18+ Naruto: {Blue.Crush..}~ proves i'm wrong .. (Naru x Sasu)

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Summary: Sasuke seems to have a thing for Naruto but they hate each other. After being rejected by Naruto, they stop seeing each other for 7 years. Naruto couldn't stop thinking about Sasuke and now he's back. Will Sasuke be able to overcome the obstacles and get Naruto this time?

Status: Discontinued

 

hey everyone, i'm here to post the first chapter of my first fanfic evaa..h :Red_fox7:

actualy, i feel *sniff* realy *sniff* happy to .. ya know .. post it here, and .. and .. i uwaaah .. :leaf7:

 

and yes, it proves that i'm wrong when i say that nobodys stupid, and that everyone can understand thing pretty fast, it proves that some people are realy stupid that they can't understand that they love each other ..

 

and it proves that i'm a one heck of a writer :9yoyo30:

 

*wipes tears, gets a grip*

 

alright, alright .. here goes it .. my first chapter ..

hope ya like it ..

 

chapter 1

 

naruto and sasuke are 14, and they hate each other! naruto hates sasuke because he had sakura's heart and

he was stronger than him, more handsome, popular, perfect grades, parents, family, all in

all he was better than naruto! now .. sasuke hates naruto because he's weak and

because everyone hates him too because ... you know why, one midnight

naruto was training as usual, why? to kick sasuke's ass someday !!

 

well he gets realy tierd and thinks that a bit of relaxing while enjoying his favourite

song won't hurt, he takes his ipod, puts the headphone in his ears and plays the song

crush by pendulum and lays back on a huge rock behind it's not comfy so he heads to

a tree to lay his back on it ... he falls asleep, hey have you ever wondered why sasuke

never cared about a girl? , or why he's still a virgin!? what's that answer that no-one knows

about? this guys's been watching naruto from behind the tree all along !! he walks away from the tree

when he was sure that naruto was asleep ... all what he was thinking about is :

"naruto's without a shirt *he touche's naruto's chest, his colar bones* his .. colar bones...

so what, he's not that sexy anyway*he pulls his hand away in a fast move* plus what the

fuck?! i hate him! i'm outta here, i'm sure that rock lee's chest is sooo much sexier since

he trains more !"

sasuke walks away but suddenly he see's his brother infront of him here's what they said :

itachi: you'r gay?!!

sasuke: fuck no ! i just dropped a pini and i took it

itach: is that true pini dropper? *itachi lefts an eyebrow*

sasuke: don't you think i would tell you if i was gay? and weak up, he's naruto!! and i hate naruto!

itachi: who has a body that you can't keep you'r hand's off ... yeah, that make's sence!"

sasuke: are you fucking insane?, don't.screw.with me ! and i told you it was a pini

itachi: whatever, i won't tell anybody...

sasuke: i told i wa.. itachi interupts him: "shut up for a minute!" as he takes off his shirt

and gets closer to sasuke and put's sasukes hand on his body , moves it slowly wiping it ..

itachi : tell me you can resist ..

sasuke daydreamed a minute and his mouth watered thinking : itachi's even sexier ....

i wanna ... touch it ..

itachi : i knew it ..

sasuke suddenely woke up once he heard that word ...

sasuke : fuck off ...

itachi : why did'nt you tell me ?

sasuke : i said fuck off !

itachi got closer to sasuke, grabbed his ass and whispered in his ear : no wonder

you'r my brother ..

sasuke gave itachi an elbow in his belly ... and it hurt!!

sasuke : ah!! hey that hurt ..

sasuke: YOU .... are gay !!

itachi : no shame baby ..

sasuke : that's it .. my .. my brothers gay ..

naruto : you guy's are gay !!

sasuke and itachi : what!!?

itachi : no, it's a joke right, sasuke?" he gave him a light elbow over his arm

sasuke: "hey, that hurt, i mean yeah tottaly!"

naruto :" wait 'til i tell the girls!

sasuke and itachi : no !

naruto : or ..

itachi : or i'm gonna fuck you'r brains out !!

naruto : "catch me if you can !" he said as he ran with all he got ...

but in the end sasuke caught him ...

sasuke : i hate you ..

naruto : "i hate you too, why were you checking me out again?"

sasuke : i just got kinda .. turned on , that's all ! but it does'ent mean that i'm attracted to you or something

like it ..

naruto : "...... so you ARE gay!!" naruto was pretty surprised sasuke getting turned on ...over him!! .... oh and

sasuke is gay!!

itachi : guy's forget it, forget that this ever happened , and naruto you shithead if you

ever tell anyone i'll hit you 'til you can't take it anymore and then i'm gonna fuck you 'til

you pass out !!

naruto : no need ... coz i don't think i'll enjoy you suffering that much ..

sasuke : ediot ...

naruto : shut up ..

sasuke : no you shut up !

itachi : you both shut up !! he said screaming ..

sasuke was still behind naruto .... he thought : "i did'nt think he smells this good .. it's

like he took a bath in .. vanilla and .. cirarette!.. he smokes! that's so sexy!! .. and ... he's

still ...shirtless ... and .. i'm so fucking horny !! .."

sasuke got his face closer to naruto's neck and licked it, then he squeezed his butt gentley

naruto : "what the fuck are you doing ?! "

sasuke : what does it seem like i'm doing .. it's you'r fault anyways ..

naruto stepped one step forward and said: " how is this my fault?!"

sasuke: " who told you to train shirtless?"

naruto : "i don't even have to tell you why, and it's you'r fucking fault"

sasuke thought : " a little screwing-with-naruto's-head won't hurt, would it? "

sasuke got closer to naruto 'til there was no more space between them and held his

waist and whispered in his ear: "tell me , baby , prove it" naruto daydreamed in the

feeling of sasuke's breath against his neck and how good his touch over his waist felt and blushed he thought :

" nice touch for a shit head like him, oh fuck what am i thinking !? "naruto steped forward again .. and said:

"mmm it's you'r fault coz ... coz you'r the one who was watching, plus i always train

shirtless, it cools down the heat in my body .. plus it's comfy , i'd even take my pant's off

but i'm not home !! and why don't you go watch rock lee i heard he trains naked!"

sasuke: " realy?! ... don't screw with me, and .... nobody's here soo " sasuke got closer to

naruto again, he was so close that he can't get any closer ..and held his pants and slowly

lowered them ...but naruto held them, blushing .. he highered them and said : " get off "

naruto " heyy itachi, never take you'r shirt off, you might get raped or something "

itachi: " i don't mind if his dick is bigger than mine "

naruto walked to his shirt and took it saying : " ewwww man" and then he ran away

from that far away place to his house .. he kept thinking about it all night .. and the

next morning sasuke disappeared ... and the memory of that night stayed in narutos

mind, chased his dreams, controled his day's , and made him dadydream all day .. he

never forgot sasuke's touch .. the feeling of his breath against his neck .. he never forgot him,

and after 7 yaers in a one hot summer day when naruto was at his house with only

a fish net shirt, orange shorts with two black stripes and his opened belt, all what he

was thinking about is : " i wonder how he look's right now, how he smells, has he got

better? ....... where is he now?" the noise outside did'nt cut off his thinking but the loud

hard knocks on the door did .... it was sakura ..

sakura : "umm hi naruto" she said blushing ..

naruto actualy got used on her coming every 4 hours to check on him ... well

after sasuke left leaving only his memory in naruto's head ... he thgought about it so

much that he actualy lost intrest in sakura !! but sakura started developing feeling's

for him soo ..

naruto : "ughh what is it?" he said looking bored and a bit annoyed..

sakura said as she was blushing : "ughhh , want some ramen? "

naruto : "no thnx " he said as he slamed the door in sakura's face and said : "this shirt's

tooo itchy"

accidently sakura heard it she thought:"oh god! he's taking his shirt off .. my chance to

see that sexy chest .. those sexy colar bones .. his super sexy six pack and his muscles!

