yojichan Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 It's so amazing that I love you It's funny that way but you know I do The way you look into my eyes and then look away Just like that you've made me feel what you had to say I love how your fingers reach out for mine The way you close your eyes under a sunshine The quiet walks in the park we share Listening to me talk a mile as you stare I love the smell of the fresh cologne on your skin The way you say my name fills me within This kind of love you don't want defined This kind of love from others we can never find. Author notes: :hamtaro-005 (6): Haha! This is my very first Takumi-kun series inspired poetry. I had Misu's face in my head as I channeled my inner Shingyouji. This is my take on their relationship since they're not as lovey dovey as Takumi and Gii. These two have a different take on their relationship, it's theirs alone. I like the selfishness in that. It's almost sweet and endearing at the same time. I hope you enjoyed! 24 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
animegirl Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 Cuuute! I love it soooo much! These lines are my favorites! "This kind of love you don't want defined This kind of love from others we can never find." :leaf15: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted March 18, 2011 Author Share Posted March 18, 2011 Thank you so much for reading, sweetheart! I really appreciate the fact that you love it so much. Ooooh! I'm blushing now. Thank you! *hugs* 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aoi Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 I love it too! Especially this lines: "I love the smell of the fresh cologne on your skin The way you say my name fills me within" ... just perfect! :banhbao45: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JuJu Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 I love the smell of the fresh cologne on your skin The way you say my name fills me within This kind of love you don't want defined This kind of love from others we can never find. ... Ohh...soo sweeetttt haha....all of your words are so amazing love it 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nena21 Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 Awwwww!!!! Yoji-sama, have mercy on our hearts! Got to love it! My favorite part from it is this one "I love how your fingers reach out for mine The way you close your eyes under a sunshine The quiet walks in the park we share Listening to me talk a mile as you stare" 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted March 18, 2011 Author Share Posted March 18, 2011 I love it too! Especially this lines: "I love the smell of the fresh cologne on your skin The way you say my name fills me within" ... just perfect! :banhbao45: OMG! To say that it's perfect fills me with love bubbles emanating from my pores. Thank you so much for reading and quoting your favorite lines! I love the smell of the fresh cologne on your skin The way you say my name fills me within This kind of love you don't want defined This kind of love from others we can never find. ... Ohh...soo sweeetttt haha....all of your words are so amazing love it We are sooooo loving the cologne, aren't we? I can't help it. I love men who smell so good. Misu is a walking pheromone to me. I'm very grateful you find it so sweet and have taken your precious time to read this poem and picking out your favorite lines that touched you. I'm very touched. Awwwww!!!! Yoji-sama, have mercy on our hearts! Got to love it! My favorite part from it is this one "I love how your fingers reach out for mine The way you close your eyes under a sunshine The quiet walks in the park we share Listening to me talk a mile as you stare" Oh my sweet! Thank you so much for your sweet words. I've never been addressed Yoji-sama in my entire life. You are a first! Have mercy on my heart as well. *hugs* I am very happy you love the poem and quoting your favorite lines from it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chacha Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 Very beautiful! The entire poem! :mashimaro6: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Macys Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 Aw... this poem really gives you such a feeling that you want to live a love like that so much I love the poem a lot, one of the best I've read! Thank you for posting it!!!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justme Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 Your poem is sooo sweet! This line is pure gold "The way you say my name fills me within" So touching!!!! :leaf15: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaoifangirl Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 I like the poem very much! It's perfect for Misu! :mashimaro1: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leslie_LC Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 Yojichan, you rock! You are a very very talented writer, I knew it from the beginning, but with every new piece of art that you bring to us, you just convince me more and more! :hamtaro-005 (6): A very beautiful poem, once again! Thanks for sharing! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miro Posted March 19, 2011 Share Posted March 19, 2011 I love how your fingers reach out for mine The way you close your eyes under a sunshine The quiet walks in the park we share Listening to me talk a mile as you stare I love the whole poem, but this is my fav part! :msn_red_fox 6 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JuJu Posted March 19, 2011 Share Posted March 19, 2011 Keep working Yoji :leaf3:............. