misakixusagi Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 LOVELESS I had a dream that was endless, You were standing there breathless and staring as I was friendless and afraid, We looked at each other as we realised we were nameless but didn’t know why, I tried to cry but I was tearless, You cried while skinless and wished that life was painless, We both knew that we were becoming bondless and slowly we were trust less, It was at that point when we became loveless while slightly being memory less, I started to think the world was warless, but woke startled, I was now sleepless and it was then I knew what zero was. 11 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 It's quite LOVABLE actually! Kudos to you. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aoi Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 I really like your poem! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted March 5, 2011 Author Share Posted March 5, 2011 awsome thanks guys, ill have to see what other ones to put up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justme Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 Oh my! Looove it!!!! These 2 lines are just wow "We looked at each other as we realised we were nameless but didn’t know why, I tried to cry but I was tearless". Really really good! Post moooore! 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JenovaVII Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 Just... B r i l l i a n t. You left me wordless-- (no pun intended) Please! do continue to write text pieces as beautiful as this one! :5yoyo34: 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted March 5, 2011 Author Share Posted March 5, 2011 i wasnt sure my poems are any good, its hard to put your emotions into words sometimes, and you never know if people will like them x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lotusflower Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 i love it, i love it!!! it was a very beautiful poem fantastic!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
현애 Posted March 6, 2011 Share Posted March 6, 2011 Nice poem very beautiful and i love it.. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brohne Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 This is beautiful! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 LOVELESS We both knew that we were becoming bondless and slowly we were trust less, It was at that point when we became loveless while slightly being memory less, . .this part i liked the most, it's like saying, PART WAYS, :leaf9: . .simple yet meaningful :hamtaro-005 (19): Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amander123 Posted April 28, 2011 Share Posted April 28, 2011 Very sad but beautiful!!! I loved it!! Definitely post more!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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