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This month's theme shall be "COUNTLESS".

YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people who love music and love to

write poems, or simply song lyrics. Giving the chance to show your feelings

about the current theme and in general, how do you interpret it, we have picked

a certain song. Based on its melody, you have to write down either

a poem or a song lyrics. Of course, it's up to you how you name it,

as long as you mention once "Countless" in the content.

 

 

 

Rules

Post only on poem/ song lyrics text.

No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political, and no child/ animal abuse themes.

Minimum 3 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs.

Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/ song lyrics.

The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything, depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody.

Post the final result on this thread.

Read the rules again, just in case.

 

 

 

Prizes

Each user that applies to "Music Box" contest will get 2,000 points.

The winner will get 5,000 points + 1 manga cover card

 

 

 

Song

 

 

 

Deadline

MARCH, 2017

 

 

 

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Alright here goes nothing

 

 

Hey you let me into your mind for a while

Listen up, my dear friend, I know that you suffer

It's okay to feel hurt

But you don't have to play it tough

Just ask for help

 

Even soldiers breaks at some point, Like fragile glass

When dark cracks take roots and spreads

Detach yourself from those fears before that happens

Because life is waiting for you

Just let me through

 

To show you countless stars in the dark, like a billion fireworks

We'll drown out the silence, on a rainy day in February

 

Just because everything is crashing right now

Doesn't mean that you're totally broken

I know that your prison seems black as coal

But sometimes you have to make room for the light

 

Way too long has this lasted

Time in your apartment has almost come to a stop

Open your window and let the sun brighten your mind

Cause you are not alone

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Blue Months of the Year

It's that time of the year again, I guess

When I am at my lowest

Losing myself in sorrow

Questioning the life and shaking future

When I hardly know the reasons

 

Don't ask!

Don't know when it start,

just remembered I became depended

My Ma is worried, like she always did

Her only girl fell down

to the bottom of mellow

 

I owe her her patience

When countless night I refused to sleep

Even nightmares kept me awake

Don't know why

Don't know when

It's just there

 

Each time, when it come to this

Countless tears I shed

Each time, I promised

I won't fall victim

Each time, I forced my brain

Yet the cause avoids me

 

Twenty seven of the years

Don't remember most of it

Feeling detached, didn't belong

I know emptiness

In the past, even know

Countless tears I shed

Praying that I'm okay

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Pint Of Hope

 

Joy in the eyes of a blind man

Is like facing black canvasses

Though he couldn't really run far

But his heart knows real faces

 

He creates a world for him self

And fails at times when he does it

His body, mind and soul are kept

Simple smile on his lips will fit

 

Don’t blame him for what he can do

Sitting all day long on his ramp

He is escaping from his foe

Whispering wishes near a lamp

 

His mind’s filled with colorful dreams

No one can think of his real name

Countless insanity, it seems

Nothing’s wrong with him being lame

 

Think of it that he’s more sincere

He tells no lies behind what’s truth

He may not be a perfect ‘sir’

But he’s more mature wearing suit

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Back then

 

When we first met

I knew we were alike

I knew we could do anything

If we'd just try

 

Countless times we tried to think

About some crazy and impossible things

Things such as flying high

Higher and higher into the sky

 

We tried to count the countless stars

Count the people

Count the cars

Count the years until we fell apart

 

Time flew by and now

Now we go our separate ways

You have a loving family

A wife, children, yeah even a cat

And yet I wish I could be part of that...

 

What would have happened

If I told you how I felt?

Back then when we were young

Back when we thought that we could have everything...

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Pieces of You

 

When you look into the mirror what do you see

A beautiful guy a beautiful guy

You’re truly a beautiful guy

But deep down inside you’re ugly, you're ugly

Nothing will ever be good enough

 

You’re calling others faggots

You hate them you resent them

You want to bash their heads in

What are you so afraid off

Are you afraid that you’re just the same

 

You shattered his dream countless times

Because you have been looking into the mirror far too long

You don’t want to touch him to look at him

But deep down you know

He is pieces of you

 

Ugly heart Ugly heart

Is what’s left inside of you’re beautiful body

They call you a bitch they call you trash

Does it make you want to hurt them

Does it make you want to run

 

When will you face the truth

That you do not hate him

When will you see that all the little pieces are falling, shattered

When will you see you loved him

Because he is pieces of you

 

Do you hate him

Because he is pieces of you

Do you love him

Because he is pieces of you

Pieces of you

 

You said he was a faggot

But you were just the same

But these pieces are too sharp to put back together

And these shards are lying in a pool of blood

And their you’re pieces to him

 

Because he is pieces of you

Because you’re pieces of him

Although it’s too late

One day he will wake up smiling

Realizing

You were pieces of him

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my first contest entry, wish me banana! i mean luck, kyaaaaaa :Excited:

 

 

 

Lies

The roses have faded

All have gone but one

Fall has arrived

But I'm as cold as winter

 

You said you will be back

Countless times I've waited

Countless times I've cried

You Lied.

