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♪♫ INFORMATION ♪♫

This month's theme shall be "Frozen". YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people who love music and love to write poems, or simply song lyrics. Giving the chance to show your feelings about the current theme and in general, how do you interpret it, we have picked a certain song. Based on its melody, you have to write down either a poem or a song lyrics. Of course, it's up to you how you name it, as long as you mention once "Frozen" in the content.

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+ Post only on poem/ song lyrics text.

 

+ No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political, and no child/ animal abuse themes.

 

+ Minimum 3 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs.

+ Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/ song lyrics.

 

+ The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything, depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody. It's instrumental.

 

+ Post the final result on this thread.

 

+ Read the rules again, just in case.

 

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Each user that applies to "Music Box" contest will get 2,000 points.

The winner will get 5,000 points + 1 manga cover card

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Starts 1st of November 2016

Ends 30th of Novermber 2016[/TD]

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War

 

when conflict coloured the world

our peaceful life is gone

your duty is the one who separated us

to the tomorrow you go

 

the tomorrow that the sky is red

mountain of body

sea of red

the tomorrow that separated us eternally

 

your warm is gone

everything is cold

everything is pain

 

FROZEN

my soul was frozen

without you

without you in my side

 

 

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oh my god I luv you so much, this is one of my favourite songs of all times, next to drowned world, I love that album of Madonna and I listen to this music ever since I was a kid. this was the first album which made me a fan of hers. ohhhhh so pumped up thank you again!:In love:cheetah4:leaf15:yoyo4foxy2:cuteonion49:

 

 

Going under

 

 

In the beginning it was fun

Love came naturally

Our hearts where one

And our minds where at peace

Living our lives carefree

 

How wrong could I be?

You fucked me up more than a little

It was all a silly game for you

Now I’m standing here all alone

It’s like a nightmare to me

 

Like a broken thing

I’m going under, under

Because you broke my wings

Unable to fly away, away

Drowning in this world of pain

 

Hmmmmmm

If I only could see

Hmmmmmm

That I’m frozen beneath this sea

Hmmmmmm

Of Painful memories

Hmmmmmm

If I could only fly away

Hmmmmmm

Then I wouldn’t be forced here to stay

hmmmmmm

 

My eyes where full of pride and joy

Until that unfaithful day you said it was over

You spouted a few secrets like it was nothing

These painful memories making me sober

I’m crying myself to sleep facing cruel reality

 

Your clever ways got the best of me

I let you inside my heart

You treated me like dirt or even less

And you cut it up and tore it into pieces

And left me alone in this mess

 

Like a broken thing

I’m going under, under

Because you broke my wings

Unable to fly away, away

Drowning in this world of pain

 

Hmmmmmm

If I only could see

Hmmmmmm

That I’m frozen beneath this sea

Hmmmmmm

Of Painful memories

Hmmmmmm

If I could only fly away

Hmmmmmm

Then I wouldn’t be forced here to stay

Hmmmmmm

 

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:_red_fox 8

 

This melody is so beautiful!

 

 

 

Your Soul in my Heart

 

Through the horizon I seek your eyes

It's too late, I watch you walk away

Frozen I watch you disappear into the distance

My chest hurts as my heart cracks.

 

The heat of your body next to mine comforted me

Your closeness used to ease my weeping heart

Seeing myself reflected in your beautiful eyes made my days

Your very presence made the darker corners shine.

 

Now everything seems broken

but I'll take strength from your memory

I will get up and face tomorrow

I'll wipe my tears and keep on going

One step at a time.

 

Our paths connected and everything intensified

Each shared experience nourished my soul

You made me grow and you grew next to me

That glow stays inside me and continues to shine.

 

Thanks to you the window to my soul is clearer

You opened me to the world and its colors

Maybe today will be a good day

I'll keep my head up and take a deep breath.

 

Now everything seems broken

but I'll take strength from your memory

I will get up and face tomorrow

I'll wipe my tears and keep on going

One step at a time.

 

The days pass one by one and fall on me like a waterfall

The pain that oppresses me appears yet again

At the moment everything seems somewhat opaque

I came tumbling down.

 

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Last Autumn

 

I can't even remember,

going back to what happened last autumn,

when everything hit rock bottom.

When it was dark. When she was gone,

leaving me all alone. Frozen.

 

It was supposed to have lasted beyond forever.

Going as far back as I could have remembered,

back to that dreadful September.

When things started to fall apart amongst lies,

kicking the path onto a whole different stride.

 

I discovered that journey was defeated,

by something unforeseen,

by something that was yet to be seen.

Then, I was given a clue,

that this was worse than what I knew.

 

Someone else was pulling at those strings,

like playthings.

I was never a fan of puppeteers,

controlling everything, driving my fears.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Hmmm I really like the melody it's beautiful yoyo5

 

Dying

 

 

When I look up and see the black sky

Looking down at me

It reminds me of my past mistakes

It makes me want to cry

 

I know that I can see nothing but darkness surrounding me

So please come and save me

If you can hear me

Just like last time

 

My heart is aching

My soul is freezing

My time is over

Why aren't you here?

 

FROZEN

Save me from myself

BREATHLESS

I'm dying here

 

You're not coming

Still I'm waiting

Where are you right now?

 

BROKEN

Pick up my pieces

LIFELESS

I'm lying here

 

You were here before

You've seen me before

All this time how could you forget?

 

My frozen lips say your name one last time

Breathless I'm lying here

My broken heart stops beating

Lifeless I'm waiting for death to come and get me

 

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|| END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ ||

[YaoiOtaku Frozen Contest]

 

 

Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest! All entries were very good and we had a hard time deciding.

Our winners are @

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The winners win as follows,

- 5,000 points

- 1 Manga Cover card (Please mention the card you want)

All participants get 2,000 points

 

 

 

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This was so much fun!!!

 

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