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted March 19, 2011 Author Share Posted March 19, 2011 Very beautiful! The entire poem! :mashimaro6: You're beautiful too. Thank you so much for reading my poem. Aw... this poem really gives you such a feeling that you want to live a love like that so much I love the poem a lot, one of the best I've read! Thank you for posting it!!!! OMG! To be able to invoke those kinds of feelings is for me as a writer, is tremendous. Thank you very much for reading. Your poem is sooo sweet! This line is pure gold "The way you say my name fills me within" So touching!!!! :leaf15: Thank you, sweetness! I'm really so happy that the poem has touched you especially this line. I like the poem very much! It's perfect for Misu! :mashimaro1: Ahh! Now that's really great knowing I got the poem to be perfect for Misu. Thanks so much for reading. Yojichan, you rock! You are a very very talented writer, I knew it from the beginning, but with every new piece of art that you bring to us, you just convince me more and more! :hamtaro-005 (6): A very beautiful poem, once again! Thanks for sharing! I am very humbled by your praise. I am very touched of your confidence in my efforts. I am nothing but utterly pleased. Thank you so much. I love the whole poem, but this is my fav part! :msn_red_fox 6 I must say my favorite part of the poem is finding so many like you so wonderful to have read this. Thank you so much. Keep working Yoji :leaf3:............. Hai! Will do. Thank you so much for reading, dearie! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted March 20, 2011 Share Posted March 20, 2011 hey that is a wicked poem,very impressed love it 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted March 21, 2011 Author Share Posted March 21, 2011 hey that is a wicked poem,very impressed love it OMG! Thank you so much for saying so. I'm gratefully flattered. Thank you for reading, my dear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YAO(H)I_lover Posted March 21, 2011 Share Posted March 21, 2011 Great poem!:msn_red_fox 6 It's so amazing that I love you It's funny that way but you know I do The way you look into my eyes and then look away Just like that you've made me feel what you had to say I love how your fingers reach out for mine The way you close your eyes under a sunshine The quiet walks in the park we share Listening to me talk a mile as you stare I love the smell of the fresh cologne on your skin The way you say my name fills me within This kind of love you don't want defined This kind of love from others we can never find. Love it! Love it! Love it!:Red_fox7::msn_red_fox 8:Red_fox7: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted March 21, 2011 Author Share Posted March 21, 2011 Great poem!:msn_red_fox 6 Love it! Love it! Love it!:Red_fox7::msn_red_fox 8:Red_fox7: Ooooh! *giggles* Thanks so much for reading and quoting the entire poem at that. I am very honored. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hakainoyume Posted March 28, 2011 Share Posted March 28, 2011 Aww~~ So cute!! I love it! Write more! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted April 4, 2011 Author Share Posted April 4, 2011 Aww~~ So cute!! I love it! Write more! Oh my goodness! thank you so much for loving it. I'm very humbled. Yes, as soon as the inspiration hits me, I can whip up another one really fast. It can happen anytime. Currently, I am working on a brand new Takumi-kun inspired story. Please look forward to it. Arigatou! :hamtaro-005 (6): Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted April 28, 2011 Share Posted April 28, 2011 . .oh my, senpai yoji, i was not able to noticed right away your poem, i just did when i read your status . .yet, now i'd read it, . .senpai your poem, made my heart so REFRESHING! . .it's like SPRING . .supah like it senpai :cuteonion57: :leaf3: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted April 29, 2011 Author Share Posted April 29, 2011 . .oh my, senpai yoji, i was not able to noticed right away your poem, i just did when i read your status . .yet, now i'd read it, . .senpai your poem, made my heart so REFRESHING! . .it's like SPRING . .supah like it senpai :cuteonion57: :leaf3: no one has ever told me that my poem is akin to spring. you're a first and i love you for it. thank you so much for reading, my dear. i'm very touched you consider me as your senpai. *hugs* 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 2, 2011 Share Posted September 2, 2011 Well I want to use the image when Shingyouji calling Misu in the beginnig scene... But, did't have any good pictures... so I used this... Do you like it? ^^;;;; Well to me in the poem you're feeling is little more show... Wanting bo be this kind of it... But, that is natural I think... We are not them any way... --;;; But, I like it... I don't want to said too much let the picture show you... ^^ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted September 2, 2011 Author Share Posted September 2, 2011 Well I want to use the image when Shingyouji calling Misu in the beginnig scene... But, did't have any good pictures... so I used this... Do you like it? ^^;;;; Well to me in the poem you're feeling is little more show... Wanting bo be this kind of it... But, that is natural I think... We are not them any way... --;;; But, I like it... I don't want to said too much let the picture show you... ^^ oh wow...thank you so much. i like the images you used and the color too. it has that mood. the poem is written from Shingyouji's perspective but seeing that you used Misu the one looking at Shingyouji gave it a nice touch. i like it a lot! that makes me think Shingyouji could be dreaming of him as he sleeps. awww~ thanks Hama-san! i really appreciate what you've done. like i said no one has ever done something like this for me for my poems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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