.. the sexy naruto !!" she kicked the door powerfully opening it ... as naruto was giving

his back to her .. taking off his shirt .. looking so damn sexy!

naruto: "what the fuck!?"

sakura: "ughhh , want some ramen?"

naruto:"ughh ,no "

naruto turned showing his chest to sakura .. her mouth started watering and

unconsiously she touched his chest .. but naruto took them off and said : "do you have

any idea that is considered a sexual harrasement?"sakura did'nt care anymore and all

she wanted was to just rip his pants off, she said : "no! now take you'r pants off and gimme

some .."

naruto: "what? .."

sakura held naruto from his shoulders and pushed him roughly to the wall, she held his

chin trying to kiss him but he looked to his right avoiding it then he pushed her

and said: " look, i like someone else" he said as he walked to the chair and sat down

puting his elbows on his knees and looking at sakura's face ...

sakura : "who? is it hinata? or is that ino? "

naruto : " not my type..."

sakura: " oh you have a type?"

naruto: "whatever, it's not you, and you'r not getting any, and get outta my house, go"

sakura went went out with her head low, and her jow about to drop to the floor ...

seconds later naruto went to drink some expired milk buuut ... he heard realy loud

noises and people babbling outside and voices like .... realy realy hard and loud knocks

on a wood door!! soooo he took a sip of his EXPIRED i repeat EXPIRED milk as if

nothing happened .... but then he heard it again so he went out to see what's up guess

what?! ... he see's sasuke!! ... looking better, sexier than ever ... on a high hill with the

wind playing with his hair, with his mouth watering chest and his BEAUTIFUL

face, even better than before, ! naruto dreamed about this a lot .... but sasuke did'nt look

that happy...

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We are waiting for the second part!

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guess what? i'm posting chapter 2 .. yayy

hope you'r hungry for some blue crush, haha ..

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chapter 2

 

 

Sasuke looked at naruto with sharp eyes while the blond gazed him, the shock overcame him, he couldn't even speak a work, he just gazed the raven man's intense eyes, if looks could kill, naruto would be in his grave now but does Sasuke have that sharp look on his face? What's he so mad about?

Naruto thought "I wanna run so fast 'til I get to the top of that hill and .... Say hi? ... No that's not what I want, I want to... Kiss him with all I got, hug him, touch that delicious chest, and lick it, and, wait! I'm not gay!! ..... No…oo not for that shit head... no fucking way

Naruto didn't wanna follow his desire if he does his pride is so over...

he pretended like he didn't even see him, he looked to his left seconds before Looking on his right he drank some expired milk that was already in his hand milk and got into his house of course it's all pretending that he wanted to know what the heck is wrong with people and where they were looking at, but then he just pretends that he doesn't care what is it ... it's all just.. Pretending.

But his real feelings were so…oo the total total total opposite of what he pretended he said

"Oh fuck! Why did you come back Sasuke, go back! Go back to the hell that you came From Sasuke, ughhh, you shitty fuck head you made me gay!! And who knows maybe I was gay from the start... I mean I've always liked to peep rock lee bathing and gara changing why can't I just accept it like Sasuke and his friggin' brother did?"

A moment's of silence has passed before naruto screams: "fuck you Sasuke….ee"

40 minutes passed and naruto hasn't moved a muscle!! And finally he gets up and

Says: "okay, I can't take this ... he's like 10 meters away probably screwing around with

I don't know who, and I'm right here complaining about it, I gotta do something, why

Am I talking to myself? Great I'm gay AND crazy!"

He said as he took his orange jacket with 2 stripes on the same side as his short's which Is right, Okay so he buckled his belt and went out ... guess what he saw

Sasuke hitting on rock lee! Sasuke was pinning rock lee's right hand to the wall behind

Him, playing with his hair.... And they were talking...Naruto heart was on fire just like

A wife seeing her husband screw around someone ... well he knew that it would mean that he's jealous and his pride will be history ... but he had to do something he thought: "hmmmm, I could go and kick rock lee's ass ... or .. No I love him too much to kick his ass, I could... Yes that's the thing"

 

Naruto saw Sakura staring at him from a distance, he winked at her, what!? Naruto

Winking at sakura! What the...?! Has he lost hope in Sasuke?! After all the stupid long days in the stupid 5 years?! Well sakura

Came closer in steps that show how shy she is ... and when she was right in front of him

.. Sakura: "i see you changed your mind" she said in a low, yet heard voice...

Naruto: "do you want me sakura"

Sakura: " eh?! Yes!"

Naruto: "ok pretend that you love Sasuke, not me, and you're together, now look there

Whataya see? "He said in a low voice

Sakura: " what?! Sasuke's gay?! "She says in a loud voice

Naruto: "shhhh lower your voice, he's screwing with rock lee behind your Back, what will you do now? Maybe he doesn't love you anymore.

Sakura: "listen, naruto, this is so no t a proper conversation topic"

Naruto: "ok let's get to the bottom of this, if you go there and pretend you're sasuke's

Lover from the 3 past years, and you're really mad about what's going on, I'll.... I'll sleep with you sakura!"

Sakura: " eh?! I thought you liked me?! And why do I have to do this?! It's really shitty y'know?"

Naruto: " sakura, do you wanna sleep with me or not?"

Sakura: "i wanna ... Sleep with you"

Naruto: "then go there and do your best acting ever"

Sakura: "will I be on top?"

Naruto: "yes, now go!"

Sakura: "okay, okay" she said as she took a loud big sigh and walked to Sasuke and

Rock lee with a mad, EXTREMELY mad face and said to Sasuke with a loud

Voice: " you're screwing guys now?!"

Sasuke: "what?"

Sakura: "after all that hot romance with you, all these nights and you are screwing guy's now

And out of all guys, what guy did ya pick? Rock lee?"

Sasuke: " wait, what are you saying?! That I was with you?! Is this some kinda prank?"

Sakura: "oh and now you deny it?! You're such a BASTARD"

Rock lee: "I thought you said you're single"

Sakura: "no! He is not fucking single!" sakura screamed in their faces

Rock lee: "ok I'm done here" he said as he raised his hands to his shoulder's height and

Walked away...

Naruto was looking at them from a distance, happy, proud, with what he had done, it

Was unusually smart from him, and he didn't even involve himself in all that shit, wow, what a scene, I didn't know naruto was so smart.

Sakura: "ughhh thank god I did it GOOD, maybe I should try acting school instead

Of ninja!"

Sasuke: "what the fuck?!"

Sakura: "oh sorry Sasuke that was a favor for a friend" she said as she walked back to

Naruto held his hand and walked back with him to his place.

Sasuke: "naruto? ..." he said in a low voice, remembering that night, those

Feelings ... those feelings from that day, those feelings haunting him everyday,

Every time he was with another man.... That one memory that filled his days...

He thought: "have I lost him? Have I lost him ... forever? He sent sakura to get rock lee

Away from me, that means he's jealous, or just ... that he wants to ruin my life?

Or that he's not jealous over me, but over rock lee, I just wanna know, what make's

Sakura better than me? Is it boobs? "He watched naruto til they both got in the house, oh gosh!

What's going on in that house?! Some hot smexy sex maybe? Well...

Sakura: "ughhh well"...

Naruto: "whataya want me to do…?"

Sakura: "duh, undress me..."

Naruto sighed in boredom got closer to her, and unzipped her dress, naruto didn't really

Feel like doing that ... he ... loves Sasuke, not sakura, but, what could he do? He has to

Do it... So.....

Sakura: "you're too slow naruto" she said as she removed narutos hands from her shirt and unzipped it herself, then

She took it off and took her bra off too, if naruto wasn't gay I'm sure that he will be now on bed screwing sakura as Hard as he could while sakura's moaning as loud as she could, but oh well too GOOD he is .. Sakura unzipped narutos jacket and took it off, unbuckled his belt and took it off too, she unzipped his shorts, and it appears that he wasn't wearing underwear! So she kept stroking his dick for seconds before she lowered to his waist started licking it, naruto thought:

"only if it was Sasuke licking me ... I'd have a boner!"

