Amander123 Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 "Patience Pays Off" Been thinking since last night About what you mean to me I finally have the answer I've kept so secretly You're always in my thoughts No matter what I do I can't seem to stop thinking About how much I love you You're different from the rest The ones who never cared You help me open up Whenever I feel scared I wanna be with you Forever and a day So I can look into your eyes And say I'm here to stay (Note: This poem was written after my other poem "Patience" ) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Dreaming" Dreaming on the stars up high And looking for their secret signs I'm hoping I will find a clue That will lead me straight to you My face is kissed by the cold wind This journey needs to now begin I know that it's you I'll find I don't believe this love is blind I will search until the Earth's end A thousand letters I will send I cannot sleep, I cannot eat A sorrow feeling I must defeat The day that I can meet your smile We'll fall in love and have a child Forever you'll hold me oh so tight And I'll never want to leave your sight I'll keep searching until the day I die To find my love beyond the sky All my dreams say I'll be too late But I'll keep dreaming that you'll wait ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Poison" Time goes by so fast Whenever I'm with you Just hold me in your arms And say our love is true There's nothing I'd love more Than to see your loving face When day turns into night And we're in our special place I'm craving for your lips Because they taste so sweet I just need to think of you And faster my heart beats I need you to survive And everybody's wrong They say we'll never last But it's with you that I belong I love the way you touch me As graceful as can be I hope we stay together For all eternity ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That's all for now. I'll post more soon!! 9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 . .i like "DREAMING", this says for eternity . .most of your poems reveals LOVE, may it secretly felt, or of hiding feelings, opening and confessing, so much to express :cuteonion57: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
현애 Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 wah...sooo nice desu....make me want to cry.... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YLover Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 Very cute!!!! I like them very much! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
animegirl Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 I like the poems very much! Especially the first one! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amander123 Posted April 16, 2011 Author Share Posted April 16, 2011 Thank you both YLover and animegirl!! I have a habit of writing things that I am feeling at the time lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miro Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 Your poems are so beautiful! I like them both very much! :mashimaro8: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amander123 Posted April 16, 2011 Author Share Posted April 16, 2011 Thank you Miro but I don't think they are that good :cuteonion50: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chacha Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 I like your poems too! They are really good! :banhbao29: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JuJu Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 You are a promising poet......^^~ Very romantic and lovable poems............ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amander123 Posted April 17, 2011 Author Share Posted April 17, 2011 Thank you I am a very big dreamer lol. I have a lot of silly poems too that are not as serious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karin Posted April 20, 2011 Share Posted April 20, 2011 The poems are very good! I like them a lot! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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