 

Was I just a plaything?

Did you really meant what you said?

Maybe I was foolish

Maybe i was blind.

 

Weeks, months, years have gone

Still nothing has has changed

Alone, empty and damaged I was

I still yearn for you

 

Were you really there?

Maybe I was wrong

Countless lies I said to myself

To make everything feel better again

 

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This entry was written in Terza Rima form. Everyone doing well?

 

 

 

 

 

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Never Again

 

 

He was more than just a dream.

He was fate realized.

Time ran for him as a stream.

 

In his hands had crystallized

A promise unforgotten

One as ever criticized.

 

In him a world was begotten.

Innocent, beautiful, and yet

Cleverly seductive it was, often.

 

His body made sweet was unmet.

He yearns and burns, days endless

Fingers outstretched to forget,

 

The waves that were once countless.

As his arms part for another

He closes his eyes, groundless.

 

He learned that at every end of forever

Like clockwork, incessantly

There awaited a feverish never.

 

Pointless, he mumbles insistently,

A ridiculous poison love is.

As raindrops filled his vision silently.

 

He was more than just the abyss.

He was depth materialized.

Never again, he swore against a kiss.

 

 

 

 

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Whew! Finally done! Its 8 paragraphs, just nice, but i hope the extra one line at the bottom doesnt count as a new para? I put a spacing between the last line and the 8th para for the purpose of impact.

 

The Truth Seeker

 

Countless nights i spent awake

Wondering, thinking without a break

Of beautiful lies that hide bitter truth

Like seeds hidden beneath layers of fruit

 

Illusions that cast worries aside

Blind us from seeing the incoming tide

We are led to believe everything is alright

What use is it then to stand and fight?

 

I have scoured the earth, searching

Through highs and lows, stumbling, lurching

Desperate for the truth, a means of escape

My voyages have left many jaws agape

 

Yet no closer am i to my destination

The more i run, the further gets my station

The sands of time slip through my fist

Weaker i grow, the inevitable approaching from the midst

 

The more i uncover the deeper i sink

Into the dark abyss, at insanity’s brink

Too many lies, too much deception

Where did they all start, what led to their inception?

 

I know now, that i know nothing

The weight of humanity’s ignorance is all but crushing

For the lies are as countless as the stars

Scattered across the pitch black sky of ours

 

Twinkling innocently, yet not what you see

Nothing is what it appears to be

But alas! My time has finally come

Slowly but surely, my limbs go numb

 

And as i lay, awaiting death

Taking a final, wheezing breath

I sob with joy, for i am finally unbound

From searching for what can't ever be found,

 

Not on this earth, never on this ground.

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Our Day

 

 

The night grows cold but I don’t feel it enveloped in your embrace.

The countless stories you tell me to lull me to sleep.

With the heat of your body behind me I fall into sleep dreaming of you.

In there we can share our hopes and mischief in a world of light and joy.

 

In the morning we rise after a night's rest, and my happiness shines reflected in your eyes.

We start the day gazing into each other's eyes which always brings me a smile.

The rest of the day follows in suit, that happens a lot when the love is new.

The nightingales bathe us with their beautiful song, lightening our way.

 

The day goes on in a beautiful haze, taking us from one point to the next.

Without even noticing the evening came and we found ourselves home again.

We chat and laugh while eating dessert, and then we prepare to go to bed.

The day comes full circle with the heat of your body right next to mine.

 

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|| END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ ||

[YaoiOtaku Countless Contest]

 

 

Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest! All entries were very good and we had a hard time deciding.

Our winners are

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The winners win as follows,

- 5,000 points

- 1 Manga Cover card (Please mention the card you want)

All participants get 2,000 points

 

 

 

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Omg yes thank you! May i request a Viewfinder manga cover? =^^=

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