gin Posted July 1, 2016 Share Posted July 1, 2016 [table=width: 500, class: full_grid, align: center] [tr] [td] ORGANIZED | Saga APPROVED | Key ▻ I N F O R M A T I O N THIS MONTH'S THEME SHALL BE "THE FIRE WITHIN". YAOIOTAKU DECIDED TO OPEN A THREAD FOR PEOPLE WHO LOVE MUSIC AND LOVE TO WRITE POEMS, OR SIMPLY SONG LYRICS. GIVING THE CHANCE TO SHOW YOUR FEELINGS ABOUT THE CURRENT THEME AND IN GENERAL, HOW DO YOU INTERPRET IT, WE HAVE PICKED A CERTAIN SONG. BASED ON ITS MELODY, YOU HAVE TO WRITE DOWN EITHER A POEM OR A SONG LYRICS. OF COURSE, IT'S UP TO YOU HOW YOU NAME IT, AS LONG AS YOU MENTION ONCE "THE FIRE WITHIN" IN THE CONTENT. ▻ R U L E S ▻ POST ONLY ON POEM/ SONG LYRICS TEXT. ▻ NO VULGAR WORDS, NO RACISM, NO RELIGIOUS, NO POLITICAL, AND NO CHILD/ ANIMAL ABUSE THEMES. ▻ MINIMUM 3 PARAGRAPHS, MAXIMUM 8 PARAGRAPHS. ▻ DO NOT USE THE NAME OF THE SONG WE GIVE YOU AS A TITLE TO YOUR POEM/ SONG LYRICS. ▻ THE THEME OF YOUR MASTERPIECE CAN BE ABOUT ANYTHING, DEPENDS ON WHAT FEELINGS YOU GET WHEN YOU LISTEN TO THE MELODY. IT'S INSTRUMENTAL. ▻ POST THE FINAL RESULT ON THIS THREAD. ▻ READ THE RULES AGAIN, JUST IN CASE. ▻ P R I Z E S ▻ EACH USER THAT APPLIES TO "MUSIC BOX" CONTEST WILL GET 2,000 POINTS. ▻ THE WINNER WILL GET 5,000 POINTS + 1 MANGA COVER CARD ▻ S O N G ▻ D E A D L I N E ▻ START July 2016 ▻ END 01 August 2016 [/td] [/tr] [/table] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
natsukilao Posted July 2, 2016 Share Posted July 2, 2016 This entry is disqualified. ---------------------------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lost and found Posted July 4, 2016 Share Posted July 4, 2016 Mr. Natsukilao, please stop plagiarizing the poems of the writers in HelloPoetry(.com). The first two stanzas of this poem and the last one are from the poem "The fire within" by Traveler and the third to seventh stanzas are from "The sparkle within your eyes" by The Shy Poet. You do know that this is not the first time you did this act for all of your entries in this contest are stolen from the works of different people so please disclaim the poems you posted or take it down if possible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saga Posted July 4, 2016 Share Posted July 4, 2016 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. , I will be contacting you to reply to your PM, please, let's not spam the threads. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geovanna Posted July 5, 2016 Share Posted July 5, 2016 Here's my submission, it was a blast to do. Not sure if I should include my song anywhere so sorry if I was supposed to. :Shrug: Fire Watch By Geo Imprisoned by the shackles of our own free will We take another swig from this jar labelled poison pills Forced to watch in isolation, there's only an apathetic resolution We sit above and breathe our weakness, captivated by our air pollution Friendly faces seem to dwindle and dwindle in the conspiring sky A steady beat begins to rekindle, thumping in the corner of your thigh We wonder if you can hear us praying for your heat We wonder if you can hear us praying for your heat Smaller and smaller, our fires grow to dust The fire within so barely breathing blown out with a gust Teenier and teenier, we grow weak to the bust But You are chaos burning flames alight, Something different, something vast Glowing brightly in some ones night Blazing fast in some ones past and it is beautiful and you are beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raychu Posted July 14, 2016 Share Posted July 14, 2016 So I thought I'd join again for kicks. I had a really fun time writing this one, I feel like this one was just so simple for me this time instead of taking forever. Aha, yay. Poetry still isn't my friend though. A Hero Inside There are crumbling house with the smoke of freedom There is a caged bird singing the sad tunes of reality The world takes and gives without warning or reason People stumble as they grip onto their remaining sanity Around the corner, lurking in the shadows is the blackbird It creeps it’s way into unstable minds as it consumes The words of the devoured will forever remain unheard It has yet to be caught as it mysteriously looms We are trapped in a controlling line which keeps up still The blackbird is the holder of the key for escape It only captures with the intention of terrible ill will We follow mindlessly, intending to just obey We can’t fight back, our minds are too weak Our bodies are worn from the endless tasks The words we speak are fragile and meek Pretending to be alright with our imaginary masques There is someone who is meant to free us from the box They are to rise