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Graphics: Kaze | Organized: Saga | Approved: Key

 

 

♪♫ INFORMATION ♫♪

 

This month's theme shall be "Sun".

YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people who love music

and love to write poems, or simply song lyrics.

 

 

Giving the chance to show your feelings about the current theme and in general,

how do you interpret it, we have picked a certain song.

Based on its melody, you have to write down either a poem or a song lyrics.

Of course, it's up to you how you name it, as long as you

 

mention once "Sun" in the content.

 

 

♪♫ RULES ♫♪

 

❣⃛ Post only on poem/ song lyrics text.

 

❣⃛ No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political,

and no child/ animal abuse themes.

 

❣⃛ Minimum 3 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs.

 

❣⃛ Do not use the name of the song we give you

as a title to your poem/ song lyrics.

 

❣⃛ The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything,

depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody.

It's instrumental.

 

❣⃛ Post the final result on this thread.

 

❣⃛ Read the rules again, just in case.

 

 

♪♫ PRIZES ♫♪

 

Each user that applies to "Music Box"

contest will get 2,000 points.

 

The winner will get 5,000 points

+ 1 manga cover card

 

 

♪♫ SONG ♫♪

 

 

 

♪♫ DEADLINE ♫♪

 

Starts ❣⃛ 01 March 2016

Ends ❣⃛ 31 March 2016

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YOU ARE MY STRENGTH

 

 

(I made this with Gokudera's POV, from Katekyo Hitman Reborn. As soon as i read that the theme is "Sun" the first thing that comes to my mind is KHR, since "sun" is Ryohei's power, but i just can't seem to fit him in here so instead i chose Gokudera coz he is Tsuna's right-hand man and also one of my favorite ships in KHR :D )

 

 

 

The first time I met you,

I thought you are not worth it.

But as time goes by,

You're proving your worth.

 

At first, I was just watching you,

Coz I want to know more about you.

I keep on following you wherever you go,

Without you noticing me.

 

Later on, I decided to be by your side.

Whenever you're in danger,

I'm always there to protect you.

I always want to see you smile.

 

Whenever people say that you're the boss,

You always have that uneasiness look.

I know in the first place,

You don't want to be part of this mafia world.

 

But still, when your loved ones are in danger,

Without second thought, you help them.

I'm sure I'm not the only one that,

Love that part of you.

 

One time, I told you that I'll protect you,

No matter what the circumstances are.

Then again, I saw that sad and worried expression,

Saying that you dragged me in this mess.

 

But please let me tell you this,

I'm serious!

Not just me but the guardians as well,

This is our...my...resolve!

 

You're our boss!

I'm your right-hand man!

You're my strength...

You are my sun!

 

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What have I done

 

Well, to be honest, as soon as I played to song, I got this one special feeling. For me, this song is full with so many different emotions that just take over you and crash like small water drops, slowly filling your whole body. I loved it. Enjoy my poem. ^^

 

Looking back at the time,

I see you there,

smiling, laughing at my lame jokes around,

happily, as if nothing could change.

 

I thought so, you thought so.

We both did, yet the results,

They were the worst.

I made them be, because I couldn't choose.

 

You told me to stop,

you tried to show me what is right.

You reached your hand,

yet I was the one - to push you back.

 

And now, here I am - alone.

Wondering why, why did I do that?

You are no longer by my side.

I am a loner, in the dark night.

 

My love was frozen.

My heart was broken.

I feel nothing, but pain.

My chest hurts again.

 

You were my sun,

the one that brightened my world,

yet now, I see nothing, but black.

There is no sunlight.

 

You are no longer there.

I am no longer where I belonged to the most.

Looking back at the time,

what have I done - to lose you like that?

 

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I hope you enjoy I really enjoyed the melody, and this is the first time I have tried something like this. And I was really nervous. *blush*

 

 

Raindrops fall, echoing the heartbeats between you and I.

When time stands still will you still be there?

Pounding in my ears?

 

Shattering destiny?

Cutting the red string of fate?

Melting into our embrace.

When morning comes will we be scorched away?

By the jealous sun.

 

Trembling fingers...

interlaced tightly...

minds racing...

lips seeking one another out in the dark of night.

No sense of self remaining

Only two hearts beating as one.

 

Dawns light breaks the spell.

And life returns...

Your hand...it brushes mine...

as we pass on the crowded street.

And it burns...

Like the sun.

 

My heart breaks, walking away.

Longing for darkness

And raindrops

Nights of trembling fingertips

When two hearts beat as one.

 

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Never only Dreams

 

 

You're gone - again

Coming and going - like the tide

Never staying, always returning

 

Strolling through the park

Dancing under the stars

Days on the beach

Nights ... racing by

 

Opposite lives

Like the sun and the moon

Revolving around each other

 

Never really together

Never far apart

Living reality

Dreaming of what ifs

 

A promise given

A dream today

A life tomorrow

 

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WASTED

 

Flightless leaps, broken dreams

Unyielding promises, lighting steeps

Wandering souls, lost wonderlands

Cruel nightmares, blinding tears

 

Love is less of a whim

A walk in the forest that’s so dark and dim

Love so breakable

A path of thorns, never forgettable

 

Entwined hands, bonded souls

Under the moon, there it goes

Escape the realm, bodies are laid

Under the sun, it burns to fade

 

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Reality

 

They say love can shine brighter than the sun.

After all, in the end,

it's all about what's said and done.

Let's pretend,

 

A relationship crumbles,

and then add a third person,

emotions flared, foundations fumbles.

All hell breaks lose and turmoil worsen.

 

But what if there was no third wheel?

Would it still be daisies and sunshine?

Feelings can still fall ill.

Things are never easy, like a valentine.

 

Stop. Shuffle. Rewind.

Let's take a pause,

because it's never fully defined.

I guess things will never be as it was.

 

 

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|| END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ ||

[YaoiOtaku Sun Contest]

 

 

Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest!

The choice has been really hard since all of you are skilled and talented.

The winners of ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ [YaoiOtaku Sun] are

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As promised everyone who participated will get 2,000 points.

 

 

The winner wins as follows,

- 5,000 points

- 1 Manga Cover card (Please mention the card you want)

 

 

 

 

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