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This month's theme shall be "In Wonderland".

YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people who love music

and love to write poems, or simply song lyrics.

 

Giving the chance to show your feelings about the current theme and in general,

how do you interpret it, we have picked a certain song.

Based on its melody, you have to write down either a poem or a song lyrics.

Of course, it's up to you how you name it, as long as you

mention once "In Wonderland" in the content.

 

 

R♥les

 

Post only on poem/ song lyrics text.

 

No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political,

and no child/ animal abuse themes.

 

Minimum 3 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs.

 

Do not use the name of the song we give you

as a title to your poem/ song lyrics.

 

The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything,

depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody.

It's instrumental.

 

Post the final result on this thread.

 

Read the rules again, just in case.

 

 

Pr♦zes

 

Each user that applies to "Music Box"

contest will get
2,000 points.

 

The winner will get 5,000 points

+ 1 manga cover card.

 

 

S♣ng

 

 

 

Dead♔line

 

Starts : 02 April 2015

Ends : 30 April 2015

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I intended this to be lyrics at first and tried to match the words with the rhythm of the song..

sadly, somewhere along the way, it went completely out of track..

 

p.s. (backstory: Black in White)

i decided to make this an epilogue of some sorts of my [bL 'W h i t e|| R a b b i t ||C a u g h t'] entry.. since the maximum is only 600 words,, hope you like it..

 

 

 

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B in W:

On Our Own

 

 

Looking at the mirror

My other half reflects

Forcing down my feelings

That tend to overflows

 

For my hands are stained with

blood of countless foes

I dare not ask forgivess

Salvation had long past mine

 

Feared to taint you with a touch

And rub you with my sin

It's fine it's just me

While you stay safe and clean

 

But you open that door

touch the darkness within

I can only surrender

with your begging whisper

 

You pulled me down close to you

Your heart beats against mine

With single breath, our hands entwine

the chains that bind me broke with a sigh.

 

Maybe it's true that it's you

Who drag me down this hole

But you don't know, do you?

I dreamt of this so long ago

 

In this once dim room

Is a fantasy-like reality

A place for none but "US"

An open door in wonderland

 

oh, Our Very Own
Idyllic Realm
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Lost

 

Now where should I begin?

At my birth or at thy Sinn

Unknown to the eye I am

My existence your fantasy

 

Let me present myself

a sort of miracle

Born through simple wish

Wish to escape

 

A moment will occur

When break you will

Your eyes will change

As found the key you have

 

Must be afraid

Do not understand?

I promised no safety

Chose the view on me

 

If escape the request

I must disappoint

Once, forever enchanted

Lost in wonderland

You are mine

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"Imagine"

 

 

Thinking you were here

By my side

Caressing my body

With your touch

 

That flames my desire

In wonderland

Would you be there?

To my wonderland

 

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"Lead Me To Wonderland" =P

 

 

Somewhere along I lost my way.

How far I've walked no one can say.

Far from home I've gone astray,

Lost in childish games and play.

 

Random carnivals, such and such,

They did amuse and attract me much.

Now they're old, they've lost their touch.

I've lost my love, my home, my crutch.

 

All this time while I was roving,

A distant light continues glowing.

 

It glows on top of the hill at night.

Far from here, but still in sight.

It overlooks the world, in it's own light,

Beyond where land and sky unite.

 

I follow it's light and now I see,

It leads me to where I need to be.

I'm back where I started, oh how could I not see,

My Wonderland was always with me.

 

 

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My entry...

 

 

 

 

 

 

Impression

 

Don’t know who you are

And I don’t know why

I’m walking along the side

Seeing you’re standing right

I follow you on the way

 

Long, long way to go

And you never show

Nothing from you to me

I try my best to see

Everything clearer, someday

 

Reaching my hands to you

Wanna touch, I wanna feel you

But now, my body goes through

You let my soul feels blue

You are not true

I’m still stunning here in vain

 

You’re like the mist

You’re the incense

You’re the mystery

You do diffuse me

By the way, I’m longing to you

 

 

 

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My entry for the Music Box Contest for this month is a song.

It is to be sung as a duet, the male voice as lead and the female voice assisting.

The chorus is to be sung together.

 

 

- Connected by Light -

 

Introduction: 00:00 - 00:22

 

Verse 1: 00:23 - 00:44

 

Have you seen the valley, in the mighty winter?

