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Invisible

 

I look at you as you stare at her

You never seem to see

Why can’t you just for one last look

Turn and glance at me.

 

I wonder if you’ve ever cared

Or if you’ve ever thought

About the boy that never speaks

The one that’s never caught

 

I feel so lonely standing here

You would never know

The pain of being different

The pain that I don’t show

 

But now it has become too late

And I can’t take no more

I place it just upon my wrist

I think I’ll count to four....

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I wonder if you’ve ever cared

Or if you’ve ever thought

About the boy that never speaks

The one that’s never caught

 

I am dead in love with the way this strophe sounds when you read it aloud. Seriously.

Thank you very much and keep presenting us with your words (:

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I love it very much! This part is just.... wow! "You would never know/The pain of being different/The pain that I don’t show". I love it a lot!

I love your writing style! You should post some more!

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. .simple words were enough :) (i mean, these simple words that made the poem, was just enough to express hidden feelings)

 

(expressive, indeed) :)

 

. .i like it as a whole :)

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