Naruto: "why are you doing this?"

Sakura stopped licking for a moment and said: "to get you hard"

Naruto: "no I mean I said I liked someone else so why are doing this even if I don't like you?"

Sakura: "you'll like me later" she said and continued licking naruto for seconds before

She pushed him to the bed behind, and said: "enjoy"

Naruto thought: "oh shit I thought that Sasuke would be my first! And I kept fantasizing about it for 5 years!! I'm just gonna ... close my eyes and imagine its Sasuke ..."

Naruto closed his eyes as sakura sat on his waist putting her legs each on a side of narutos body and her Hand's on his chest, she rubbed her pussy against narutos dick moaning softly, naruto

Was actually pretty hard, ya know, no man can resist a woman with such a face and Body!! He started breathing heavily; a smirk was drawn on sakura's face, not that shy

Cute girl anymore, as they say Screw innocence, do you they say that? Whatever... When her hands were about to reach his dick so it would enter her ... Sasuke busted the door with a kick! He looked so sexy when he was doing that, at least naruto thought so …

 

Sasuke?! Where did this guy come from? And why is he here? No, the answer's too obvious... To Stop sakura of course, what's gonna happen next? Is there love to be finally fulfilled?! Find out the next chapter everyone!

[Nena21]

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chapter 3

 

Part A

Naruto: "you're paying for that"

Sasuke: "that's all you wanna say, I just busted your door while you were screwing a girl and that's all you wanna say?!" he said in a really loud voice

Naruto: "I also wanna say .... Get the fuck outta my house, you bastard!"

Sasuke: "and that's a wish of yours, so sakura, what I'm doing is a favor for a friend

Too but I'm not PRETENDING it, it's so fucking real!, get out, now! Naruto has HIV!! Do you

Wanna get HIV, sakura?"

Sakura:"what?! Why didn't you tell me about this, naruto?!"

Naruto:" I do?.. Oh,i mean, I … forgot! Yes, I.Forgot!"

Sakura:"what kind of lame excuse is that?! You know what? I don't even wanna why, I'm SO outta here" in a hurry she said as she picked up her clothes and wore them then got out of the house ... naruto sat down placing his hands on the bed beside his waist and said:"thnx .. I guess"

Sasuke: "shut up, wear your fucking clothes, and just ... shut up! " the blond took his short, got up and wore them while Sasuke stared at his butt thinking "I wonder what it would feel like to own that butt"

Naruto:"alright, why did you just break my door?"

Sasuke: " I'm the one asking the fucking questions here, I ask, you answer, why were you about to sleep with her?"

Naruto: "Long story"

Sasuke: "why the fuck were you about to sleep with her?!" he screamed.

Sasuke was so mad that he grabbed naruto from his shoulders and showed him a really

Mad face and said: "tell me or I'll break the half of your bones, and I mean it, you ass"

"Okay, I didn't expect that and why are you so mad? You got a crush on her or something?" Sasuke left him and placed his elbows on his knees ... and looked naruto in the face

Sasuke: "do I have to ask again?"

Naruto: "here's the thing, sakura was about to rape me this morning but I stopped her and I told her I liked someone else, so she got out and then you came here I pretended like I didn't know but I couldn't stand it .. I knew you were screwing with Someone out there So I went out, i knew that sakura liked me which would make her do anything for me, I told her I would sleep with her if she goes and pretends she's your Lover and make rock lee go away, so she did it, guess what?! I had to sleep with her"

Sasuke:"I knew that friend was you! , so who do you like? Or is that a lie"

Naruto thought:"nooo, I'm not ready to tell him, too too embarrassing … wait, why does he care anyway?" he blushed and

Said:" ughhhh it was a lie, and why do you care again?"

Sasuke:"I don't, and why did you send sakura again? And what is it that you couldn't stand"

Naruto thought:"BU…USTE...ED!" and said:"ughhhh it's that, ummm it's that I didn't want rock lee to screw with you ...yeah! I didn't want rock lee to screw with you"

Sasuke:"and why is that?"

Naruto thought:"think, think, think" and then he said:"coz I got a .. Crush on him? No wait my FRIEND has a crush on him"

Sasuke:"you're crushing on rock lee!!"

Naruto:"no my friend is she's a boy, I mean girl"

Sasuke thought:"rock lee? ... Could it be that I'm the only one who's having feelings for him? That night? Has it even meant anything for him?"

Sasuke:"well if that's true, then why did you reject sakura?"

Naruto thought:"coz I'm crushing on you, stupid Sasuke!" and said:"okay, okay I AM

Crushing on rock lee" he said as he rubbed his neck and looked around trying to avoid Sasuke.

Sasuke:"I knew it! So naruto you wouldn't mind hooking up with him now, or have sex with him and say romantic naughty dirty things while doing all that?"

The blond thought:"what have I got myself into?" "Huh?... of course I won't, i have a crush on him! You idiot!" he said as he showed a troubled face unconsciously.

Sasuke screamed:"ok rock lee, you can come in now!" he thought: "why did I agree to do this favor? He's gonna do all the hot stuff I wanted to do with naruto, me not rock lee, me! I'm the STUPIDEST guy in the world, I'm stupider than that wall, and all of this is my fault .. Boys don't cry, boys don't cry, boys don't cry …"

Rock lee came in from the door :"thnx Sasuke"

Naruto:"you weren't lying when you said it was a favor for a friend ... uha"

Sasuke:"welcome guys, aren't I great?! I just got you two together, my jobs done, bye, don't miss me, bye again, yeah.. I'm out …"

Rock lee:"Sasuke…"

Sasuke:"alright I'm really ... Outta here" he said as he slowly got out, so slow that it might've taken 2 minutes!

Naruto:" Hi " he said with an uneasy face ... thinking:"I KNOW that I'm the stupidest guy

In the world now…"

Rock lee:"and is that all you got to say?"

Naruto:"I don't … know … what else to say" naruto felt butterflies in his stomach, he was SO troubled, uneasy, and if there's any word that's really describes how bothered he is, I would've said it... he was VERY disturbed, in fact .. I don't even know a word to describe it more than that .. It's just too much to be described …

Rock lee took his steps to the bed and sat to naruto's left side , held his chin got his face closer to narutos face, too close to narutos face … too close …*me: too close .. TOO close, too too close"

Rock lee:"then tell me you love me, babe…"

Naruto:"I-I love you" in a low voice... he thought:"I seriously don't blame Sasuke for calling me usuratonkachi"

Rock lee blushed as he said:"naruto gimme a kiss" rock lee said as he held narutos neck and pulled it closer Getting their lips closer to each other but before he kissed him …

Naruto:"wait!"

Rock lee:"what is it? I've been craving this for a year now"

Naruto:"i-i'm ... not ready yet"

Rock lee:"be cool it's just a kiss" he said and kissed naruto a one heck of a kiss…

Wonder where Sasuke has gone? He was leaning on the wall beside naruto's house door!

A tear fell from sasuke's eyes while he thought:"and why should that night mean anything to him anyways? It's just a stupid touch from the one he hates the MOST, I can't believe I actually thought he loved me... Such a stupid naive thought …"

Sasuke wiped his tears and walked away from naruto's house, oh has it gone BEYOND kissing in there? Well …

Rock lee French kissed naruto 'til his lungs gave out ... naruto's tear fell

He thought:"he ... that stupid Sasuke doesn't love me, does he? ... Too bad I love him ... how could he do this to me? And of course that night didn't mean anything to him, it wasn't even a fucking kiss"

Rock lee:" what's wrong babe? You okay?"

