鼠ドル Posted November 26, 2014 Share Posted November 26, 2014 How can a heart leap and jump While it shatters to a thousand pieces? Can you smile shine through the tears That stings the eyes and stream down sad faces? It's not as impossible as it seems Have you felt so lonely Even while in the middle of crowded places? Do you suffocate on the Anxiety in the happiest of times? Who knows what happiness really means Do you know what it is like To not know whether to laugh or cry and Your mind is going too fast while Your body it aches of exhaustion? Life's not black or white with no in-between It's a roller coaster ride A seemingly random row of events Upside down and inside out Sometimes neither, sometimes both You never know what living means Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whimsicawl Posted April 22, 2015 Share Posted April 22, 2015 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Your poem broke me down little by little in every two lines. When you paint a wholesome image in one line, you smash it to fractions in the next. There's this looming, repeating concept of Isolation that spooked me. But most prominent is how your last line contradicts your title. "You never know what living means" is a very Gray sentence. It's not black or white in the sense that "you know or you don't know" it's the Grayish unknown of "what living means?" That's so small, and thoughtful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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