.. ill try to keep it interesting.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karin Posted April 6, 2014 Share Posted April 6, 2014 So happy to read the new chapters today. The first thing I did after I logged in was to check on this story. rabbit13 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhye_Meow Posted April 6, 2014 Author Share Posted April 6, 2014 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Oh my what an honor! rabbit13 Thank you for visiting my story first.. :leaf9: im so happy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhye_Meow Posted April 7, 2014 Author Share Posted April 7, 2014 CHAPTER TEN D: for daiki's thoughts H: Guh! So tired! That flight was very long.. my poor aching butt. Hibiki arrived at Frankfurt, Germany and was waiting outside the airport when he saw a black heavily tinted porsche stop in front of him. H: Is it them? A woman in navy blue suit pants step outside the car and looked at Hibiki. "Are you Ueda Hibiki-sama?" She ask in a very stiff Japanese obvious that she had practice it for awhile. "I am, but please. English is fine, i can understand it. Though you'll have to forgive my accent. " Hibiki answered in English and return her courteous smile. "Oh, very good. Mr. Ueda, is this all your belongings?" The woman looked at Hibiki's back pack and one wheeled luggage. "Yes this is all. Can i place it at the trunk of your car . Miss Hannah, was it?" Hibiki was walking towards the car, obvious that he wanted to get out of there and rest as early as possible. "Yes, certainly." A few moments later, they arrived at a lavish mansion. The exteriors has a small fountain with cherubins peeing in it, the staircase to the entrance door has two guard dog statues at each side. H: Tch, clichè isn't it? You have money, hire a designer! As Hannah opened the door for him, Hibiki saw the inside was indeed outdated in taste. Old paintings hanging on the wall. The entrance has a big staircase with red carpets, the floor is marbled tiles and the color scheme is too dark. H: Is this King Arthur's castle?! And what's with this creepy paintings! "Follow me this way sir." Hannah guide Hibiki inside a massive wooden door, just at left of the big hall. The inside was a surprisingly modern, with white interior design. Theres a sofa to recieve guest, a black carpetted floor. A coffee table made of glass. A desk with computer and few book shelves with English title's that varies from Aviation,to Engineering and Modern Science. H: This must be his office. Hannah left Hibiki after giving him black tea and snacks as he requested. She told him wait awhile and her boss will come and meet him soon. As he was silently sipping his tea, the heavy door opened and revealed a tall and lean man with greying hair. It was neat and comb back, a perfect combo for his sharp jaw bone structure. The man was wearing a black business suit with obvious expensive air around it. He walked towards Hibiki and gave a smile. "Ueda-san, you must be tired from the flight. Forgive me for not picking you up personally." The man spoke in fluent Japanese in Kansai dialect. H: Fucking family with beautiful men! Even his father looks more handsome than me, it pissed me off! *** Aoi was irrittable for the whole week, he had hired alot of people, but with still no luck in finding Hibiki. A: Someone is helping him hide from me.That must be it. Aoi was scowling his brows and emitting deadly aura as he was walking outside his office. All the usual stares that followed even his shadow, was now replace with hidding and soft murmurs. "Ne, why is Walter-san so mad these days? And it seems a few detectives come and go inside his office?" One lady personnel gossip at the other one who is busy cleaning her desk, ready to go home. "I'm not sure, but.. there's news that circled a few days back. Apparently, there's a beautiful guy who came in Walter-sama's office and stayed there the whole night with him. Maybe, that's his lover." The woman answered the question and blush a bit. "Wow! I never knew Walter-san has the tendencies for.. hihi" the two started chatting like school girls. --- "Daiki, you have a request at the VIP seat. And my! How lucky!" The host said to Daiki as he pull Daiki out of the dressing room. As Daiki approached the VIP section , he saw Aoi drinking a Pink Dom Perignon, the usual order for VIP guest, Aoi was wearing a sexy slim fit blazer in color black, a white shirt tucked-in to show the buckle of his belt, and a little unbuttoned at the top, a denim black pants, and walking boots. His hair today was lazily kept to the side. And for the rare time, Aoi was wearing an eyeglasses with frames that fit his face well. "Took you long enough!" Aoi said to him as he was greeting him with a smile and sat beside him. "For what do i owe this pleasure Walter-san?" Daiki poured Aoi's glass another serving of the Pink Dom. "I'd like you to come with me this evening. " Aoi didn't drink it and just swirled it around playfully. He leaned in near his knees , letting his hair fall gracefully at his sides making Daiki's heart skip a bit. -- They went to a high class salon that evening, giving Daiki make-overs specific to Aoi's taste. Dyeing his hair black, cutting it a little, changing his clothing style, making him wear contacts. It's like he is being molded into character.