OnceInABlueRune Posted October 4, 2015 Share Posted October 4, 2015 Moving I am moving past you. Past your lies brown eyes and your smile. I am moving past you at the speed of goodbye Singing “hallelujah brother.” I have seen the light. I am moving past you. Beyond the horizon that lines the sky. I’m counting stars,while you're counting sighs. I am moving past you. Moving forward. But am I Moving backwards at the same time? Because when I looked back and saw you. I started to cry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justme Posted October 5, 2015 Share Posted October 5, 2015 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. I love the poem! It made me emotional. T_T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KamekazePrince Posted October 5, 2015 Share Posted October 5, 2015 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. This is amazing, just so amazing. It starts off with such courage and optimism. And it all falls apart in the last line. This is so beautiful... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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