Asakura-Sama Posted September 30, 2016 Share Posted September 30, 2016 Graphics: Asakura-Sama | Organized: Saga | Approved: Key INFORMATION This month's theme shall be "Ragged Doll". YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people who love music and love to write poems, or simply song lyrics. Giving the chance to show your feelings about the current theme and in general, how do you interpret it, we have picked a certain song. Based on its melody, you have to write down either a poem or a song lyrics. Of course, it's up to you how you name it, as long as you mention once "Ragged Doll" in the content. RULES Post only on poem/ song lyrics text. No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political, and no child/ animal abuse themes. Minimum 3 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs. Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/ song lyrics. The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything, depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody. It's instrumental. Post the final result on this thread. Read the rules again, just in case. PRIZES Each user that applies to "Music Box" contest will get 2,000 points. The winner will get 5,000 points + 1 manga cover card SONG DEADLINE Starts in 01 October 2016 End of October 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
412Chie Posted October 6, 2016 Share Posted October 6, 2016 Joined "POSSESSED" Tick tock, Tick tock, Tick tock Ugh! It's deafening. It's too loud Why won't it stop? You're nagging too much What did you say again? Ah! Sssst! Can you hear that? Isn't it a melodious sound? You used to love it, right? When belt met flesh or is it your booze bottle? Ah, yeah! But this time, it's not coming from me Nope, nada, nay nay Nope, it's not me Sure, you wish it's me, didn't you? Hmm! Don't look at me like that! Pleading eyes didn't suit you Nor remorse Only disdain and anger suit you just like you used to Don't you remember the slick sound of whip meeting my bloodied flesh? You didn't shown remorse then Nor you ever heard my fleas? Nope. You just have to go and bed that whore Where did the love you declared when you first met me go? Don't you like me anymore? Am I not beautiful now? Is she better than me? Let's see how much she can endure your usual routines with me! Ssst! Not too loud! Tell her to stop! You don't like it when I screamed, do you? It's just a small incision, what's a big deal? Oh yeah, it's the same scalpel you used to use Isn't it beautiful? I learned from the best Oh. Shut up! Shut up! Shut up! Won't your throat hurt screaming like that? Just look at her! I made her gorgeous No wonder you choose her I'm just a ragged doll after all I said SHUT UP!!! How come you like a noisy thing like this? Huh, it's stop making a sound Ah, sorry Looks like the bat just flew to her head Now, won't you just comeback to me already? Seriously, the song is creepy. And I just wanted a revenge. Let me know, if somehow I break any rules. The admin can take down the post, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rebel Heart Posted October 7, 2016 Share Posted October 7, 2016 Empty shell I stare into the distant Only to see my reflection Which like myself Was once in motion Just like you my sweetheart In this crazy world Where you took the toll Bound by wires and rope A soulless body just like a ragged doll Burning tears hit my eyes, when I lose all hope Fathomless deep and menacing black Is what resides inside of me I hope I'll never wake up So that I’ll never have to feel this pain Of loneliness inside of me It’s written in the sky An unavoidable future It will be waiting for me Where I can’t breathe, eat or live Without you I’m nothing But an empty shell And in the distance I can hear your voice And I lose it from despair Giving me no choice Why is life so unfair It is as if the void has crawled into your body Just to destroy everything I held so dear And this feeling frightens me Filling my head with endless fear And my eyes become blacker then black And these eyes stare into the distant Where they see this ragged doll Which like myself Was once in motion Just like you where my sweetheart And secretly I hope That I will depart from this world Floating along Into to the endless sky Where you will be waiting for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
addyLicious Posted October 31, 2016 Share Posted October 31, 2016 UNANSWERED I have been left behind, bared and shattered Flies gathered, feasting on my flesh together But the pain refuse to leave me, it lingers around Making death like a faraway dream, wishing I'm buried deep on the ground I have been tossed behind, stepped on and ignored Like a ragged doll, thrown, battered and floored My worth has all been used up I bear no more value that merit to be restored I looked up the sky and questioned myself Why did it end up like this when I only have given my heart and soul? Is it wrong to love somebody with everything, only to be thrown? But alas, I can never have the answer I've been looking for, The truth that I've always been craving to hear. For I am left alone and empty in this terrifying darkness As I bear the pain, that is slowly killing me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Key Posted November 1, 2016 Share Posted November 1, 2016 || END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ || [YaoiOtaku Ragged Doll Contest] Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest! All entries were very good and we had a hard time deciding. Our winners are Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. The winners win as follows, - 5,000 points - 1 Manga Cover card (Please mention the card you want) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rebel Heart Posted November 2, 2016 Share Posted November 2, 2016 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. blue hero Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Key Posted November 2, 2016 Share Posted November 2, 2016 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. There you have it (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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