arcuspluviusincitus Posted April 22, 2015 Share Posted April 22, 2015 A Midsummer Morning O' dear, did you not know? The serene secret garden where the dangling daises grow? The smell of fresh scent of red roses and pleasant morning mead. The sight of stumbling cooks scurrying with plates of baked carrot cakes, stiff scones and roasted sunflower seed Listen Oh sweet why do you doubt it so? For I showed you your reflection and told of your complexion and yet you still say no. Oh sweet, what can I possibly do? To show your complexion, to show your perfection, to show that I hopelessly love you! Minds eye. Where the sun is eternally shinning in the bright blue sapphire sky. There the Gulls are forever laughing among the muddy reeling Rye. Oh sweet blissful island, Oh sweet emerald Isle. Your never ending beauty shall remain forever more within my minds Secret eye. Requiescat Where art thou mother dear? For thy sweetest voice I never hear. Thine fiery cheeks of blushing bright red Thine soft silvery voice which would awake the dead. Where art thou mother dear? In my mind hath I no care? I feel thine pain, I clench my chest. I hope thy art at peace that thy art at rest. Usher the Shrines Usher the shrines of pure heart and joy the Gods would often say As they spun around stomping the ground In the merry month of may. The wind blew low and to and fro across the Irish sea. And up and down the waves did ground upon the cliffs of Tralee. Usher the shrines of pure heart and joy the Gods would often say As they banged upon the broken bodhrán as the dreaded beat continue to play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sai-Miyoshi Posted May 3, 2015 Share Posted May 3, 2015 Wow. honestly? this is amazing. holy f*ck i love it *^* especially the first one is awesome >//// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arcuspluviusincitus Posted May 3, 2015 Author Share Posted May 3, 2015 S-Sai, are you sure you are reading the same poetry? You might not perhaps stumbled upon Edgar Allan Poe's "The Raven" and mixed up the authors names? This is below mediocre....I am slightly embarrassed to have written them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jo_suzaku Posted May 4, 2015 Share Posted May 4, 2015 It's really good! Love your style. Keep writing ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arcuspluviusincitus Posted May 4, 2015 Author Share Posted May 4, 2015 J-Jo?! You too? I just don't see how anyone would like this... It need lots of improvement.... It is not that good.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jo_suzaku Posted May 9, 2015 Share Posted May 9, 2015 It's different. And it's good! Waiting to read another one ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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