Sai-Miyoshi Posted September 1, 2017 Share Posted September 1, 2017 I N F O R M A T I O N This month's theme shall be "F O R G I V E N". YaoiOtaku decided to open a thread for people who love music and love to write poems, or simply song lyrics. Giving the chance to show your feelings about the current theme and in general, how do you interpret it, we have picked a certain song. Based on its melody, you have to write down either a poem or a song lyrics. Of course, it's up to you how you name it, as long as you mention once "forgiven" in the content. R U L E S Post only on poem/ song lyrics text. No vulgar words, no racism, no religious, no political, and no child/ animal abuse themes. Minimum 3 paragraphs, maximum 8 paragraphs. Do not use the name of the song we give you as a title to your poem/ song lyrics. The theme of your masterpiece can be about anything, depends on what feelings you get when you listen to the melody. Post the final result on this thread. Read the rules again, just in case. P R I Z E S Each user that applies to "Music Box" contest will get 2,000 points. The winner will get 5,000 points + 1 manga cover card D E A D L I N E 1.September - 30. September S O N G Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
412Chie Posted September 3, 2017 Share Posted September 3, 2017 Let me join this! Scars It's so hard to breathe I don't know where to start Every time I try It's just slipped out of my hand Something needs to change And it has to start from me It's not you, it's me I couldn't held my reins against temptations If said I'm spoiled Yes, I did Didn't know who started it But I won't look for one to blame Ke there's even one, it should be me Your worries are understandable But I am scared out of my wits "What if...." Are buzzing around my conciousness It's like an endless curses It's not about trying anymore I do know it's all depends on me And yet I closed my eyes and covered my ears even my smiles were reluctant Is it my fault for delaying it? Did I tortured them for waiting? But didn't I said it again and again? "Please go ahead! Don't listen to people gossiping! They have nothing else to do" I am sorry to be the cause of it all Even if I am forced I just don't know how to tie the knot And this terasa just that unreasonable I just asked to be forgiven Perhaps I'll found it soon... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
glesh Posted September 22, 2017 Share Posted September 22, 2017 I'm joining~ Here's my entry. You Are Never Alone It's been a while. How are you? Do you still remember me? Not once I have forgotten you. It's so cold, It's so dark, Ever since you left me. I missed your warmth. You were my light. You were my happiness. Please tell me, Where did I go wrong? If I did something wrong, Please forgive me. If you did something wrong, I have already forgiven you. I'm always here, Waiting for you to come back. You have a place here. You are never alone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marjorie Haukea Williams Posted September 28, 2017 Share Posted September 28, 2017 The Endlessness and the Forgiven When do we become our better selves? after so much self loathing and agonishing When do we become our lesser selves? I am still alive, in the hive of my mind graveyards not far off the shorelines I can trace lines when I want to I am pretty swell most of the time like the soothing currents opposite But can I truly be forgiven? Can I truly be repentant? I miss the days when I had no scars to show no words to hide from the world now only darkness and the forgiven reign On a throne time forgot about What am I all about? Other than a caged dove from another plain the old jane of my dreams is all that really matters surreal What's the deal there? Am I lonely victim in a puzzle unsolved? Can I truly EVER be forgiven? My entry!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crystald Posted September 30, 2017 Share Posted September 30, 2017 . IN THE MORNING The days pass by in a blur, everything seems to blend. Sipping tea by the window contemplating the flow of life. In the dead of night the dreams deep inside our hearts will come alive and soar through the sky elevating us from the sands. The more you see, the more you learn the knowledge will remain. It will help you build your strength in the light of day. So it goes the life on earth, with its ups and downs the secrets that were hidden soon will be forgiven. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alezander Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 I'd like to dedicate this to the people who procrastinate and want to stop but can't. I just want to say that you can go out there and do it! So please, forgive yourself. (Basically trying to pat myself on the back here.) I hope this entry gets in on time. Freeform entry coming right up! I AM TODAY I keep asking the world. Give me a reason. Tell me a story. Teach me the meaning. I demand and demean Everything that is not me. The something else that I just know, I clearly feel is out there. This can't be all there is to it. It can't be. I insist and resist, until everything vanishes, everything that is not me. Time gobbled and time wasted The dream I've buried deep in my heart, has long since waned Into a single speckle of warmth It's there, somewhere inside the corpse that I am. How cruel it is that even without truly living, without even trying, I am always forgiven by that sliver of light that since childhood has had me under arrest, enforcing me to do the same. Now, as I stumble towards uncertainty on my tippy toes, I unravel the restraints in my heart. Pitiful, merciful, arrogant and brave. I am of different colors, I am of irrelevant origin, Of shameful past and of weak character. But all that doesn't matter Not anymore. I am today. I am forgiven. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Key Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 || END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ || [YaoiOtaku Forgiven Contest] Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest! All entries were very good and we had a hard time deciding. Our winners are Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. and @ Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. The winners win as follows, - 5,000 points - 1 Manga Cover card (Please mention the card you want) All participants get 2,000 points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crystald Posted October 1, 2017 Share Posted October 1, 2017 . Hi Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. !!! This was so much fun! Congrats to Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ! and Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ! I hope you have a great week! onion1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marjorie Haukea Williams Posted October 2, 2017 Share Posted October 2, 2017 Hi Key I'd like this one below as a card, please and thank you! Tadayoedo Shizumazu, Saredo Naki Mo Sezu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alezander Posted October 2, 2017 Share Posted October 2, 2017 Sankyuu~n! Then I'd like Yuuutsu na Asa please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Key Posted October 2, 2017 Share Posted October 2, 2017 Cards given, congrats once again! ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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