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This month theme shall be ''Sayonara, My Friend''.

YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people

that love music and love to write poems,

or simply song lyrics.

 

Giving chance to show your feelings

about the current theme and in general - how do you interpret it.

We have picked a certain song,

based on its melody you have to write down

either a poem or a song lyrics.

Of course,it's up to you how you name it,as long as you mention once

'Sayonara, My Friend' in the content.

 

 

Rules

 

* Post only one poem/song lyrics text.

 

* No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political and no child/animal abuse themes.

 

* Minimum 4 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs.

 

* Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/song lyrics.

 

* The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything,depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody. It's instrumental.

 

* Post the final result on this thread.

 

* Read the rules again, just in case.

 

 

 

Prizes

 

Each user that applies to 'Music Box' contest will get 2,000 points

The winner will get 5,000 points + 1''Sayonara, My Friend'' themed set made by Saga + 1 Manga Cover card

 

 

Song

 

 

 

 

Deadline

 

Starts ->01.04.2014

Ends ->04.31.2014

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Goodbye to Forever

 

I tried to hide you in my will

to know what is true friend

that conceal of our story

long buried in this soul

 

 

no more greetings from each

like that moments we together

chasing the wave on the beach

ran through the wavy current

 

 

losing you is like a dream

your present is just a mind-play

along with the wishful dream

you are gone never to return

 

 

Sayonara, my friend

with this poem as a witness

I carve in my deepest heart

and never fade with time.

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I would like to participate (Excuse my silly and simple writing T_T Writing songs is indeed hard O.o)

 

Short Happiness

 

Blocked away from people

Left all alone

A warm and shining smile

Felt just like home

 

Binding our hearts

Stronger than a rock

Failing one another

That was almost a mock

 

We were always together

Hand in hand

Looking at the horizon

Where the Sun at

 

Envy eats the soul

Things ain’t so perfect

You know things went wrong

Only when we blended

 

Happiness was always far

Never lived in it

Sayonara, my friend

It wasn’t intended

 

Fate is not so kind

Being tossed outside

A playful game I was

Us was just a lie

 

Sealed away in the dark

No place, nowhere to go

No one tagged along

Feeling like a hollow

 

That was our story

In a blink of an eye

Things end so easily

And time just flies...

 

 

Arigatou ^w^

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The Last Meeting

 

I try to stop your step

so you dont leave me

I hand-held your hands that getting cold

I assure you not to go

 

You do not hear me

leave me alone in the meadow

as if a dream

where today is the last meeting

 

you sleep like an angel

in the cold box in this crowded room

adorned by a thousand candles

and a thousand white roses

 

your sweet smile

your warm embrace

now no longer here

leave me alone

 

Sayonara, My Friend

I'll always remember our memories

though the world didnt have you again

Wherever you even forgotten

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Gone So Young

 

My grasp feels empty,

No warmth lingers on my palm.

Geniality left my side

Or rather, it was you who vanished.

 

Bonds we shared for a long time,

they were gone in a blink of an eye

Even though it withdrew from me,

It scarred me, left me with a blissful scar.

 

Roads of the past parted,

Present lacks Aeipathy,

Our dulcet sonata had divisi,

I can only reminiscence, like a Hyacinth firmly standing on its pot.

 

Auf Weidersein, Sayonara, my friend.

Lugubrious, I may seem outside,

but your twinkle will always abide.

'Forget' will never prevail

Even in a millennium, you take a place inside my heart.

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From me to you....

 

 

Because the fate,

Sending you as my best friend

We do love each other for a long, long time

Day by day, we share, we do care

No, no way

What’s despair?

Cool matching, great in pair

 

 

* You’re my sun, I’m your moon

Le soliel et la lune

Such a nice tune

I sing for you, a lullaby

La la la, la la la, la la la

 

 

And one day, just another day

Something goes wrong

Someone new, come and take you away

You turn so strange, your eyes turn grey

 

 

Since that blue day, we start breaking down…

Am I wrong? I scream all along…

I gotta face the truth

Time to say goodbye…

 

 

One last time, for my buddy…

‘Coz if it makes you happy…

It’s alright to leave me

Goodbye, goodbye my best friend……

 

 

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Voyage

 

The ocean seemed so wide

You gaze upon the blues

The sky groans his name

The tides bring his last memory

 