[D This guy is so weird. Is he making me look like his lover? After the make over is done, they went at a hotel and had a few drinks at the bar. They wear simple clothes but the whole longue was looking at them. D Seems like he has some authority over here too. They didn't even mind the way we dress. As the evening drew close, they went upstairs at the hotel suite. Aoi took a shower first and ask Daiki to order room service for champagne and strawberries. He was baffled. D Are we here to celebrate something? Is it his birthday? As Aoi was finished showering, he walked out and saw that the order has arrived. "I'll go shower first. I'll be quick." Daiki said as he smiled and walk towards the shower room door. "There's no need for you to do that." Aoi tugged his arms and drag him at the bed. He pushed Daiki down and kissed his lips hungrily. Aoi's wet hair draped at their bodies and his hard penis was peeking outside his robe. D Isn't he too excited? And kissing? Daiki gently pushed away Aoi's face and said "Walter-san , kissing should be reserve for your lover. We are just umph.." Aoi didn't let him finished what he was saying and began kissing him again. He yank Daiki's hip to arch towards him, "Take off this pants.." Aoi was breathing heavily. As soon as Daiki was naked, Aoi didn't wait much long and removed his robe and tossed it at the floor. He smeared lubricant all over his penis, and poured at Daiki's hole. "Uh,. Cold!" Daiki flinched a little. Aoi grab Daiki's hips again and began to grind , thrusting inside. "Ahh... ah..ha.. ha.." Daiki was used to rough sex, but Aoi's forcefullness was new and exciting him. It's like he was playing the role of Aoi's beloved and it pleases him. As Aoi was inside him, reaching upto hilt, the wild thrusting consumed the both of them. Aoi was holding both Daiki's legs as his body was almost bend by their position. Daiki was holding both Aoi's arm for support. "Ngg.. good.. so good." Aoi moaned as he slammed his hips forward. "Walter...ah.. ah.." Daiki was shivering as the cold wet hair of Aoi was dangling at his chest. "Aoi.. call me... Aoi.." Aoi was bitting his legs a bit as he continue to pound, making the lewd squishy sound again. "Ahh... Aoi...Aoi..Aoi..." Daiki screamed so loud because every thrust hits his sweet spots,and he is already dripping wet. Aoi grab him to an embrace and positioned themselves in sitting, Daiki was on top. "Ohhhh....Aoi, im cumming!" Daiki embraced Aoi's neck and Aoi hold both of Daiki's hips. "...ki..Hibi,..ki.." As they both climaxed, Aoi mentioned someone else's name. D Hibiki huh,.poor man. Hibiki must have ment so much to you. Later that evening, after a few rounds of rough and gentle sex alternating, Aoi's phone rang waking the both of them. When Aoi answered, he spoke at a language Daiki couldn't understand. After the call Aoi's face was serious. "I'm leaving first. Use the room however you like, for as long as you like. Your pay for this evening is over there." Aoi was getting dress when he pointed the money at the top of the night stand. "Will i see you again Aoi?" Daiki ask, a little hopeful. "Who knows..." Aoi answered with a smirk. *** After two days.. Charlie was reading some news paper at home and drinking coffee, just enjoying the weekend with his family, when he saw a picture that caught his eye. The news said.. A man with a black hair, probably 27-30 years old, slim body and feminine face was found dead this morning at tokyo bay, with alot of visible torture marks around his body.. "Wait..... isn't this....." Charlie drop his coffee mug.. This is what Aoi's wardrobe looks like. Forgive me guys but i really like fashion so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helya Posted April 7, 2014 Share Posted April 7, 2014 Hey you, Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. so the next one is here already xD Poor Hibiki, even the father is hot, but as would they say: like father the son, there's a reason why Aoi is sooo handsome (and everything that means beautiful), but as far as i can see the father is such a nice person. Oh my my another amazing description of Aoi, and you let us choose the glasses *.