There's a place I tell you, a place for you and me.

In the cold dark forest, underneath the trees,

It's a place called Wonderland, that's where we will be.

 

Verse 2: 00:45 - 1:07

 

As we walk along this long and winding path,

We will walk together, standing hand in hand.

I know

I followed you, into the darkness,

But we will die together, standing side by side.

 

Chorus: 1:08 - 1:29

 

This place called Wonderland, I wonder why it is.

It's not our heaven, and not our resting place.

This place called Wonderland, I wonder where it leads.

I guess it's just for you and me.

 

Bridge: 1:30 - 2:17

 

When I look

Up at the sky

I see us

Connected by light (x3)

 

When I look

Up at the sky

I see us

In Wonderland.

 

(Repeat) Verse 2: 2:18 - 2:40

 

As we walk along this long and winding path,

We will walk together, standing hand in hand.

I know

I followed you, into the darkness,

But we will die together, standing side by side.

 

Verse 3: 02:41 - 3:03

 

Have you seen the valley, in the blooming spring?

There's a place I tell you, a place for you and me.

Surrounded by the oak trees, oh that's where I grew up.

Playing in the meadows, of wheat and buttercups.

 

(Repeat) Chorus: 3:04 - 3:26

 

This place called Wonderland, I wonder why it is.

It's not our heaven, and not our resting place.

This place called Wonderland, I wonder where it leads.

 

No music:

 

I guess it's just for us.

 

- Jo -

 

 

This song is dedicated to my piano teacher who has and will always be a source of inspiration to me.

She passed away four years ago.

I hope we will meet again someday, in Wonderland.

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joining please (song lyrics)

 

 

 

 

BEWILDERED

 

(0:01 - 0:22)

i have seen the vastness.. of the skies above

what i want to know is.. the greatness of your love

you have never chained me.. always held me dear

but you never really claimed me.. still i will be here

 

(0:23 - 0:44)

hide me where you want to.. til i can not see

lead me where your heart is.. lead me where you'll be

you can hold me so tight.. til i can not breathe

you can embrace me gently.. closely as can be

 

(0:45 - 1:07)

lock me in a tower.. lock me in a cell

trap me in your box or.. trap me where you dwell (you can)

show me the mountains or.. conceal the seas I knew

in wonderland, i'll wander.. until i find you

 

(1:08 - 1:29)

the world is always changing.. still, i find ways to love you

the world adapts and it doesn't.. my love find ways to renew

your heart is always in doubts.. always testing my poor heart

in wonderland, i can show you.. real, pure and strong is my heart

 

(1:30 - 1:51)

you lead me.. to confusion

everything.. became a total train wreck

my love lives.. in constant disruption

but i will.. always remain yours

 

(1:52 - 2:13)

you lead me.. to serenity

everything.. was a great adventure

my love lives.. in constant symmetry

but i will.. strike and mend til i get to you

 

(2:19 - 2:41)

lock me in a tower.. lock me in a cell

trap me in your box or.. trap me where you dwell (you can)

show me the mountains or.. conceal the seas I knew

in wonderland, i'll wander.. until i find you

 

(2:42 - 3:03)

the world is always changing.. still, i find ways to love you

the world adapts and it doesn't.. my love find ways to renew

your heart is always in doubts.. always testing my poor heart

in wonderland, i can show you.. real, pure and strong is my heart

 

 

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Everybody is so creative :)

 

 

Our Bodies; Our Wonderland

 

Your body is my honing tool

To get my ire unlaced

So let me feed my mind with you

And fix what is wrong placed.

 

Two full lips above the ground

Still seek one missing kiss

Less our woes ponder 'round

To fish out back shy bliss.

 

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Toxic blips preludes our wish

Steady breathes between us

There is less resist.

 

The amyl runs freely in veins

Wet lashes of your eyes

Will gently fill my shirt with stains

While chagrin slowly dies.

 

Soon enough we start to wander

Pule to reach within,

Clear the clutter and remember

In Wonderland; it's a sin.

 

 

 

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, divine as always!

 

 

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|| END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ ||

[YaoiOtaku Notice Me Contest]

 

 

 

 

Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest!

The choice has been really hard since all of you are skilled and talented.

The winner of ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ [YaoiOtaku In Wonderland] is @

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As promised everyone who participated will get 2,000 points.

 

 

 

The winner wins as follows,

- 5,000 points

- 1 Manga Cover card

 

 

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