Far from the hill

All I can see is the greens

The grass is whispering the farewell

The willows are wavering goodbye

 

As you faded before me

Your reflection is drowned by the depth

I barely feel your warmth

You just a little creature on the horizon

 

All I want is just a little glimpse of you

My poor voice couldn't reach you

The whispers may through that wind

"Good night! I'll turn off the light"

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My poem is about a guy who is secretly in love with his friend. Hope you guys like it. :)

 

 

UNREQUITED LOVE

 

I used to follow you with my eyes

Since the day we’ve met up until this day

I know you’re the one for me

In my life, special, you’ll always be

 

My mind knows nothing but you

My eyes find only but you

I’m corrupted by your smile

With you my heart’s fragile

 

Your presence is my air

To part with you is something I can’t bear

When you’re near, I feel weak

My heart skips a beat

 

As I try to shake my head to look away

And bury these gnawing feelings

You turn your back and smile tenderly

It pains me to know, it is not because of me

 

My heart froze for your fleeting smile

Then, my heart jumped for a while

Again I’m hypnotized, again I’m in love

To a dream, to a story I could never have

 

I don’t want you to go

I didn’t mean to let go

As you walked the aisle with her

Tears fall as I cannot have you any longer

 

Sayonara, My friend, My unrequited love

Its been long since my heart silently waited for you

hoping that someday you’ll see, endlessly hoping sometime you’ll know

But now, as you sealed your vows with a kiss, I can finally let go

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I'd like to try, too

 

 

Farewell into Uncertainty

 

 

I’m standing at the end of the long pier,

Waving my white handkerchief.

You’re standing by the railing of the exploration ship that will carry you

Over the great ocean, far away from me,

Miles and miles out of my reach,

To an unknown land where you will dedicate your time

To researching and understanding the life you find there.

But what about me?

Why must you leave me- is the life we were building together not enough for you?

 

Sayonara

 

There are other family members on the pier with me,

All of them waving their white handkerchiefs.

You smile at me as you blow me a kiss,

Ripping my heart in two with the excitement in your blue eyes

The ship is long, white and black, the name Providence written along the bow

Is it our destiny to be apart?

The causeway is pulled onto the ship and steam starts flowing faster out the black smokestack

My heart beats harder- soon, all too soon,

You will be ripped out of my life.

 

Sayonara

 

We’re standing on the pier as your ship begins to pull out the harbor,

We’re all waving out white handkerchiefs.

Will I ever see you again? Will God be so kind?

Unease grips me and my breathing becomes labored-

I suddenly can’t hold back the tears and they begin to tumble,

Quicker and quicker as you begin to grow smaller

You shout out to me, but I can’t hear you

I imagine you’re calling words of love and I shout mine back to you

But the wind picks up and carries them away, just like the ocean is taking you from me

 

Sayonara, farewell

 

I’m standing alone on the pier long after your ship has left,

I’m still waving my white tear-streaked handkerchief.

Your ship can no longer be seen on the horizon and

I wonder if you’ve already forgotten me

Anxiety, anger, fear, passion, regret, love- I am in turmoil,

The sun has begun to set, washing the world in hopeful pastel colors

Yet to me the world has become black and grey

What if I really never do see you again? What if today was our final goodbye?

Why, oh why did I let the cruel, treacherous ocean take you away into an unknown future?

 

Sayonara, farewell forever, my friend?

 

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'tis a rap if y'all know what I mean >

jk jk but yeah really, it's a rap >_> that's why it's so long... (I swear it's not an excuse for my wordiness XD)

 

 

- No More -

 

The day I first met you, I knew

I would always come to love you too. Who knew

What would happen to us as we grew.

We didn’t have nothing, not even shoes,

And we spent days sitting out in the cold

But you still kept me warm in your tight hold

When we had no money to even pay,

For food or hot drinks, couldn’t even afford hay,

It was still fine ‘cause you were mine to keep.

Nothing mattered more to me, not even sleep.

As long as I could be with you, I knew

I wouldn’t mind that we had nothing to chew.

If even I could pass it by with a wave

Of my hand as people asked me “why so brave?”

Why couldn’t you stick through it a little more?

