misakixusagi Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 Life They all lie behind the smile; It’s like some fairy tale. They all play the part they’re cast And hide behind the veil. A curtain here, a stage door there; That’s how they come and go; The life of all the people That put on such a show. The words they weave with measured tone Which sound just like a script; Copying and repeating Until you declare that’s it They stop and stare right at you ‘How dare you say those things?’ They turn around and leave the stage; Believing they are kings. 15 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuki Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 I like your poetry! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted March 10, 2011 Author Share Posted March 10, 2011 thank you very much ^_^ :hamtaro-005 (8): Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nena21 Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 "They stop and stare right at you ‘How dare you say those things?’ They turn around and leave the stage; Believing they are kings." This part is just wonderful! I love the whole poem, but at that part I was speechless...:5yoyo32: Really really good! I loved it!!!! :leaf3: 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted March 10, 2011 Author Share Posted March 10, 2011 Glad u enjoyed it, it really makes me happy to see people enjoy them, cause no one i know has even seen them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karin Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 I like your poetry! Thx for sharing with us! :Red_fox: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
현애 Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 wow..awesome poem...so nice,, 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lotusflower Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 i love it it says so much thats poetry!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 Very interesting! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matti_19 Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 I like it! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chacha Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 I also like it!!! I like to read poetry! :Red_fox7: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JenovaVII Posted March 19, 2011 Share Posted March 19, 2011 "They all lie behind the smile (...) Believing they are kings." Love, love, LOVE. More, please?! :Red_fox: 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miro Posted March 19, 2011 Share Posted March 19, 2011 "They all lie behind the smile (...) Believing they are kings." Love, love, LOVE. More, please?! :Red_fox: Yes, I also want to read more poems! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YAO(H)I_lover Posted March 21, 2011 Share Posted March 21, 2011 Great poem!:5yoyo34::5yoyo34: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted April 28, 2011 Share Posted April 28, 2011 Life They all lie behind the smile; It’s like some fairy tale. They all play the part they’re cast And hide behind the veil. A curtain here, a stage door there; That’s how they come and go; The life of all the people That put on such a show. The words they weave with measured tone Which sound just like a script; Copying and repeating Until you declare that’s it They stop and stare right at you ‘How dare you say those things?’ They turn around and leave the stage; Believing they are kings. . .i love this, metaphors were great 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilredphoenix Posted July 16, 2011 Share Posted July 16, 2011 WOW! Misaki that was well said very expressive words about how ppl can be. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted July 16, 2011 Author Share Posted July 16, 2011 Thanks guys x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata--chan Posted November 25, 2011 Share Posted November 25, 2011 Wow Amazing very powerful poem . This line:They turn around and leave the stage; Believing they are kings. is wonderful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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