* kissed his lips hungrily niceeee And for what's comeing next You are very good to describe things (as i already said), i really enjoy to read those parts. *mind blown* And even better Daiki like Aoi's rought sex xDD Oh my and what an ending... i can't wait to see what really happened. I asume something in my head, but im gonna wait for the update to see what happened. Ps. you have good tastes in fashion Ps. 2 :> when are you going to say about that envelope? Here Aoi-sama fan club members!xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhye_Meow Posted April 7, 2014 Author Share Posted April 7, 2014 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. First off, id like to thank you for waiting for the release.. thank you imouto-chan, Yes, the father is a handsome silver fox haired man (me has a thing for silver hair but thats our secret..*winks*) Well i did let the readers choose Aoi's glasses. After all, we all have a different kind of Aoi in our head, so playing with that a little is a fan service for Aoi-sama's fanclub(the members are me and you! XD I hope alot will join too!) The gif was epic :5yoyo34: the mind blown!! XD yeah, the rough sex was... Yes the ending is a cliff hanger again.. gomen.. rabbit0 Yay! You like my fashion sense! Arigatou na! Aoi-sama fanclub member! yoyo1 Let's do our best next chapter! ♡♡ - - - Updated - - - The envolope will be revealed much much later.. gomen again! rabbit0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCAR Posted April 8, 2014 Share Posted April 8, 2014 As I always say .. awesome description of sex scene hats off!!! Ur taste in clothing is just magnificent... so sexy N why why do u always do this "THE DANGEROUS SUSPENCE"! U just make my eagerness go more wild n wild Every time I read it .... Mr ONE HELL OF A WRITER Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhye_Meow Posted April 8, 2014 Author Share Posted April 8, 2014 Ur taste in clothing is just magnificent... so sexy N why why do u always do this "THE DANGEROUS SUSPENCE"! U just make my eagerness go more wild n wild Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Hello kitty-chan! Haha glad you like the fashion! ♡♡ Gomen about the cliff-hangers! rabbit0 but i think it will make you hook and come back to read more! And thanks for liking the sex scenes i try to keep it interesting as always! rabbit4 thank you for the praises! Let's doour best next time. I promise to make alot of cliff hangeds to make us all crazy! rabbit1 Aoi-sama fansclub member yoyo1 - - - Updated - - - ^^ the typos!just ignore them hahah warri! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elmeida Posted April 8, 2014 Share Posted April 8, 2014 What a cliffhanger, Rai TT-TT Anyway, STORY'S GREAT CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!! btw, your sense of fashion is up-top! Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhye_Meow Posted April 8, 2014 Author Share Posted April 8, 2014 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Ahaha seriously, im sorry about the cliff hangers.. Well, rabbit13 thank you for liking my fashion sense! I'll do my best next time Arigatou!! Aoi-sama fansclub member yoyo1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhye_Meow Posted April 11, 2014 Author Share Posted April 11, 2014 CHAPTER ELEVEN H: What kind of madness is this? "So you see, Ueda-san it's better for you to stay away. Get away as far as possible." Zelig was crossing his fingers and furrowing his brows when was telling Hibiki all the things that he needs to know about Aoi. "What kind of monster are you?" Hibiki couldn't contain himself pound the table and explode. "Aoi is my only son. I will do whatever it is neccesary to make him safe." Zelig was stern in his reply,either from saving his own skin, or being serious- that Hibiki is not sure.H: This fucking family! Twisted sons of bitches! "I will save Aoi.. if you won't then i will!" *** It was raining heavily that night when the police came and knock on Aoi's house. He was just out of the shower when he let them inside. Ofcourse Charlie and Takaba is present that night. They knew the situation calls the need for them to show. Aoi was the last person who is with Daiki. And now he is dead. "Sir, would you like to dress first?" One of the two detectives was embarrased a bit when Aoi sat in front of them wearing a dark blue robe. Charlie sense their discomfort and immediately gave them warm tea. "No need for that. I am at home, and this is how i want to dress." Aoi took a cigarette and light it up. His robe is revealing his chest a bit and when he crossed his legs, the two men fidget in place. It's like Aoi is taunting them and they are losing their goal in talking to Aoi in the first place. "Ehem..sir, according to the evidence we gathered, you had sexual intercourse with the victim just a few hours before he went missing. The CCTV footage showed that you left the hotel just after 3am,and went on a drive. 