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In your deep cavernous warm entrance I discover a pleasure to your pain

 

As you writhe in bouts of havoc and rapture while i flick the bits of moisture of clammy droplets on your skin

 

We are blinded to the world that peeks in the windows around us

 

We are deaf to the sounds of reality but our own

 

I am drowning between tidal waves of overwhelming euphoric torture as i viciously take you with me in my arms

 

Your appetite knows no bounds just a bottomless pit of wanton and madness

 

I can feel your mind screaming for me to dissolve this and yet you linger desperately for my strength to take you to places your mind fears to thread in your waking hours

 

I know not how much deeper i can bury you in this tangled mess of sheets and twisted materials of warmth and wetness

 

Your eyes are half closing to the silky words coming out of my mouth as i pour them endlessly to your ears

 

Your hot breath on my ears driving me to the brink of madness and drunkenness

 

A blinding white hot searing light we see together as we desperately capture the embrace of completion

 

Sated, drunk, weakness, blissful sleep overcome us finally.

 

Your lips move making a sound I could barely read.

 

I reach for your hand as you clasp your fingers to mine

 

We are one.

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ohh...:) so sweet............:hamtaro-005 (5):

Although I dont understand all the words (im bad in english.. :hamtaro-005 (19): I have guessed many words;) ) but I love it XD

Thank you XD

You have fic on fanfiction, dont you???

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Oh thank you so much for the lovely words.

 

Yes I do write fanfiction but I have not posted any fanfic works in the forum yet.

 

But I have a link which you can see in my signature here. *wink-wink*

 

This poem will be a start for now.

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Oh my... This is so, so, so damn GOOD!:Red_fox7:

The words you used, the way the sentences are formed, everything is amazingly done *.*

I can say that I absolutely loved it and want,need to read more of this.

Keep up the awesome work (:

Going to your fanfiction.net page right now!~

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Oh my! Thank you so much for reading. It's been quite a pleasure to bring this much pleasure to my readers.

 

Thank you for your review. Very much appreciated.

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I loved this, it was sooo amazing. I hope you will grace the forum with one of your stories soon :msn_red_fox 15

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Oh thank you so much for reading.

 

Yes, I intend to share some of my stories in the forum in the future.

 

I am very humbled.

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I loooove it!!!!!!!!!!! I've just become your fan!!! :hamtaro-005 (12):

 

Indeed, you should post here on the forum some of your fictions! I'd love to read them! :hamtaro-005 (6):

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OMG!

 

I just earned a fan from you. Thank you so much. You just made my day. You're so sweet. *hugs*

 

Yes, I will post more in the future for everyone's pleasure.

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Graet poem! I really liked it! You have a very special style! Keep it up and we surely are looking forward to more of your works! :)

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I feel so warm and tingly inside. Thank you for making me feel this way.

 

Thank you for your reading and reviewing my poem.

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You do not have to thank me for that! I just said what I felt! I have to thank you again for your amazing pieces of art

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Wow, such a passionate poem. It's very romantic and sultry at the same time :cuteonion41:. I couldn't but blush while reading :3onion15:. Really awesome stuff ya got there. Keep at it!

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Ohohohohoh!

 

I'm blushing too. Thank you so much for reading. I'm so glad it had that effect on you as it had on me when I was writing it.

 

What can I say? I love passion. I breathe passion. Passion is living.

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. .OMG, senpai, this is so AMAZING :banhbao29:

 

. .my admiration for you is getting stronger (deeper is not the right term ,right?), :cuteonion41:

 

. .i'm not mistaken to call you as (my) senpai :D :leaf12:

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. .OMG, senpai, this is so AMAZING :banhbao29:

 

. .my admiration for you is getting stronger (deeper is not the right term ,right?), :cuteonion41:

 

. .i'm not mistaken to call you as (my) senpai :D :leaf12:

 

*hugs tight*

 

thanks so much for reading and your thoughts on this. I am honored that you consider me as your senpai.

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reaalllyyy good! the ending is so touching.

 

congratulations!

 

oh thank you! thank you so much for your comment and for taking the time to read my poetry. I am very happy. :)

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Wow Yojichan, such sultry words that flows from your pen onto the paper filled with feeling and emotions and definitely a lot of passion. Heat, desire, needs to be fulfilled. Such talent please continue to share with us these masterpieces. I enjoyed reading this.

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Wow Yojichan, such sultry words that flows from your pen onto the paper filled with feeling and emotions and definitely a lot of passion. Heat, desire, needs to be fulfilled. Such talent please continue to share with us these masterpieces. I enjoyed reading this.

 

Oh thank you so much for reading and your lovely comment. *hugs*

Always a pleasure to release such passionate writings and share the passion with everyone.

I'm very pleased to pleasure you. :)

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Yojichan, the poem is great and hot and... it's just amazing! Love it a looot! :hamtaro-005 (8):

 

Oh thanks so much, Macy!

I'm so happy to know that you love it.

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