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This month's theme shall be "
Notice Me
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YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people who love music

and love to write poems, or simply song lyrics.

 

Giving the chance to show your feelings about the current theme and in general,

how do you interpret it, we have picked a certain song.

Based on its melody, you have to write down either a poem or a song lyrics.

Of course, it's up to you how you name it, as long as you

mention once "Notice Me" in the content.

 

 

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Post only on poem/ song lyrics text.

 

No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political,

and no child/ animal abuse themes.

 

Minimum 3 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs.

 

Do not use the name of the song we give you

as a title to your poem/ song lyrics.

 

The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything,

depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody.

It's instrumental.

 

Post the final result on this thread.

 

Read the rules again, just in case.

 

 

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Each user that applies to "Music Box"

contest will get
2,000 points.

 

The winner will get
5,000 points

+ 1 manga cover card.

 

 

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Starts | 02 February 2015

Ends | 28 February 2015

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Not a glance

Not a look

Only a blank stare

 

If it's not me you're looking at

Then who is it you see

Tell me what I can do to get you

 

Where must I go, what must I learn

Do I shed this crown or pick up a new one

Do I call you out, do I send for you

 

Turn that gaze to me

Show me that smile, charming as can be

Reach out, I will catch thee

 

I implore, see who I am

I adore, my love expands

Forevermore, I am caught

 

So please

With forehead touching Earth

I beg

Notice me.

 

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So I thought I would add a little note/information for this, if that's okay. (^_^)

The concept is of a prince or a noble who is completely taken by a commoner. The commoner only sees the other as a power-figure, and this frustrates our prince. The prince is at a loss, and he silently pleads for the commoner to look at him as a person, and not just a figure.

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joining, please.

 

 

 

 

cold a night, dancing gracefully

covered myself with jewelries

in this song is all that i feel

on this beautiful night, i sing

 

my long hair, i brushed so tenderly

a flower, for you to notice me

my treasured dress, now out of the chest

for this special night, i chose the best

 

as it touches your skin, that cool breeze

do you feel my heart's ache, hear its plead?

will you ever know this maiden's love

even the moon sees it from above

 

the first step, a step towards you

do you hear the straightforward tune

the ticking clock is overdue

oh how fast my heart beats for you

 

listen, my heart calls out to you

just watch, see how it blooms.

 

 

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joining please >///

 

 

at night i look at the empty space,

the space that reminds me of you

you that wont notice me,

the thought of that brings loneliness.

 

The loneliness fills my heart,

yet i cant be sad.

the thought of you and me,

fills my heart whit hope

 

the hope you will,

you will notice me

that leaves me wishing

 

the wish upon the stars,

starts that fill my heart whit hope,

the hope of your love.

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Joining please.

 

When will you notice me?

 

You're standing right there.

But why won't you notice me?

It's just not fair.

Why do you not see me?

 

Notice the way I change when you enter the room.

Notice the way I blush when you look at me.

Your eyes are my tomb.

But you don't see me.

 

You talk to me everyday.

But do you hear me?

You walk by me everyday.

But do you see me?

 

Please, I'm crying.

Please, see me.

Please, I'm dying.

Please, notice me.

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joining please :hamtaro-005 (15):

 

 

-Closest-

 

It has been a long time,

Feelings like these for you,

Are too much of a burden for me,

I'm in love with you.

 

You're so gentle towards me,

Even though I did wrong,

You just smile at me,

And comfort me instead.

 

I'm here by your side every time,

No matter where you go,

I will always find you,

So why won't you realize it already?

 

My little heart inside keeps screaming,

'Notice me',

It is very painful for me,

To be by your side any longer.

 

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Here's mine~for the first time, i was moved listening to this beautiful instrumental!

 

 

In Our Secret Place

 

Where are you now?

I'm patiently waiting for you,

Here in our secret place.

 

Do you even know where I am right now?