Naruto thought:"what if .. What if i told him now? No, even if I tell him, even if Sasuke knew, he still won't love me back, and that's only gonna break my heart more, and if rock lee's not doing me today, then it's tomorrow, if not tomorrow, it's after tomorrow, it's gonna happen someday, I'll just .. Try to enjoy it, I hope he's so good that it's gonna make enjoy it... And that idea's like shit ..."

Naruto:"nothing ... just do it .." he said in a low voice that showed that he was about to cry ... he laid on his bed, wishing that he never loved Sasuke ... he wanted to enjoy his first time ... but for the first time his heart disobeyed him ... what about all these dreams? All these fantasies ? Today they're to be as if they never happened, Fading in the shadow of misunderstanding .. The shadow of unconfirmed love, as time passes by ... they're just … fading...

Rock lee:"really?! You're ready?"

Naruto:"yeah, take 'em off"

Rock lee obeyed naruto and took his shirt off, time was passing so slow to naruto he just wished for god to take his soul and return it to him when rock lee is over, if Sasuke wasn't his first it'd be impossible for him to enjoy his first time, Naruto's world shattered to pieces as rock lee took naruto's pants off, seconds later the blond thought that making his already decided fate a little late won't hurt.

"I'll go .. take a bath" he said joyfully as he got up and headed to the bathroom with a 20 inches smile stretching on his face, but rock lee couldn't really wait 20 minutes until Naruto's done bathing, so he said:"no need" as he pulled Naruto's hand and threw him on the bed brutally, Naruto thought:"fuck, I didn't know he was this tough, you delay set fate, can you?"

Naruto:"wait, wait"

Rock lee:"I waited long enough"

[{yaoi-loveh..}~]

Part B

Rock lee placed his hands each on a side from Narutos shoulders, he stamped a soft kiss on the blonde's lips his eyes closed as he started French kissing him, he placed his legs each on a side of naruto's body and his hand's started tracing naruto's collar bones, tickling Naruto's sensitive skin, the stronger man's hands traced narutos chest, stroking every sensitive part of it, when his lungs gave out, their lips parted as rock lee's lips lowered to Naruto's neck, he sucked it, licked it and nibbled on it, unconsciously Naruto released a soft moan, his eyes closed, and his lips parted, rock lee left Naruto's neck leaving bite marks on his neck and collar bones, he moved to right nipple he licked it and bit it softly, a tear fell from naruto's eye's thinking:"what have i done to deserve this, Sasuke..?"

Rock lee's right hand moved to naruto's dick, he stroked the tip, then he continued stroking the rest of it until he got hard, he thought "why isn't he making any noises, doesn't it feel good? He asked him:"how does it feel?" naruto thought:"heart breaking, painful ... feels like the end of the world, rock lee" while he said:"good ..." rock lee smiled and lifted naruto's legs and started sucking his hole, rock lee pushed his tongue in gently and naruto felt a little pain so

Naruto:"ah, be gentle there" he said before he covered his forehead with his right arm rock lee:"I will, just tell me when I hit your spot, ok?"

Naruto thought:"hit my … spot?"

Rock lee climbed up naruto thinking:"don't scream naruto ..." then he licked his fingers as a replacement for lube…

Naruto:"why are you ... licking your fingers?"

Rock lee:"for this ..." he said while he lifted naruto's legs more and rubbed his hole for seconds and pushed his finger into naruto's hole, it was a Surprise for Naruto, he never thought it would be THIS painful so he moaned so loud, it was more like a scream! ... He thought:"I'm sure it wouldn't hurt this much if it was sasuke doing it! Fuck you rock lee!"

Naruto:"ahhhhh, i told you to be gentle!"

Rock lee:"sorry babe, you'll get used to it "he said as he kept moving his fingers in and out 'til naruto got familiar to it.

Only a few seconds passed before rock lee found naruto's sweet spot

Naruto:"ahhhhh, th-there" naruto moan's got louder and louder…

Rock lee:"here?"

Naruto:"y-yes ah ... ahh"

Rock lee kept moving his fingers in and out of Naruto's hole.

Rock lee:"sorry Naruto, i can't .. Ah, wait .. it any longer" he said as he lifted naruto's legs more and entered him with his dick … rock lee closed his eyes and opened them to view how sexy Naruto looks in that situation.

Naruto:"no, wai... Ahhhhh...i-it hurts"

Rock lee:"I'm gonna move ..." he said as he started moving his dick in and out faster in a rhythm hitting Naruto's sweet spot over and over again, rock lee has never tasted such pleasure, thought he was pretty experienced.

Rock lee:"i-I'm Cumming, Naruto" with that said Naruto felt his climax getting close too.

Naruto:"m-me too, pull it out, s-stop "naruto thought:"gotta save my ass for Sasuke"

Rock lee got his dick outta the blonde's entrance as he came seconds before Naruto followed him and came.

Rock lee kissed naruto a soft kiss on the lips and whispered in his ears :"i love you, naruto"

Naruto thought:" i wish i never lied to Sasuke about liking you, you horny bastard ... fuck you, and fuck Sasuke too!" but said:"me too" as they both got their normal breathing back rock lee lied beside Naruto and hugged him closer, resting his head on the blonde's chest.

Rock lee looked up at Naruto's flushed face and said:"so how was it?"

Naruto thought:"fucking bad, my ass hurt's and i hate you ..." but he said:"good"

Rock lee smiled, and left Naruto's side as he stood up to get his cigarettes from his clothes.

Naruto was pretty devastated and he just could'nt say a thing ... he thought:"fuck, I want Sasuke"

When rock lee came to the bed Naruto "gimme one" he said as he got up and sat down next to rock lee.

Rock lee:"you smoke?" he said as he gave him a cigarette and naruto grabbed it.

Naruto:"lighter" rock lee gave sasuke the lighter and lighted his cigarette as rock lee thought:"i didn't know he smokes, that's so sexy!"

Naruto:"do you love me rock lee?"

Rock lee took a sip from his cigarette, looked at naruto for a second before saying:"madly"

Naruto:"then why were you screwing with Sasuke this morning?"

Rock lee:"huh? No reason"

Naruto took a sip from his cigarette thinking:"it's like liar is written on your forehead" and said "if you really loved me, you wouldn't do that would you?"

Rock lee:"well it's a long story"

Naruto:"and I got all the time in the world to listen to it"

Rock lee:"i told sasuke that if he made you fall for me, and hook me up with you i'd give him anything he wants, and guess what he wanted"

Naruto:"what?"

Rock lee:"he pinned me to the wall and said he wanted to sleep with me, he got some muscle on these arms"

Naruto:"wow, guess he got stronger than before.." he said as he stood up heading to a cupboard beside the window.

Rock lee:"where?"

Naruto:" ramen"

Rock lee:"oh"

Naruto walked to the cupboard beside the window that was facing him ... he thought:"hmm chicken .. Or seafood?"

Rock lee's mouth watered as he looked at naruto who was'nt covering his body with any piece of clothing, he thought:"am I really not dreaming? I can't believe I have you all for me Naruto, that sexy chest, and your muscular arms, and specially that fat ass you got, and your long neck that smells like vanilla, that soft bronze skin, all these curves, who could resist?" he walked to naruto and wrapped his arms around naruto's waist, whispered in his ears saying:"how about another go?" naruto thought:"what a horny guy" And said: "what about ramen?"

Rock lee:"screw ramen?"

Naruto:"and if i said no?"

Rock lee:"that wasn't a question"

Rock lee smelled the strong smell of vanilla on Naruto's neck, then he pulled the blonde's hand as he headed to the bed.

