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Sorry.my internet is messed upat the moment and this isn't my internet .I promise I will reply soon .probably tomorrow.

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I think I can reply now:hamtaro-005 (9):

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Posted! Hope its ok

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let me know ;)

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you might want to polish up your post.. you have a few mistakes. Not trying to be mean. Just looking out for you, old friend ~ you improved alot since the last time i saw you. Good job! ;)

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your go~ ;)

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your turn

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and uhmmn... don't use mentions in the RP arena...

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I posted.Sorry if I can't write long but I try to write longer!

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It's long enough lol. Anyhow, I got some pointers for you. Err... You somehow did some passive godmodding. Although I can let this pass by since we're still starting...

 

He rushed to the male as he grabbed his collar in an instant and lifted him up to the air.

 

you should have said...

 

"He rushed to the male as he tried to grab his collar in an instant, planning to lift him up in the air"

 

You made the situation unavoidable for me to evade. I don't mind this time, but something like this can get you into trouble soon... anyway, I like your characters attitude. ^___^

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Sorry, I don't of course want to god mod but I can't really understand it and I am trying hard to not do it.

You mean that I shouldn't have said that Shun lifted him up and such???

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don't worry... when I started out I did lots of mistakes. I'm not mad/angry in fact I am enjoying explaing stuff xD

 

Yes, you should not have done that... you basically controlled my character 2 times. One was when you grabbed my character by the collar. The second was when you lifted him up on the air. You have moved him from his prior position without confirming my permission. That's godmodding. Other people may bash you for that.

 

What you should do was you should have "tried" to grab my collar. In my next turn, I will be confirming if you have successfully grabbed it or not... and that's how you get to grab my collar without godmodding.

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Then I shouldn't have said lifting up, right?

Sorry that I am so annoying"Bows" can you give me some examples , I don't know how, I mean, hugging the C or kissing him, making him cry, , Slapping him and things that uses a lot in the rps, which one are god modding and which one are not?

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If you read your reply, you'd notice its usually sex scenes right? in regular roleplay... it's not a good thing to do that. More over, We are doing a Group RP much more an Action one. This type of RP cant tolerate godmodding to an extent...

 

for example... I said I was going to run away... but then... in your turn... you grabbed me and lift me in the air... that will cause a problem...

 

another... in the RP, i was explaing stuff right? I could have something in my mind like "I will be tumbling in my next post" but then, you grabbed me and and lifted me in the air. how can I do my little tumbling?

 

and this is like an unspoken rule. You only post in the "time frame" posted by the first poster/creator of the RP. Time frame would be the Time span from the first action of the Character up to his last action. example "i stood up... washed my teeth, rolled on the floor and fapped" the time frame would be from standing up to fapping.

So, regarding the time frame... do not get ahead of the rest until the rest of the group has responded to a particular time frame. This is not observed in one on one roleplay. But in group roleplay, it is.

 

another example for time frames.

 

poster one "I baked a cake and placed it in the table"

poster two "he placed a cake in the table which made me happy"

Poster three "he placed a cake on the table which I ate"

poster four "........?? he fuckin ate it!!!!"

 

that will be wrong. Your response made it impossible for other to respond through the errrr...."flags".. "flags" are the points written by someone which you need to reply.

 

like that... it is an etiquette not to get ahead of the rest.

 

wooot... wow i wrote so much... sorry if i confuse you...

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I kinda understand and kinda don't! Can I ask you guys whenever I have a problem? So that I can learn little by little!

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Then I will ask you if I am suspect of anything that it may be a god modding! ^^

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I ganna go, sorry for the trouble!

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no worries. I rather enjoy teaching you the ropes.

 

and... take it as me paying back my good mentor back then when I started..

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your up.

And sorry guys.. my post is REALLY long. i got a little carried away but... tell me if its any good XD

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Hi,sorry for the trouble!I don`t really mind but I think I`ve said that I whispered so low so that means no one could here it.

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I see. And its fine but you said

He whispered and walked closer to the three others and stood next to them.[/Quote]

You didnt say "whispered so low that no one could hear him." People can hear other people whispering XD

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- - - Updated - - -

 

Also sorry about Kai...uh - since he doesnt like Shun very much, its not personal or anything.

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I said it's fine! ! actually I have more mistakes than you do so if I did something wrong, forgive me!"Bows"

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Its all good

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You improved alot since the last time we talked, im impressed ~ ;)

But when rp.. details are key.. even if its small. A tip my good friend. :)

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nice reply ((:

 

I feel like i'm reading some nice action-yaoi manga

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Thank you so much! That means alot coming for you . Im really trying hard and thinking alot about it, thanks so much XD

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