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This month's theme shall be "Cruelty".

YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people who love music

and love to write poems, or simply song lyrics.

 

 

Giving the chance to show your feelings about the current theme and in general,

how do you interpret it, we have picked a certain song.

Based on its melody, you have to write down either a poem or a song lyrics.

Of course, it's up to you how you name it, as long as you

mention once "Cruelty" in the content.

 

 

 

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Post only on poem/ song lyrics text.

 

 

No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political,

and no child/ animal abuse themes.

 

 

Minimum 3 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs.

 

 

Do not use the name of the song we give you

as a title to your poem/ song lyrics.

 

 

The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything,

depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody.

It's instrumental.

 

 

Post the final result on this thread.

 

 

Read the rules again, just in case.

 

 

 

 

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Each user that applies to "Music Box"

contest will get 2,000 points.

 

 

The winner will get 5,000 points

+ 1 manga cover card

 

 

 

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Starts ▶ 01 September 2015

Ends ▶ 01 October 2015

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They say,

I say

 

 

there's a whole new hole

it was deep and dark

i knew it was there

but i still fell hard

 

they say it's stupidity

to fall in this misery

and i can blame no one

but my own weak mind

 

they say it's stupidity

to bear constant betrayal

and i can lean on no one

but my own frail heart

 

they say it's stupidity

to accept the cruelty

and then forgive the deed

but will cry to sleep

 

to fall in this misery

to bear the betrayal

to accept the cruelty

i say it's stupid love

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Cruelty of angels

 

 

why have you gone

and left me alone

there surely is

a reason for this

 

the world is now

a cumulus of silence

and it has become

an isolated island

 

in the distance I hear

the sound of a harp

must I now prepare

for what is to come

 

you've gone with the angels

and left me alone

even if I call it cruelty

you will still be gone

 

I hope you are laughing

wherever you are

I hope you're not empty

like those left behind.

 

 

The song made me think of angels, but also of sadness.

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Title : Wish

 

Under the night sky I wish upon a star

I only have one wish

I don’t want to give up

The moon scornfully laughs and takes me in its arms

 

Your wish will be granted but you’ll never escape

This world wants you to be betrayed

Silhouettes awaiting to devour your flame

A fate sealed with cruelty

 

Come, lay on my chest like this

I’ll grant you bliss and everything you seek, you’ll find

See? All of my children are happy here with me

Accept me in your heart and become one with me

I’ll raise you to the sky, you’ll be shining so bright

 

With your wish finally granted, go to sleep my child.

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Hyväksy se

 

He threw my heart in a well,

and I told myself that I would never tell.

I reverted back and hid in a shell,

while I secretly wished for him to be thrown in a cell.

 

Broken promises.

 

I wasn’t asking for this,

I needed just one more wish,

something to make an amend,

something confided in a friend.

 

His cruelty,

left me broken in three,

it was no longer a you, I or we.

Even this is something even we can agree.

 

I was all alone, hitting rewind.

While he was out, I was living in the past, being one step behind.

His pride clashed with mine.

A broken heart is like a broken wind chime.

 

No jingles,

rollin’ in singles.

His whim has a strong holdin’,

and kept me smoldin’,

 

in twists and turns,

it’s my love for him,

that I can’t ever learn,

which blew the lit flame dim.

 

Cruelty acts on whims.

Something that is all so true and grim.

Your promises were lies.

and even now, why can’t you look me in the eyes?

 

 

 

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Quesions

 

I scream. I scream and cry

begging to know as to why

Whom it is that i shall blame

Me or thee for all this pain

 

I decide on the solution

Pain is due to my own delusion

Yet What am I, if not

The definition of my own thought

 

If so, am i showing cruelty

to meself or to others

Whom i talk to in this lunacy

To try and make meself recover

From the memories i created.

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When To Give Up

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Puffy eyes

Hoarse Voice

Heartbreaking Sobs

When is the right time?

To him:

Isn't it enough

You have proven your point

Eveyone knows your in love

Hey, wake up

 

Isn't it fine?

Come on, Come back

No one said you can't

Everybody's awaiting your return

 

To her:

Aren't you sick of it?

The cruelty of fate

To give you a dying mate

Hey, wake up

 

Haven't you suffered enough?

They said he won't wake up

Isn't it fine to let him rest?

He won't like to see you in mess.

 

 

But she won't listen

And he won't be awaken

They're trying to hold on

On a sinking ship

Knowing it's beyond salvation

 

Who knows?

When was the right time to stop

When fighting a loosing battle

When was the right time to retreat

From the painful battle field

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|| END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ ||

[YaoiOtaku Cruelty Contest]

 

 

 

 

Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest!

The choice has been really hard since all of you are skilled and talented. For the first time,

all poems in the contest have been at a very high level, either very

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The winner wins as follows,

- 5,000 points

- 1 Manga Cover card

 

 

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