 

How did it go this way!? Naruto should'nt be with rock lee, he should be with sasuke! ... Naruto and rock lee don't even look good together! Til when is it gonna be this way? Wait, is is it ever gonna change?! Will these confusions ever vanish? Are naruto and sasuke ever gonna be together? Well i hope you can wait for the answers in the following chapters! See ya then ^_~

[Macys]

Wow!!! I love it a loooot! :hamtaro-005 (8):

[{yaoi-loveh..}~]

heyy everyone! :hamtaro-005 (4):

no, no, i did'nt bring the next part .. yeah i'll .. bring it later ..

anyways, i'm posting this coz i wanted to tell you guys some stuff ... :hamtaro-005 (21):

 

1.i know, rock lee and naruto .. not that good .. but that's the hole point! that they just don't fit together and in the following parts you'll see that that one event in naruto's love life would help him to sort some stuff in the future, i mean hooking up with someone he does'ent love and all, and of course the story does'ent go just about just these 3 guys, other charachters will appear in the subsequent chapters :hamtaro-005 (6):

 

2. i want you guys to tell me what's you'r favourite part of blue crush 'til now, that one part that made you squeal, so which part? it's okay if it's just a sentence or something like that, i just realy wanna know what you like to add some of it in the following parts

 

3.blue crush is a REALY long novel, it might have like ... 11 chapters or so, but i'm gonna make it pretty intresting so you don't get bored :hamtaro-005 (22):

 

4.i'm sure that when you guys read the story you imagine whats happening in you'r mind, and here's the thing ummm soon enough i'll be drawing how the charachters look, i know you know how they look already but, not all naruto's are the same .. you know what i mean .. :Red_fox6:

 

anyways what i realy wanted to tell you is that .. i wanna know you'r opinion, honestly, coz i'm already writing other fics and stuff, and ughh, whataya think of me as a writer? :2yoyo4:

so .. yeah. see ya next time :msn_red_fox 3

[Miro]

Your fanfic is so cool! :hamtaro-005 (8): I laughed so much when reading

[Chacha]

How cool! Will it be more?

[{yaoi-loveh..}~]

ufcorce chacha! there will be a LOT more, oh, hey again! onion0

 

yup, yup, i finally brought the fourth chapter! rabbit4

 

yeah .. i know it came pretty late .. i was really busy with *think of an excuse* .. studying! yup studying! i studied pretty hard! be proud .. yeah .. i was studying ... i'm embarrasing, i know ... :cuteonion53:

 

anyways, here's it, enjoy! :cuteonion57:

 

 

 

Chapter 4

 

part A

 

 

The next morning …

 

"i wish my longing for you could stop" _ " i wish my love for you has never existed"

"i wish you never were to meet me" _ " i missed every part of you, every word that i heard"

"i even missed you calling me usuratonkachi _ " i wonder what do i want"

"do i want me to hate you?" _ "Or you to love me?"

"You remember how you left me for him" _ "that time wished i could say i hate you, Sasuke"

"and on every night i craved your touch, i wished for you to love me"

"Just fucking be like rock lee and love me already!"

 

Naruto wrote these word's on a piece of paper he was holding and the thought:"i suck at poetry" passed his mind, he cut the paper to small pieces and threw them in the garbage can beside him before rock lee got out of naruto's bathroom

With a towel wrapping his waist and another one on his shoulder

Rock lee:" you could use the shower now babe"

Naruto:"right" he said and thought:"how can i think of Sasuke when i have such a great lover, this guy's madly in love with me? Unlike that stupid Sasuke, he actually care's ... fuck Sasuke! ..."he took the towels off of rock lee and told him:" you look so much better without it" Naruto thought that it's very unfair that someone as good and kind as rock lee suffers while he should be happy, and enjoying his love life, so he thought that he should make rock lee feel that his lover loves him a lot, the blond decided that he would make rock lee have the happiness he deserves, and just because he doesn't love him doesn't mean that he could make rock lee suffer because of it, he kissed him a soft kiss on his lips and smiled as he whispered in his ear :"i love you, my sexy lover" and got into the bathroom.

 

Rock lee's cheek's went so red that they looked like tomatoes, he thought:"i-i think I'm about to faint" and he said:"l-love ya too"

Naruto turned on the water in the shower and got in, all what he was thinking about was … Sasuke, though he doesn't want to he just can't get him outta his mind no matter what, he thought:"stupid Sasuke, why can't I just get you outta my mind? Though it hurt just as good as it felt I couldn't open my eyes, 'cause I imagined that the one I'm sleeping with is … you.

I'd be devastated if I saw someone other than you screwing me, why can’t I just choose the one who I frickin' love!

I just… Wanted it too badly, you … in my bed, and I still want it … I always will, and I'm still wondering.. What if... What if you love me, stupid Sasuke? What if you were my lover .. as always .. I wish for it to come true… That wish … will never come true, would it? I'm … such a coward! I'm so scared to .. get hurt … by the only one that I've ever loved, but … it's not fair to make the guy who's madly in love with me suffer, so I'll just .. Make this one guy happy, and be the most frickin' miserable person on earth … is it really worth it? I should just … stick to the plan for now"

A tear fell from naruto's eyes as he thought:"i don't want to stick to that fucking plan?"

"Hmm ... Would it make him suffer? Being with a man who doesn't love him … Only he can decide ... I'll just have to ask him, I guess"

When naruto was done bathing he got out of the bathroom he was so hungry that he forgot that he wanted to ask rock lee that question ... he went straight to the cupboard to get cup ramen …

Rock lee:"hey naruto, do you really ... love me?"

Naruto thought:"has he found out? Oh i forgot to ask him" and said:"would i agree to sleep with you if I don't? And were ya thinking when that question came to ya?" he opened his cup ramen and poured some hot water in it…

Rock lee:"is it just sex that you want? Just answer me, will ya?" he said as he looked Naruto with a straight face

Naruto:"look just imagine this, it does'ent mean it's true, but just imagine it"

Rock lee:"don't change the subject"

Naruto:"I'm not it's related, imagine this: i don't really love you, i love someone else, and would it hurt you to be with me?"

Rock lee:"is that true?"

Naruto:"would it?"

Rock lee:"a little ... now YOU answer my question…"

Naruto:"promise you won't be mad …"

Rock lee's mind was about to explode, thousands of ideas passed his mind "why's he better than me?" and "then if he does love him, has he imagined him instead of me? How much did he think of him in every moment we were together?" "Why?"

Rock lee:"so it's true, when we were doing it ... did you ... wish ... it was him instead of me?"

Naruto remained in silence before he said:".... yes"

Rock lee:"I'm too shocked to be mad …… does he love you back?"

Naruto:"no…"

Rock lee:"then ... why do you love him? ... Will you stay with me? I-I can replace him..." rock lee tried to hide his tears but he couldn't, tears fell down his cheeks as he wished that ground splits into half and swallows him down.

Naruto:"because love is stupid, and ... and no-one could replace him, I mean, I can't choose who I love ... I'm so sorry, rock lee ... And it's your choice ... I'm okay with it either ways ... but let me tell you what will happen, so you won't regret it later …"

Naruto thought:"what if…?"

Naruto:"when we have sex, i can't open my eyes coz i can't imagine someone other than him screwing me, and i can't stop thinking about him even if i wanted to ... And when you do something sweet to me ... I wish it was him doing it … and you know why I never let you come inside? 'cause …" a tear fell from narutos eyes as he thought that he's just getting lower and lower, he continued talking and said:" 'cause I wanna save my ass for him, i-I'm sorry rock lee, you're such a sweet lover and you love me and all, i didn't wanna hurt you, but i couldn't let you suffer because of me, you're just too ... sweet to me, and i just can't hurt someone so sweet.. I'm so sorry…"

Rock lee:"i love you naruto ... i... It would hurt so much if you leave me, i want you to stay with me .. If... It's okay with you" he said as he got up from the bed and hugged naruto from the back tightly and then rock lee said:"you're such a softie" he chuckled as he kissed naruto's neck ... naruto:"I'm no fucking softie!"

Rock lee:"but honestly, does it make YOU suffer?"

Naruto:"honestly?"

Rock lee:"what did i just say?"

Naruto:"it ... Makes me suffer…"

Rock lee:"i can't be so selfish, i love you and i wanna be with you, but ... i can't let you suffer..."

