lotusflower Posted March 6, 2011 Share Posted March 6, 2011 i wrote this May 27,2009 (so i was 11) here goes....... Can't get what I truly desire... The look in his eyes... as if longing for nothing, but the touch if his lover it hurts...my chest hurts will I get what I truly desire? I love him can he hear me? My voice is so loud, does he even notice me? Its hard... why can't I ease this pain? But I love him!! will I get what I truly desire? We're together... But it doesn't feel real, I'm happy...I really am But... What if I'm trapped in my own fantasy I AM ... LOST, FORGOTTEN, TRAPPED. 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
현애 Posted March 6, 2011 Share Posted March 6, 2011 "Can't get what I truly desire... The look in his eyes... as if longing for nothing, but the touch if his lover it hurts...my chest hurts will I get what I truly desire?" i like this so nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YLover Posted March 6, 2011 Share Posted March 6, 2011 Ohhh... so beautiful!!!! I looooove it!!! :leaf3: Was it made for that guy you was in love with? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miro Posted March 6, 2011 Share Posted March 6, 2011 Beautiful! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lotusflower Posted March 6, 2011 Author Share Posted March 6, 2011 YLover no it wasn't it was jus the thought of the moment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted March 6, 2011 Share Posted March 6, 2011 Oh, unrequited love! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted March 6, 2011 Share Posted March 6, 2011 wow really nice, i like the 2nd paragraph Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YLove Posted March 7, 2011 Share Posted March 7, 2011 Cuuuute! I love it! :leaf3: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted April 28, 2011 Share Posted April 28, 2011 . .oh, hard feelings :leaf9: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lotusflower Posted June 18, 2011 Author Share Posted June 18, 2011 i didnt think i could write somethin' this deep i was thinkin' about alot to have written somethin' like this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilredphoenix Posted July 16, 2011 Share Posted July 16, 2011 WOW! Lotusflower that was beautiful such talent the words seemed to flow. Please continue to share with us when you can. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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