Coffee-Tastic Posted June 1, 2016 Share Posted June 1, 2016 Graphics by Coffee-Tastic. Organized by Saga. Approved by Key. ♪♫ Information : This month's theme shall be "Before I Leave". YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people who love music and love to write poems, or simply song lyrics. Giving the chance to show your feelings about the current theme and in general, how do you interpret it, we have picked a certain song. Based on its melody, you have to write down either a poem or a song lyrics. Of course, it's up to you how you name it, as long as you mention once "Before I Leave" in the content. ♪♫ Rules : -Post only on poem/ song lyrics text. -No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political, and no child/ animal abuse themes. -Minimum 3 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs. -Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/ song lyrics. -The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything, depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody. It's instrumental. -Post the final result on this thread. -Read the rules again, just in case. ♪♫ Prizes : Each user that applies to "Music Box" contest will get 2,000 points. The winner will get 5,000 points + 1 manga cover card ♪♫ Song : ♪♫ Deadline : Begins: June 1st, 2016 Ends: June 30th, 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raychu Posted June 3, 2016 Share Posted June 3, 2016 My entry! (I still don't know why I'm doing this when poetry is not my friend.) EXISTENCE Before I leave, before I go This life I lead, in its sorrows The words are said, they are unheard The dead are dead, the vision blurred Before I’m gone, no I won’t last It’s all a song, lost in the past There is no love, there is no hate The pure white dove, the falling fate I must leave, I cannot stay The breathes I heave of night and day The moon will shine, the sun will set The stars align, but do not fret I’m no myth, no I was here Even if it wasn’t clear I had fun, I did laugh Time will run and it has passed I existed, I was real I was resisted, though I did feel I marked my Earth, I made amends It will hurt, it has to end Before I leave, when I'm forgotten Do not grieve, do not turn rotten Be strong willed, do not stray My life was filled, I had my days. I will leave, I will go This life I lead, ends tomorrow I am happy, no I’m not sad This was the best life I’ve ever had Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
natsukilao Posted June 3, 2016 Share Posted June 3, 2016 This entry is disqualified. ---------------------------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rebel Heart Posted June 3, 2016 Share Posted June 3, 2016 Nice, good contest first time I see it.:Excited: Isaac The road ahead is empty Just like a dead end street And you shouldn't be surprised My dream thrown away Torn between these impulses Where uncertainty is my guide I knew the love had died You didn’t even try Before I leave here tonight You will hold me down Tell me to unlock my heart And make me drop my guard And by morning light I’m staring to the heavens Being totally empty inside Losing a part I can't get back Everything you did to me All the lies you have told me And wrecking my heart like it is dirt I just wanna die You just didn’t understand Our promise we made in the past The thing that we had It would never have last Before I leave here tonight I know this will be the end I will not look back because it hurts This is how our tragic story went All these memories keeping you near All these memories I used to hold dear They will always hold me down Isaac is and always will be what I truly fear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
glesh Posted June 4, 2016 Share Posted June 4, 2016 This is a true story of mine. I cried while writing this. DON'T FORGET ME There are so many people in this world, Friends, family, relatives and strangers. Nature is all around us, We live each day with sadness or happiness. I love my work and I can also meet a lot of people. At first, I thought it's really easy, But I was wrong to say that. Because I will really cry when I know they'll go back to Japan. I always tell my students that "Please don't cry", but I saw them crying and it hurts so much. I will surely miss them so much. I also always tell them that "Let's see each other in Japan" And they'll respond, "sure"! And it makes Me so happy to hear it from them. That's why, before I leave this world, I want to make a lot of memories to the People that I have met and I will never Forget those memories I have with them. Everytime I saw my students graduating, My heart always wants to cry. One of my students already graduated yesterday, And she wrote me a letter and it makes me cry. I also wrote her a letter and what makes Me so happy is that, We have the same contents, it says: "I will not forget you and don't forget me too." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YuikiYaya Posted June 16, 2016 Share Posted June 16, 2016 This my poem or lyric song? I don't know hope in the cold life This cold hands miss you cry wanted a hug from you where are you located? I want to with you the tears that fell on my cheek imprint see you with him you destroy my heart but my body is still there you're laughing behind the destruction of my soul Before I Leave I want you to know, love I love you, love you so much I am grateful to have felt the love though for a moment My tears have been frozen Whistling morning has disappeared Cold air surrounding Me that was in the verge of this limit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AudinoLollipop Posted June 17, 2016 Share Posted June 17, 2016 Here's my entry (poem)~ I tried to stick to 10 syllables per line and make 'em rhyme too~ What Goes Unnoticed Seeing a wasteland rise up from the ground, remembering the steps that are no more, Change is no enigma, yet so profound -- Simple in form yet could run deep to the core. As the days go on, I keep on walking, continuing non-stop, slow and steady Sometimes, I'd slip through doors without thinking of the void which plagues me repeatedly. I clutched my chest as I come to a stop. Fatigue us starting to catch up to me. I slowly kneel down as my knees gave up. I stood, realizing what lacked in me. I bend down to look down upon where I stand then turn 'round to see the steps below me. Each twist and turn reflects my life, unplanned Long and winding, the path screams "Yup, that's me!" All that I lacked, I bottled it all up, and chose to forget them. And so, I'll need to set my feelings free -- let them fill me up before I leave, running at lightning speed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
addyLicious Posted June 29, 2016 Share Posted June 29, 2016 CHANGING, CLINGING Before I leave, before I turn my back I have words to say, as I do this act The past has been unkind, it has been deceptively cruel But I have no regrets, I have no sad tales to tell Today we may part ways, today we left what’s been done But please never think that I’m moving on without qualms You will always be treasured, you will always be in my heart The love we shared, the love we cherished, it will be remembered even if we’re apart We both need time to think of things, to sort our disengaging feelings To face our fears, to correct our mistakes, to accept our shortcomings The love we had was never perfect but it is love I will never ever forget So don’t pretend you’ll throw it out, for it will leave a feeling of regret So please don’t lock your heart, I will come knocking soon Leave the key in the old place that both of us knew from the moon I am certain, I am confident that I will always be back To claim your heart once more, to love you until we fade to black. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deidara00 Posted June 30, 2016 Share Posted June 30, 2016 my entry: (if im not too late) "before the awaited end" before i go to a world unknown will i see the tears you have never shown will i hear the words you vowed to hide inside the heart i have never owned before the breath in me disappears let the final stream bring happy tears let me waste on the beauty of light til colors i love become views i fear before i leave, will you hold my hand this cold world, i can no longer stand only your warmth can liven my soul mysteries that i cannot understand when the sun gives way to stormy rain i fear the day i part from your chain but i did wish for this day to come it is time to rest from this tiring pain (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
itsapanda16 Posted July 1, 2016 Share Posted July 1, 2016 A Simple Confession I have something to tell you, it was not like the first, since then, I have been really blue, one of the worst. Now, that I have your attention, I want to call it quits. It is something that has gripped my head with tension. I am no longer happy and it's not a spontaneous split. My stomach has been in knots, my fingers crossed and breaths held. It was not all for naught, never a regret; never was compelled. Before I leave, please hear me out, I have grieved; I was in doubt. It was a sum too many, too vast. It's a simple goodbye to the past. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Key Posted July 1, 2016 Share Posted July 1, 2016 || END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ || [YaoiOtaku Before I Leave Contest] Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest! I think this is the 3rd contest this month in which we cannot decide upon a winner, so, everyone will be awarded. Well done @ Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. @ Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. @ Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Everyone who participated gets 2,000 points. The winners win as follows, - 5,000 points - 1 Manga Cover card (Please mention the card you want) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AudinoLollipop Posted July 2, 2016 Share Posted July 2, 2016 Oh wow! I can't believe I won! *does a little victory dance* Thank you very much! I'd like the Katekyo manga card please. ^^ Thank again! Congrats to Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. and Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. as well! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raychu Posted July 2, 2016 Share Posted July 2, 2016 oooHhHh. I don't know if I should be crying because I thought that was a horrible entry, if I should be extremely happy. I'll just be both. Thank you so much! Congrats Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. and Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. !! I would like the Junjou Terrorist manga card please. Thank you very much! I'll just go cry over there now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
addyLicious Posted July 2, 2016 Share Posted July 2, 2016 Hahaha. Congrats to the both of you as well. Great job everyone! Thanks Key! I want the.... ooops! Already got my card! Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rebel Heart Posted July 3, 2016 Share Posted July 3, 2016 Congratulations to the winners! Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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