I know it wasn’t easy because we were poor

But at least we had one another then

After you left me I didn’t even have anyone when

I went through tough times each and every day

Trying to live on the streets of cold North Bay.

 

I often found myself thinking when time moved slow

With nothing to do and nowhere to go.

Did you really not love me enough?

To take me with you from this rough

Place we called home even though

There’s nothing like that here. If so

You left me no choice but to pick myself up

Unless I wanted to wallow in being a lone pup.

Yet I found that I still sat there wondering

When I could finally move on from that feeling

Of sorrow weighing down on my chest.

It was so heavy it could put me to rest.

Yes, by rest I mean a.k.a death.

I tried to pick myself up but I didn’t even have the breath

To move from this loving spot of mine

Where I’d learn that being alone was totally just fine.

No, don’t listen to me that was a complete lie.

I couldn’t stand it when I didn’t understand why

You would leave me there all alone when

You knew I’d hardly even turned ten.

 

Perhaps you knew that my aunt would come

That there was somebody who would take me from

The hospital when I involuntarily had

That accident people thought was really, really bad.

I don’t quite remember that mess of my life.

It was, in my opinion, a pretty small strife.

Instead, I do remember being quite angry

Because that was the time that you had left me.

I was in the hospital for months at a time,

But you never once even came by with a dime.

Money was hardly the problem then

I was more upset that you didn’t give a damn.

Now that I had a house and my aunt,

It seemed that you truly didn’t want

To spend your life taking care of me,

A half crippled girl with my messed up knee.

I think that was the part that was really bad

It made me feel horrible, worse than sad.

The physical pain was nothing compared

To the hurt in my heart I couldn’t repair.

 

My heart broke more every single day

To wake up feeling that horrible dismay

Of not finding you beside me in bed

But the empty place next to me instead.

And I would scream loudly in the middle of the night,

Trying my best to really win the fight

With the anger that welled up inside of me

When I turned out the lights and remembered your flee.

Though each time I tried my very best,

Your presence still was that annoying little pest

That would keep me from finding ways

To move on from feeling disarray

When I looked at men who resembled you

In more than one way, especially two.

It hurt my pride every now and then

But I was determined to go to the very end

Of the world to find and make you

Remember next time to take me too

So I don’t have to stay with my Aunt Bertha.

I’d really rather be with my own father.

 

Don’t get me wrong, I loved the nice lady

But she’s not you and perhaps just maybe

I spent six years of my life hating you

That I’d become so adamant to part with the blues.

Mr. Blues was my friend for so many years

Because you were the dad that didn’t really care.

That was really what I thought when I met up with him

All those times I looked down at the crippled limb.

It was only when I turned sixteen did she

Tell me about how I’d actually messed up my knee.

Aunt Bertha told me it was in the accident,

That daddy had been there when it all had happened.

Stupid me had been in the middle of the road

And you had been the one that saved this sorry soul.

The words came out as a slap to my face

One that hit so hard I needed to brace

Myself against the couch.

How could I have been such a grouch

All these years that you’d given back to me

When I didn’t even have a second to flee.

 

Instantly I felt so upset

That I’d spent those years with a fret.

At that moment I knew I had to

Spend the next few hundred and two

With no more anger and no more hatred,

No more feeling sad or even jaded.

I now know why you never came to me

In that hospital. I had really

Wanted you to come back to me.

It was probably because I was wishing “we”

Was still possible even though deep down I knew

That it wasn’t possible because you

Were infinitely gone and it was all my fault.

Even though Aunt Bertha told me not to rub the salt,

It was the only thing I could do

To atone for all those curses at you.

So to Mr. Blues, I say “
Sayonara, my friend
.”

And my daddy, to you, I say to no end,

“I’ll love you forever so I beg you please

Forgive me and I pray you rest in peace.”

 

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|| END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ ||

[YaoiOtaku Sayonara, My Friend Contest]

 

Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest!

The choice has been really hard since all of you are skilled and talented.

The winner of ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ [YaoiOtaku Sayonara, My Friend] is

Haru94 .

 

 

As promised everyone who participated will get 2,000 points.

 

 

The winner wins as follow,

- 5,000 points

- 1 themed set made by Saga

- 1 Manga Cover card

 

▦▦□ Application for the themed Set □▦▦

Main theme color:

Picture to be used (optional):

ALT. Colors:

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