Naruto:"you're so sweet rock lee, i wish i could choose who i love"

Rock lee:"i wish so too ... hey naruto, how about good-bye sex!"

Naruto:"I'll close my eyes and imagine it's him…"

Rock lee:"and I'll imagine that you won't…"

[{yaoi-loveh..}~]

part B

 

Naruto thought:" that's the least thing I could do for him"

Naruto held rock lee's hand, and walked the bed, he threw himself on the bed pulling rock lee's hand so rock lee would fall over him, naruto closed his eyes and imagined that it's Sasuke, he held rock lee's chin and got their lips closer as he opened his mouth a little and French kissed him passionately.

The blond held rock lee's waist and flipped him so he could be on top...

naruto:"i wanna ..." he said as he started with sucking rock lee's neck and he gave him a hickey close to his collar bones, rock lee thought:"what a nice memory that lasts for only 3 day's ... too bad"

As naruto got down to suck rock lee's dick, rock lee's heart was about to burst out of his chest! He's really gonna miss Naruto doing all that to him he thought:"I'm gonna miss you, Naruto, I wonder when is my broken heart gonna heal after this?"

Naruto lowered himself and started licking rock lee's dick, he sucked it like it was as tasty as ramen rock lee moaned softly, he couldn't take it anymore so he held naruto's chin, lifted it to kiss him, but naruto said:"i just sucked your dick y'know, ya really wanna taste it?"

Rock lee:"i don't mind ..." rock lee closed his eyes and frenched Naruto, he flipped him so he could be on Top ... he lowered himself to leave a hickey on naruto's chest, maybe he'll remember the things that happened because of a stupid lie, he left 2 hickeys on Naruto's chest, then he moved to the blonde's dick and sucked it, then he lifted narutos legs a little and started to lick Naruto's entrance and pushed his tongue inside as Naruto moaned in pain.

Rock lee pushed a finger in naruto's entrance and a loud moan was released from naruto he said:"ah! Wait, r-rock lee!"

rock lee:"sorry naruto i just wanna have a good one with you before it's all over ..." he said as he started moving his finger's thrusting in and out, he actually found naruto's sweet spot really fast he added another finger and naruto moaned loudly, and his moans got louder and louder, rock lee got his finger's out of naruto's entrance and sat down, he pulled naruto's hand so he could set down too and Naruto said:"what are *pant* doing?"

Rock lee spread naruto's leg's and pulled them closer as he pushed his dick into him, naruto released a loud scream, rock lee said:"are you okay?, should i continue?"

Naruto:"will you fuck me already?! I can't take it anymore…"

Rock lee thought:"is it just my imagination or did he just say that? well i guess that no man can resist this fuck me already" Naruto was pretty surprised he just said that he thought:"did I just say that? I can't believe it! Am I really that horny that I'd say this kinda stuff?!"

Rock lee placed his hand on naruto's waist so he could control his dick's movement and he kept thrusting into Naruto madly! And Naruto's hands surrounded rock lee's neck naruto:"ah, aaah, f-faster Sasuke!" rock lee obeyed him and moved faster and harder!

Rock lee thought:"Sasuke? Whatever... Maybe he's just confused ... wait, no matter how confused he is, he won't say the name of the one he hates during sex, will he?! what the fuck's going on here?" and said:" like this?"

Naruto:"ah, yes! More! Ahhhhh" he said, only a little time passed before they both were at their limits…

Rock lee:"i-i'm about to come!"

Naruto:"Sasuke i mean rock lee, g-get it out!"

Rock lee obeyed naruto he got out his dick from naruto's entrance, as they both came, rock lee thought:"i-it's Sasuke! He loves Sasuke, doesn't he?! What makes that bastard better than me anyways?!"

Rock lee fell over naruto on the bed and as he got his breathing back to normal he lyed beside his beloved blond before he said:"it's Sasuke who you love, right?"

Naruto:"what?! How do you know?!"

Rock lee:"you said his name ... when we were doing it, i just wanna know ... what makes HIM better than me?"

Naruto:"he's not better than you, YOU are better than him ... but i can't choose who i love, rock lee, it's … complicated"

Rock lee:"how? How did you fall in love with that emo fag!? ... And why?"

Naruto:"don't call him that! …. the night before he left i was training, and i always train shirtless, it's comfy, well i layed my back on a tree and played my favorite song on my iPod .. And ... he was watching me from behind that tree, he got out and started feeling me up when he thought i was asleep ... well, then his brother came out of nowhere and discovered he was gay ... and then it turned out that itachi is gay too, then i was really surprised and asked them if they were like really gay, they pretended it was a joke and all, then i asked Sasuke if he's not gay then why did he feel me up? He gave up and told me that he got a little turned when he was watching me"

Rock lee winked and said:"who wouldn't?"

Naruto blushed and continued saying:"well, i told him that that means he's gay and he said yes, then i tried to run away to tell sakura about that, but he caught me ... well he licked my neck and gave me a hickey, i stepped forward and he stepped forward too then he lowered my pant's but i lifted them up and stepped forward again well then i took my shirt and ran way from there ... and the next day he disappeared i kept daydreaming about him all day i just couldn't forget about what happened though it was just a kiss, he was the first one that touched me, and he gave me a boner that day, and when he came back yesterday I kept cursing and yelling and doing a stupid fuss about it, but no matter what I did, I'm still gay, and .. in love… well, then … you know the rest"

Rock lee:"well there's a thing i wanna tell you, when he disappeared me and gara saw him in the woods, we kept teased him a little about him being gay and in love with a guy and stuff ... he admitted that he really is gay and PROUD, well we asked him who was it? He said that the guy he liked is a blue eyed blonde who has bronze skin that smells like vanilla and likes the color orange and then gara told him that he has a nice taste ... and then Sasuke mentioned something about ramen, but i don't remember it clearly, then we asked him if he's his lover, he said no, and we asked him if that blue eyed blonde likes him back he said no, and he was wrong, 'cause clearly that blue eyed blonde is madly in love with him! So, guess who's a blue eyed blonde with bronze skin and likes the color orange?"

Naruto:"I smell like vanilla?!"

Rock lee:"that doesn't fucking matter!"

Naruto:"sasuke’s in love with me! Man I was so stupid …"

Naruto:"so all i gotta do is to go and tell him i love him!"

Rock lee:"yup"

Naruto:"thanks rock lee ... i… appreciate it" he said as he smiled in a way that made rock lee's heart pound.

Rock lee:"anytime, hey gimme a last kiss" he said as he kissed naruto a passionate hot French kiss that as he thought:"why do I have to be so noble?! Why did I just do that?! Why am I so damn stupid?!" their kiss lasted for a couple minutes and when their lips separated and said:" I'm gonna go now" he said as he got up from the bed, grabbed his Clothes and wore them, before he left he said:"well, good luck with Sasuke ... Naruto, and … take care" rock lee smiled holding back his tears, he remembered everything that happened in that house, and how he got to have Naruto for a day, and how he's gonna remember those moments .. Forever…"

Naruto:"thnx ..." he said and thought:"what a sweet guy, I can't believe he'd do that for me *smiles*, oh i wonder who's dick is bigger? Rock lee's dick is huge! i hope sasuke's is bigger ... wait, when did i become so horny?"

