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This month theme shall be ''Craving''.

YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people

that love music and love to write poems,

or simply song lyrics.

 

Giving chance to show your feelings

about the current theme and in general - how do you interpret it. be online that

We have picked a certain song,

based on its melody you have to write down

either a poem or a song lyrics.

Of course,it's up to you how you name it,as long as you mention once

'Craving' in the content.

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Post only one poem/song lyrics text.

 

No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political and no child/animal abuse themes.

 

Minimum 4 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs.

 

Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/song lyrics.

 

The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything,depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody. It's instrumental.

 

Post the final result on this thread.

Read the rules again, just in case.

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Each user that applies to 'Music Box' contest will get 2,000 points

The winner will get 5,000 points + 1themed set made by Saga + 1 Manga Cover card

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Starts ~ 01.07.2014

Ends ~ 01.08.2014

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I'll be the first to apply, yoroshiku ne ^w^

 

 

Waiting for The Rescue

 

Trapped inside those golden walls

No escape from this cursed fate

Brought inside with forceful will

Someone there please rescue me

Around that time my soul was gone

 

All those lustful eyes gazing passionately

Blood, sweat with tears dropped down

Loudly screamed to break their hearts

Craving for his warmth

 

Craving for his touch

Thoughts passed by as I lost my glow

 

No one cared for this torn up soul

They kept coming for this tainted body

Cutting the silence with a vengeful shout

The chosen one has finally came through

 

That frozen heart moved again

All the lost warmth broke inside to my bones

 

There was no sound, only the scent of blood

Reaching for his hand while crawling hard

At the smile of his face, my soul trembled

 

Fear pierced my heart knowing what lies ahead

Delighted by his touch my body collapsed

Knowing it’s the end for this long dead self

Why fate is so cruel and dark?

 

 

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Here is my poem....

 

A start to finish

 

Open and broken see what's inside,

the darkness of the emotions of the

inside unable to breakout of the simple of

character to life. The true heart shows

the cover of the face.

 

What is your face of truth?

From bold to cold , which one do you see?

The darkness clouds hide's the truth of

the heart's feeling.

 

Craving for innocence

in the pure sets of light. Sadly the truth

of the awaking takes flight. Starting with

a basic grasp turns into a clash of emotions

separating regular thoughts.

 

Plots of obstacles of the heart breaks the finish

In the end the finish is not provoked. Craving for life

In the inner beauty of the true hearts colors behind the

Cloak of shadows.

 

That ends in deep sorrow never to end the

Life of the past but to move forward into the

path ahead in the mist of the heart.

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  • 2 weeks later...

After editing my existing poem... so, here is mine.

 

 

Unanswered Riddle

 

The first year when we met,

I was with someone else,

Arguments were my daily conversations,

You helped me through and we became friends.

 

In the midst of the second year, I broke up with him,

While in the pain of sadness,

You were here for me,

Encouraging me with your words.

 

At the end of the second year,

We still contacted and met with each other

Wishing for each other’s happiness

I knew I started to craving for you.

 

On the fourth year,

We were absorbed in our studies,

But we still met when we had time,

You gave me a riddle and my feelings became stronger.

 

On the fifth year,

We became distant,

But my desire grew stronger than before,

All I could do was wait.

 

On the sixth year,

My feelings are still here with me,

We hadn't contacted each other,

I keep waiting but will we be together?

 

It’s already been six years since we first met,

The riddle you gave me is still unsolved,

When will you give me the answer?

Are our hearts still connected?

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| CRAVING YOU | (SONG LYRICS)

 

I AM craving

Your poisonous lips

They drown me

They make it hard to breath

 

INSIDE me

The beast is growling loud

Just Take Me

It's screaming out loud

 

JUST break me

It craves for your touch

The whimpers, the cries for your love.

 

I crave the man

I crave the lover

I crave the heat of your body against mine

I crave your lips

That give me pleasure

I crave every moment with you love

I crave everything of YOU

 

I am craving

Your cold touch

Your fingers on my skin

I am craving the harsh love

The whispers in my ear

I am craving your passion

Deep inside of me

 

I say NO

This is so wrong

But I am still craving YOU

 

I crave the man

I crave the lover

I crave the heat of your body against mine

I crave your lips

That give me pleasure

I crave every moment with you love

I crave everything of YOU

 

I AM CRAVING YOU~

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I'm joining~ :)

 

 

 

Selfish

 

I thought I could do things as I please

Like an animal, wild and free

Little did I know my freedom is limited

Like a bird who can spread it's wings;

Fly, but can't go beyond the bars of its cage

 

I miss you like I miss the stars at day

I want to see your smile, feel your warmth

Hear your voice and hear you laugh aloud

I miss our random, non-sensical conversations

But all I can do is reminisce again, once more

 

I want to win a lotto jackpot and be rich

Buy a mansion; travel around the world

Eat whatever I want. Do whatever I want.

Have someone attend me and throw a grand party

But life is harsh, money is earned through blood and sweat

 

However, there is no absolute freedom in the world

You can't rekindle flames that was put out with water

Why do people want something they can't have?

Why do I crave so much for the impossible?

Craving selfish needs and wants; living for self-satisfaction

 

 

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Join in ^^

 

 

 

 

-I look to you.-

 

I'm in my room looking outside

The clouds gradually move as birds slowly fly

A beautiful color expands like a creative painting of an unknown artist

Mixing together with the colors of the sky,

He walks off his house, taking his broken bike he circles into that endless mist

 

 

Waiting for things that won't become true

I look at you

I crave you.