like a Phoenix from the ashes on the ground They are the genius as they pick the broken locks They are freer than a bird, they are left unbound This savior is always fighting back with his very own strength He refuses to let the blackbird continue to take from humanity His mighty power, his intelligence will yield at length. He’s the fire within our endless cavity When we are lost, he will take the time to show us the way He will stop the blackbird from chipping away at our minds He will become the savior of both night and day He may not be with us, he still sends us many signs He is our superhero that we have awaited for many years He is our sun that shines out the blackness in our brains He handkerchief that has caught my dropping tears He is the ax that has broken my chains A chain that weighs our minds down with sadness and anger The blackbird is the creator of evil that dwells on the streets We were the tree with it’s unbreakable strangler Waiting for the impossible chance of pure peace The fire of our hero casts away these grim emotions He casts them away with his light blinding presence He has become the song and chant what words have spoken He is the rare feeling of such an impeccable pleasance This savior is not just one man, but many to count for He is the fire within our hearts that waits to be awoken These Phoenix's are the promises that we swore We listen to the sad tales that were once spoken The hearts that reside within our body are as warm as the sun The help guide us through the terrible games of evil We have the ability to fight back instead of having to run We can continue to protect ourselves from what it lethal A fire within is a reborn feeling that is warm and fuzzy It allows for a change in what was once a broken mind It can bring in the beauty as if destroys the ugly We are finally given the gift to see from behind our blinds We can create a security to keep our blackbird out To protect our wonderful minds and their uniqueness Let the new tree of life in your mind begin to sprout Bring out the strengths within to crush your weakness Become a fire that burns brightly to inspire It’s hard to keep marching, but catching up is worse Instead of hiding from ambition, begin to aspire Lift the blackening shadows of the trapping curse Let yourself free from the birdcage that you are stuck in Fly through the skies and shine brilliantly like Apollo Deceive the blackbird with a beautiful grin Take action, take lead, don’t just follow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rebel Heart Posted July 27, 2016 Share Posted July 27, 2016 Well here is my entry for this month Extraterrestrial inside my heart The fire within you The purest form of what love means to me Together balancing on this razor thing line Like it was meant to be It fuels the heart to know that you are mine You tainted my purest desire Corrupting every part of my soul It’s supernatural Like a ray of light shining bright You are something else, extraterrestrial This love can only last a lifetime Facing these fearful odds I lost my chance to make you mine Tears of regret fall upon your grave The inevitable space between us Crying on the kitchen floor Don’t go away don’t go away Give me the strength to move on But deep inside of me the fire stays Telling me that my heart must go on Like ashes to the wind I know somewhere deep in the universe You will be watching over me In the end we are all stardust of time We are all extraterrestrial The fire within me was lit by you Every night in my dreams Far across and far away You will come and show me how to keep this fire on I wake up crying begging you to stay I don’t want to be alone I wish you would be here The fire almost goes out It’s the emptiness which I fear But you will be there inside my heart Wherever you are, near of far The fire will always be in my heart When I grow up old and all alone The fire you showed me Is enough for me to face the world head on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
glesh Posted July 30, 2016 Share Posted July 30, 2016 PEACE IS WHAT WE WANT First there was light. It's the light that we can find our way. Resting near a fire has a nice feeling but the End is near to those who can't find their way. Endless killing is not the Answer to our problems, Rather, we need to look for a solution. The fire within us is the answer. Hence, we need to cooperate with each other. Saying it's not possible to have A cooperation with each other and some people just Vent their anger to others Even though they didn't do anything wrong. People wants peace, Each country wants peace. That's why we need to Act fast and all of us should Cooperate with one another or Else there will be another war. And we don't want that, right? So cooperation, honesty, trust, kind, Understanding are one of the keys That will lead us to peace. >>I'm writing this while I'm' on my bed coz i'm not feeling well and so, the contents are somewhat like that xDD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