After rock lee left the house his tears fell and his heart hurt so much he said:"it's so hard to pretend to be Happy...why naruto? I'll ... never forget you.. It's true that gara's my first, but, you're my first love! ... I should go to gara after i calm down ... maybe HE can ease my pain ... i should just imagine that it's naruto instead of gara.. That's one good thing i learned from Naruto"

As rock lee walked away from naruto's house he thought:"i just realized why did SASUKE, i mean SASUKE fell for naruto ... it's not just ... his sexy body, great blowjob, hot touch, tight ass, nor because he's a good kisser, nor for his looks ... it's that naruto cares for who deserves caring .. Actually for everyone... He's a nice person, a softie even if he doesn't wanna show it ... he wouldn't hurt an ANT ... sometimes he even ignores his own happiness for people…

that's so rare actually, and his smile ... could make you forget the world even for just a moment, and that vanilla smell all over his body, man I never thought he'd be so good, I never thought he'd be so … sweet... you just can't not love him…"

Naruto took a relaxing shower while he dreamed about his life with Sasuke and how his love is going to be fulfilled after a long wait, when he was done, he wrapped a towel around his waist and left the bathroom, he looked at himself in the mirror and thought:"hmmm, I should get ready" the blond was extremely excited to meeting his stupid Sasuke, yes, he's still stupid Sasuke …

 

 

Rock lee and gara!? When?! And where?! And why?! Well, that's another story... most importantly are naruto

And Sasuke finally gonna be together? And what's gara's and rock lee's story?

Find out all about that in the next chapters ^_~

[Miro]

Oh, after I read this part, now I'm really curious... Naruto and Sasuke will be together? rabbit12...but maybe not yet? I'm really curious to see what will happen when they will meet. :5yoyo34:

[animegirl]

I love it! :leaf15:

 

This was my favorite part of it:

"SASUKE fell for naruto ... it's not just ... his sexy body, great blowjob, hot touch, tight ass, nor because he's a good kisser, nor for his looks ... it's that naruto cares for who deserves caring .. Actually for everyone..." :leaf3:

 

You said it in such a beautiful way! So cute!

[{yaoi-loveh..}~]

i'm so so so so so so sorry for bieng so late :hamtaro-005 (21):

 

hope ya didn't get bored, anyways, i didn't bring the next part but i came to tell ya some stuff :leaf3:

 

which do ya like more? sasunaru or narusasu? well, in the next parts there will be both

 

guys, imagine getting heartbroken from the only person you ever loved, how are ya gonna ease it up? how about alcohol? maybe crying? or even jumping aroung naked in the streets! well sasuke thinks he's heartbroken, coz his usuratonkachi was too shy to tell him that he loves him! you could already imagine what he did to just forget the pain, maybe that he even had sex with someone else! use ya'r imagination until you find out :hamtaro-005 (22):

 

what about naruto? he's kinda shy, so will he chicken up and be satisfied with only "getting along" with sasuke? or will he grab his balls and go confess? :leaf13:

 

i'm sure you'r wondering about the smexy scenes in the subsequent chapters, it's enjoyable for those of you who like it kinky style, ALL kinds of crazy stuff! hair gel, toothbrushes in the wrong unusual places ! foxy5

 

anyways you guys, the main idea here is that sasuke and naruto are gonna hook up! soon or later, they will hook up, but i must tell ya, that it's not the usual cinderella crap story, someone in there will suffer for happiness, imagine you'r lover prostituing you? :leaf16:

 

or let's say, the twin of you'r lover, how can you tell apart who's the one you spent these crimson nights with? the one you hugged when you paniked in the roller coaster, the one you saved from sudden death, all these memories that you can never forget, who's the one you shared them with? :leaf10:

[Aoi]

I like more narusasu But sasunaru is ok too But I think that switching roles is even more interesting! :hamtaro-005 (6):

[{yaoi-loveh..}~]

hehe, me too, switching roles is my obsession! :leaf4:

 

hey again! oh yeah, i've got something for you, i brought the fifth part everyone! :cuteonion7:

 

i've had so much fun writing it and i laughed a lot, and i hope you do too! :hamtaro-005 (22):

i actualy spent the whole day hloding my pen and my i couldn't feel my hands after copying it to my laptop... :cuteonion53:

 

but when i was done ... i felt so proud of myself! and i've also soaked my hands in ice .. but it was the first time that i've worked so hard for something! and i was really happy! :cuteonion57:

 

anyways, i hope you enjoy! :leaf3:

 

 

 

chapter 5

 

part A

 

He opened his wardrobe looking around between the huge pile of clothes for something to wear, he didn't want it to look like he spent two hours choosing an outfit yet he didn't want it to look like he just gathered some pieces from under his bed and wore them

"I want him to eat me up" he thought.

The blond dived into his closet, he took a look at every piece that fell into his hand, then threw it back, uncaring where it landed creating another pile of clothing behind him, and after throwing the half of his wardrobe behind him, he decided what he wanted. He turned back to look for the outfit that he had chosen.

He took out a sleeveless fish-net T-shirt, a large sized orange shirt, dark blue baggy jeans with pockets all over them, a wide black belt. He wore them in a hurry and went to the dresser to spike his hair and pile up lots of rubber bangles on both his hand.

Naruto wore his favorite necklace, lifted up his sleeves and took a fast final look in the mirror, checking if he looked just as he wanted, he laughed childishly while thinking: "man I can't wait!"

The blue eyed man rushed outta the house. He was very excited to meet his dear and wondered how does he look like now? What's he doing? And most of all, how does it feel to hear i-love-you from his honey lips?

"DING-DONG" the bell rang as Naruto pushed the button. He waited a while but no-one answered "open the door, stupid Sasuke you're sitting on my last nerve here" he thought.

the blond rang the bell again and again but there was no reply to his worried concern, he knocked repeatedly 'til he lost it and was about to kick the door open, but then he heard a grinning voice coming from inside the house, his excitement, curiosity and anxiousty were killing him so he tried to open the door, and guess what?! The door was unlocked!

Naruto opened the door and said with an uneasy tone "y-yo Sasuke!" but he got no reply.

He came in slowly hoping to see someone, wondering is entering the house was the right choice to do, actually ENTERING wasn't the right word to say, not to Naruto, the right word to him was BREAKING IN the house, he started asking himself "who would bail me out if I got into jail for this?"

"Oh hey abaddon, come take my soul, I'm bored of life, come, come! Oh you want some beer, don't ya? I think there's one left" Sasuke started looking between the can beers thrown all over the place near him.

Apparently, sasuke's drunk, Naruto should laugh right now, laugh at the idiotic scene stood before him, BUT the shock, the enormous shock stopped him, not just the shock of the surprisingly idiotic phrase that Sasuke said, but from the scene humiliating sasuke's image that has been spread into Naruto's mind, he wore only his favorite blue boxers, beer cans and snack packages, bottles of dr.pepper and bowls of chips almost empty were all over the place, he was unshaven, drunk, in a mess, what else could I say? He was miserable, he looked miserable, smelled miserable, horribly miserable! Anyways …

The raven man leant on the couch he sitting on to look behind to what he thought was abaddon "why do you look like Naruto?" he asked.

"Oh…"

"Why are you in a mess? AND unshaven?"

"Coz … I got kidnapped by … the aliens! … and they returned me home just a while ago"

"I didn't spend two hours picking my clothes to meet this miserable idiotic looking, smelling drunken ass idiot, did i?! This is so different from my imagination, I gotta get him sober!" the blond thought.

"Get up" he said whilst he closed the door behind him with his leg.

"But my nose's broken"

"That is such a lame excuse, shouldn't you say my LEG is broken?"

"Oh right, my leg's broken" Sasuke said before he tapped his right leg twice.

"Get the fuck up!" Naruto said after he approached the couch the raven was sitting on until he stood ahead of him.

"Kiss me and I will" he said while he sat properly and looked at the blond.

Naruto blushed as he thought "did he just say that? No, no, no, don't do this to me Sasuke, I'm the verge and all I need is a slight push"

"d-don't fuck with me! Get up!" he said before he placed his arms under sasuke's and tried to get him up, and after seconds he managed to carry the raven.

"Where are we going?" he said as he got up on his own.

"To the moon" he said as he pushed Sasuke to the bathroom.

"Oooh, that's sounds nice, let's get some snacks" the raven said before he tried to head to the kitchen.

"Come back here, there are already some snacks there" he said while he grabbed sasuke's hand and pulled him to the bathroom, he thought: "am I an idiot? Of course!"