You know that I've been in love with you,

But why are you avoiding me?

 

I always go to where you will be,

But I keep on not seeing you.

Please don't do this to me.

 

I bet you don't know,

That you're my first love.

I have always love you ever since.

 

I'm now here in our secret place,

I'm waiting for you here,

So that I could know your reply.

 

Just once, I want to hear your voice.

Just once, let me love you for the last time.

Just once, please notice me.

 

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Here's mine :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

~ Lullaby from my heart ~

 

Do you know who’s there for you?

Every time, everywhere

Do you know who always care?

You know why; do you know why?

 

Do you feel who’s by your side?

When you’re alright or when you’re down

To push you up, from a frown

Please slow down and think again

 

Do you believe in true love?

Dare you to surf it all from me

Don’t turn your back; if you agree

Just feel free as I do so

 

Come closer and notice me

You’re my angel, my destiny

Feel my heart, my dignity

Only for you who I belong….

 

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Here is my humble entry. ^_^

 

 

Yearning

 

 

Still like a piece of art

Unmoving in your bewitching beauty

I reach out my hand with this hope

A little more and I can touch...

 

You, who smiles to no one

Your eyes reflect only the emptiness

Cold glass separates us

My fingers could not reach

 

Can you feel the warmth I give you?

Do you hear me calling out?

My heart has been screaming for you

I am here behind the glass

 

I cry out your name

But you do not hear

Not a hint, not a sigh

Oh, when will you notice me?

 

The song plays on

The melody never dies

And I still keep on yearning

Wishing for my beloved to come alive

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Four of importance

 

The first, a smile

When others would give up

A gentle touch

Forgiveness, not deserved

 

Unable to forget

Feelings now buried

Yet you, so precious

Notice me

 

 

A'nother, a friend

No love, unsure

Merely longing

Beautiful, I admire

 

Admire how you noticed me

In a gray mass of all

You also forgive

I cannot thank more

 

 

Yet other, so cute

I cannot return

Pure feelings of you

Yet hold you tight

 

Stay by your side

Sworn to protect

Sworn to notice you

I’ll make you smile

 

 

And the last one

Trust I betrayed

Importance is notice

I’ll prove regret

 

Owing you everything

And loving much more

You introduced me friendship

In return I follow

 

Four who kept on noticing me

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here is mine..was inspired by a friend, so thank you~

 

The color Blue

 

Forgetting the rule in which one was to abide

Shredding the strings of life with little surprise

Screams of rejection only being heard within; inside

Such an ignorant breed of a female, with little pride.

 

Troubled, which yet another inner voice cried

The sand slide, rain pummeling the lands as it decide

This lovely Blue, or as the heart sighed

Can not accept the truth of being mentally revived

 

Death is what she longed to meet.

Not moments before was she near defeat

Yet as annoying as it was to simply breathe

She was a coward with only one dream

 

Though Blue never cared for much else

Though she never tried to gain any help

Though she felt trapped like organized books on a shelf

She only wish to forget her past self

 

"Do not notice me, dear Blue

For you will only remember what you do

Time to move along at last

and forget about the horrific past"

 

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|| END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ ||

[YaoiOtaku Notice Me Contest]

 

 

 

 

Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest!

The choice has been really hard since all of you are skilled and talented.

The winner of ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ [YaoiOtaku Notice Me] is @

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As promised everyone who participated will get 2,000 points.

 

 

 

The winner wins as follow,

- 5,000 points

- 1 Manga Cover card

 

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Oh my Gooood, this really came as the best thing that happened to me today. Gee, I'm so excited, thank you so so so much!!

 

 

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Wasn't expecting this. Oh, sweet me. :o

 

Thank you once again! ^^

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buddddddddyyyyyy! Congrats... i finally read it OTL

 

good job.. congratulations!! bring in the leafy ... the new upgraded version

 

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Thank you, bud! xDD

 

Oh, I've got something better. :rolleyes:

 

 

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