20 minutes after, Daisuke, also known as Daiki, was seen at the hotel lobby having phone call with someone. A few minutes later,he hailed a cab and ask to be brought to your aircraft hangar, outside the city. That was the last thing we knew of him. Two days after, he was found dead, with body tortured too. The COD was asphyxiation. He was strangled by a fine piece of thread." The older detective relayed the findings. "What you have was consequencial evidence." Takaba butted in. "We have evidence that Walter-san was nowhere near the hangar that night. We already requested original copy of the Xx casino lobby, and that will show you where is Walter-san exactly that night. He played with a friend at the casino till 7am, checked in at the hotel suite upstairs and then goes to work in the afternoon. The records of the CCTV footage from the Walter enterprise building will be given to you, upon request. Ofcourse, that is all subject for authenticy verification." Takaba relayed the counter move. Looking at the two men, Aoi gave an arrogant smirk and said. "Gentlemen, it is not new to you that i have filed alot of complains over the years about the person who is stalking me yes? Why don't you look at that angle for a minute. I was intimate with someone, and it seems me and Daiki is dating. That night, we went shopping and i treat him to expensive salon treatments. Clearly, this might cause my stalker some hatred towards Daiki." Aoi took a drab at the smoke and blew as he chuckled. "For someone who lost a lover, you seemed unconcerned." The younger detective pointed out. "He is not a lover, just someone i casually fuck." Aoi squinted his slate grey eyes at the man and emites intimidating aura. "Then, you said you had a stalker, do you have any idea what's his identity?" The other man ask. Aoi flick a bit of his hair to his side and leaned back in his chair. He said in a low cold voice. "Ofcourse i do.. his name is Ueda Hibiki." Hello everyone! Sorry the chapter is so short, i'm having a bit of a problem in my end, but the part.2 of this chapter will be uploaded later. I'm sorry and thanks for understanding.. Rai ♡♡ COD= cause of death Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helya Posted April 12, 2014 Share Posted April 12, 2014 Hey Rai-niichan here i am again. One of the most passionate fans of Aoi. So the first part, i have no ideea what is going on there. :2yoyo4: But it doesn't sound so bad until they get at this part. "What kind of monster are you?" But i think that somehow Aoi's father have a conection with Daiki's death. And then Aoi! Gorgeous as he always is. Doing think in his own way, as he likes. Showing his impressive character and sexy body. Even those they start to fidget when they se Aoi so sexy.*just my fangirl thoughts kyaa* And at the end he get very mean. After all he should care at least a bit at Hibiki. Aoi flick a bit of his hair to his side and leaned back in his chair. He said in a low cold voice. "Ofcourse i do.. his name is Ueda Hibiki." He purposeful set up to Hibiki. And that is evil. Hope you'll come with the second part too as soon as possible. I liked the part where the policemans tell him what evidence they got, really nice done that part. But if i take any part, i'll say i like them all xD the night, the rain, the sexiness of Aoi, and the misterious first part that the chapter begin with, and Aoi's cold character too, after all that's one reasoon why i like him too, ah..and the thing with his hair xD Keep up the good work Onii-chan Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Here Aoi-sama fansclub member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhye_Meow Posted April 12, 2014 Author Share Posted April 12, 2014 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Hello imouto-chan thanks for dropping by again. Actually i admit that the chapter 11 is a chapter were alot of things will be questions more than answer, but i promise that everything will be revealed as we approached the final moments of this fiction,. Yes i like Aoi-sama's arrogant character too. He doesn't allow people to step on him. Like i said before, he is a very complex character. one sick sexy son of a bitch This is i can guarantee.. Aoi will mind f*ck all of us in the end. Ahahaha! Arigatou imouto-chan! When i upload the part2 i hope to hear from you again! Aoi-sama fansclub members! yoyo1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCAR Posted April 13, 2014 Share Posted April 13, 2014 wow n thats how Aoi will be able to find Hibiki ... Aoi is taking out his frustration in a devilish way !! hehe i like it . .. Waiting for the next chapter ... EAGER EAGER :banhbao29:.(hell of a writer hehehe) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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