Still you don't have any clue

How much I look to you.

 

 

Little by little his broad back become thinner and the street broader

I still crave you

Wishing for you turn around

Like a hopeless Stockholm syndrome sufferer

-I look to you.-

 

 

My feet are numb, my eyes are hurting as I see you slowly walking away

Unchain me from this invisible prison

I look at you as you go astray

I don’t need a reason

-I look to you.-

 

 

I want release of this painful craving

Yet I feel so glad in this cruel yet so sweet imprisonment

Too late to turn back, you are leaving

And I'm still enjoying this bitter yet sugary punishment

-I look to you.-

 

 

As your figure fades on the skyline

Still crave you

I'm still stuck in this roofline

Ending this sweet yet painful feeling.

-I cry for you.-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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[TD]LEMONade[/TD]

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[TD=align: left]I never once stopped regretting

Even now, I still regret I let you go

How I wish I can turn back time

So that I can come back to you

 

I can only stare from afar

I want to call for you

but my voice wont come out

Is this your retribution?

 

I looked for something else

Knowing you won't come to me

But none of them quenched my thirst.

Because you are my lemonade.

 

I longed for your taste.

your sourness, your sweetness

they intoxify me.

 

My craving...

My lust...

My thirst...

is none other than my lemonade.

And that is you.

[but you won't come back to me]

 

My craving

[will you let me]

My lust

[for the last time]

My thirst

[crave you]

because you are

[my lemonade.]

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Joining :)

 

 

 

Never, ever….

 

 

Never, I never feel down

Feeling – full of my proud

Keeping – within the sound

Gather around – With all of my heat

And all my soul

 

Come on, come on

The heart of gold

Please, don’t be shy

If only one smile

It’s time to show

 

Hurry up, chop chop

Don’t be so slow

The moon does glow

The stars shine down

 

Finally…Here you are…

My dream comes true

You open up, without the clues

Only one smile, given from you

Fade out all the blues

Shed away all tears

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My submission *waves to everyone* I'm still alive :)

 

 

 

Title:

 

 

Hatin' 4$$ Hoes!

 

 

No I'm just kidding... It's called Pigeonfry Addiction

 

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Flowers bloom & grow for the sun,

Birds fight for that very last crumb,

What was once is now all lost,

Why do I feel bound to a cross?,

Temptation and desire are one and the same,

You did not feel either one for me,

Left alone to wilt and die,

Everything you said to me was a lie.

 

Craving for someones physical touch,

Surely that isn't so much,

Of a request that I give to you,

Before you leave make me happy too,

Until then I will lay here,

Reminiscing in days long gone,

Of what I thought was an unbreakable bond,

I set you free,

A caged butterfly no more,

But go too far and a Moth's death is sure.

 

I used to crave for you and all you mean,

Like a chocolate covered Boston Creme,

Craved for your attention is what it seemed,

Now I am free,

A caged butterfly no more,

I no longer worry and wait for your call,

I have something better,

So you needn't call.

 

You worked as a translator,

communicator of Morse code,

I now realise how much respect I hold,

Like a crow you pecked at my soul,

My eyes became as black a coal,

A butterfly no more,

I feel I need to settle the score,

With all the pain and hurt inflicted to me,

It is now my royal decree.

 

You were once a craving of mine,

So much has changed specifically time,

My wings plucked from my back were sore,

Have now grown back strong from my core,

Fly away with the birds and the bees,

Free from the grasp of something mean.

 

We fear rejection,

Want attention,

Crave affection,

And dream of perfection.

 

 

Shout out to Larinda, Shawna, Jadisha, Karima,

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and Tanisha.

 

Y'all is the bestest XD

 

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- Senses Can Hurt -

 

Skin whiter than freshly fallen snow

Lip stains coloured in a luscious ruby red

Hair messily undone upon the pillow

Body sprawled out all across the bed

You look lovely tonight.

 

Curtains draped over the moonless night

Room darkened to the colour of a raven

Laboured breathing echoing off walls white

Clock stops ticking its regular rotation.

The air smells fresh tonight.

 

Skin a bright pink flushed hot beneath clothes

Heart pounding loud between both ears

Gasps escape drooling lips the colour of roses

Sweat trickles down joining fresh wet tears

I taste happiness tonight.

 

Floor boards creak beneath light feet

Cigarettes burns black ashes to the ground

Butt snuggles tightly into a sofa seat

Glances made to the glorious sight around

The craving feels strong tonight.

 

Lips so red I'd stain them in your blood

Night so dark I wish the raven would come

Sweat so thick I'd choke you in the flood

Smoke so hot I want to burn you to crumbs

Sounds like danger tonight.

 

Exhilarating screams induced by pain

Murder drowns my body in pleasure

Sensation to kill intoxicates my brain

It is my favourite form of leisure

I sense desire tonight.

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|| END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ ||

[YaoiOtaku Craving Contest]

 

Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest!

The choice has been really hard since all of you are skilled and talented.

The winner of ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ [YaoiOtaku Craving] is

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As promised everyone who participated will get 2,000 points.

 

 

The winner wins as follows:

- 5,000 points

- 1 themed set made by Saga

- 1 Manga Cover card

 

▦▦Application for the themed Set▦▦

Main theme color:

Picture to be used (optional):

ALT. Colors:

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That's unexpected....so many beautiful poems/songs...: )

Thanks

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The song helped a lot^^

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Main theme color: freestyle

Picture to be used (optional): freestyle

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