itsapanda16 Posted July 30, 2016 Share Posted July 30, 2016 Cinders Through the turmoil and madness, there was a whisper that called out for help, yet those cries fell through the cracks of darkness. Weeping; It was no accident, that those pleads were left unheard, cause those blind devotions were your catalyst. Stirring; It wasn't supposed to end like this; no matter how much was wavered. The fire within will always be missed. Returning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marjorie Haukea Williams Posted July 31, 2016 Share Posted July 31, 2016 Fire in my Heartbeat Boldest is the rapture a broken promise never kept Stronger still is the fire within a smoothest silk when time permits, I end all bonds neither broken or vanished just sealed away in the cave deepest in my heart the fire within a choir of angels flicker out into the open seas a sage appears to grant a wish to the forgotten the lost lamb the wolf in sheep's clothing to appear in a dream to disappear in a mere blink of an eye the war of worlds in my darkest nightmares the fire within a thousand folded to be told in secret to my children's children the legacy of those to come heroes in waiting A new born chaos anarchy on the field a misadventure a fractured hand gone astray is the way forward looking to the past a moment later it is gone forevermore a prayer goes unanswered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
addyLicious Posted July 31, 2016 Share Posted July 31, 2016 UNYIELDING We cannot change the past, it has been written in slab We cannot see the future, it is bleak and vague The path has been laid out, our destiny is mapped Yet who says it's our duty to just follow it out? We have been given liberty to do as we desire We have been given the choice that we hope to inspire It is in our hands to make the best out of everything Yet why do we seek things that we cannot win? It is the human nature to fear and cower It is the human nature to defend and go bolder It is our pride, it is our freedom that speaks for our actions It ignites the fire within us to achieve the deem completion Our weakness is only such if we allow it to be so We have the tools, we have the means to fight for our volition Backing up isn't a choice for we'll battle till the end To grasp that shining moment, to prove that we can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
412Chie Posted August 1, 2016 Share Posted August 1, 2016 Let me try my hand on this with this entry... Thanks Ablaze.... This warmth that's spreads from my stomach numbing my senses, I can't breath And when you touch me... That places burning, scorching hot You set me ablaze without my consent when I come to know it, the fire within... Everything has been on motion Yet you know I can't going back I want to run... Yet this chain you set me up, hindering my sight, and I can't fly Been asking you, why you do this? What's have I done to you? What's happening? And now that it's happen What I know is nurturing it Let it grows and fuel it with despairs Watching it burst out of my chest setting you ablaze and burn in your own pain It's not like I'll laugh it out Because hurting was never in my nature Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Key Posted August 1, 2016 Share Posted August 1, 2016 || END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ || [YaoiOtaku The Fire Within Contest] Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest! Our winner is @ Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Everyone who participated gets 2,000 points. The winner wins as follows, - 5,000 points - 1 Manga Cover card (Please mention the card you want) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raychu Posted August 3, 2016 Share Posted August 3, 2016 Aahhh. Thank you so, so much!!! This poem took me hours of migraines and some tears. I'm so ridiculously happy. I was just ready to roll up into a ball from my happiness. Getting off of the plane and finally finding a service area, seeing this, I was just so excited, like a child. Once again, thank you very much! Good job to everyone else who participated. I would like the Escape Journey manga cover card please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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