Naruto headed to the first door he saw thinking it was the bathroom, but it was Sasuke's bedroom.

"Wow, the moon looks just like my room, aren't the aliens sweet? Trying to make me feel I'm home"

Naruto laughed his ass out before he said: "you really are drunk, aren't ya, Hahahaha"

Naruto thought: "so this is sasuke's room, huh? I thought this guy was neat and organized, his room's a mess!"

Naruto looked around the room, gazing at his beloved's room, noticing every little minor detail, even wondered about how these cracks on the wall have been made?

The walls were tinted in dark blue with big orange spots printed on them, the bed was all white at least 8 pillows on it, it looked really soft.

A couple inches away from the bed rested a cupboard with a clock and a pic of Naruto hugging Sasuke on it "when did that happen?" Naruto thought.

The floor was a total mess! Beer cans, snack packages, books, clothes, cigarette boxes and god knows what laid there.

on the left side of the room Sasuke's wardrobe stood close to a huge cupboard filled with books, his clothes were laying out of his closet with his bag ahead of it, and some books, a pencil case and some pins and pencils.

In front of the bed sasuke's dresser stood leaning on the wall, with his iPod, a camera, hair gel, black nail polish, some perfume bottles and a bunch of accessories laid on it.

In the middle of the room a round chair made of wood sticks hanged down from the ceiling, cool, huh? An orange furry carpet was positioned in the middle of the room.

[{yaoi-loveh..}~]

part B

 

 

The blond noticed a big car toy and its remote control laying beside the bed in the middle of the stash, he burst out laughing assuring that people are the total opposite of what they seem.

"What's so funny, goofball? Hurry up I wanna see the moon!" he said as he gave the blond two elbows.

"Oh, right" Naruto said before he headed to the bathroom pulling along Sasuke.

"Why are we in my bathroom?"

Naruto turned on the cold water and pushed Sasuke into the shower as he screamed "whaaa"

The blue eyed blond leaned down to Sasuke, and shook his hair along with his head and gave him two gentle slaps on the face, Sasuke shook his head once more and pushed his hair back.

"Sober yet?" Naruto said.

"You're too fucking mean!"

"Then I'll get a towel" Naruto said as he turned, but before he could take a step ..

"Wait!" Sasuke said as he grabbed his hand and looked at him intensely.

"What?!" Naruto said waiting for an answer, Sasuke stared at him for seconds before he said: "why are you here?"

Naruto released a sigh as he thought:" what have I got myself into? … I gotta tell him but .. What if he doesn't love me, what if rock lee was just cracking a bad joke? I'll have to ask him anyways, plus it's the only reason I spent 2 hours picking an outfit and came here right?"

"I'll tell ya when I get the towel" Naruto left Sasuke's hand and took a step before Sasuke grabbed his shoulder and screamed: "no! Just tell me now!"

"I'll tell you w-"

Sasuke interrupted the blond by saying :"just fucking tell me now will ya?!"

Millions of questions were about to blast sasuke's head off, questions like "what happened to me?" and "when did he get here?" and most of all "why? Why's he here?"

"Did ya come here to just .. Check out on me?"

"Look, it's a long story, so I'll get the towel and then we'll talk about it"

Curiosity was killing Sasuke while Naruto went to get a towel which he found between the piles of clothes laying beside the bed. He came back to the bathroom and pointed the towel to Sasuke, he stared at him for a while before he took the towel, and started drying his hair, chest and his arms.

He took his boxers off which seriously got Naruto to his limit, it was enough for him to see the water drops going slowly down the raven's abs and chest to make his heart beat go crazy, but this, this made him ready to pin Sasuke to the wall and rape him right away! He thought: "noooo! Not this! Don't do this to me Sasuke! I might really rape ya right now! Damn it's so .. Big and ..Curled .. And the tip! oh the ti- no! What am I thinking?! I should hold back .. Until .. We .. Looks so hard .. No! I should hold back 'til we settle this down! … My hearts about to burst my chest for goodness sakes!"

Sasuke noticed the blonds flushed face, he noticed how his eyes were focused on his dick, and how his lips were parted like he was about to drool!

"What? Wasn't rock lee's dick enough for ya?" he said as he stared at Naruto's expressions.

Naruto woke outta his thoughts before saying:" listen Sasuke i-I gotta tell ya something .. Lets .. Go inside" he said as pointed to the room but his eyes were still focused on the ravens dick.

"Alright" he wrapped the blue towel around his waist so Naruto's eyes turned to the room.

They sat on the bed, Sasuke wondering what's going on and Naruto thinking: "Boner! I got a boner! Damn I gotta do this quick!"

"So what is it? You got dumped or something?" he said as he took a hard look at Naruto's troubled face.

"I don't .. Like rock lee"

"Listen man, I'm not doctor phill here, I'm not a good listener, and I'm not the right person to talk to about problems, it's not me who you need" he said as he looked away trying his relieved face, the raven felt like squealing but that would so crack down his image.

"Alright, I'll be your doctor phill"

"Of course you would, you're too curious to say that you don' wanna listen"

"So, why did ya tell me that ya love him?"

"How would I know that he's standing by the door?"

"That's not an answer"

"Coz .. I wasn't ready to tell ya that .."

"That?" Sasuke couldn't hide the 30 inches smile on his face, he was happy but he couldn't help being mad, why you ask? Well ..

"You guys still together?"

"No .. We broke up" the blond said as he scratched his head for seconds "I …. Love you" he said before he looked at Sasuke.

Sasuke grabbed Naruto's collar and pinned him down to the bed brutally placing each one of his legs on a side of the blonde's body.

"Naruto you jerk! You put me through all that shit coz you weren't ready to fucking confess!? I swear that if I didn't love ya so much I'd bury you alive ! You broke my heart jackass!"

"I'm sorry" Naruto said as he looked away feeling guilty .. Sasuke looked at him gazing that cute expression on his face thinking: "do you have to be so cute?!"

"I-I love you …"

"l-love you too" he said as he left naruto's collar and rested his hands on the blonde's shoulder, he gathered their lips in a lusty, passionate kiss, satisfying their longed-for desires and feeding his hungry fantasies, their tongues played as sasuke's hand started playing with the buttons of the blonds shirt that's not enough is it, I'm sure they both want more than just a kiss!

Sasuke took Naruto's shirt off in a rush and threw it behind unconcerned with where it landed, he lowered himself kissing Naruto's chin, throat collar bones, a soft moan escaped Naruto's lips, Sasuke sucked and nibbled on Naruto's neck, enjoying the smell of vanilla on it, that smell he had longed for years.

The blond noticed Sasuke still had his towel on, so he passed his fingers down sasuke's spine gently which caused a pleasurable tingly sensation to Sasuke, Naruto took the towel off, he squeezed the raven's butt cheeks tenderly.

Sasuke looked down at the blond's chest through his fish-net shirt, thinking: "fuck, I didn't know he looks so sexy in fish-nets!"

"Do you love me, Naruto?" the raven man said as he started sucking Naruto's nipples through the fish-net shirt, he licked the sensitive spots on that delicious spot with his desire to discover every sensitive spot on Naruto's chest.

[{yaoi-loveh..}~]

part C

 

 

"I love you, Sasuke, ah!" he said as he enjoyed the feeling of sasuke's tongue on his sensitive skin.

"Say it again"

"I-i love you, ahh! … I love you so much, Sasuke"

"Again and again and again" he said as he enjoyed the sound of his beloved blond repeating his words of affection.

The raven pushed his tongue against Naruto's neck, leaving small bit marks all over it as Naruto moaned to the pleasurable sensation Sasuke gave him.

The blond's hands reached for the raven man's spine lowering to the sensitive spot under his thighs, a lusty moan was released from the raven's lips.

Naruto felt the pleasure getting more concentrated, his moans got a bit louder, he closed his eyes as his face flushed. Naruto's loud moans only got Sasuke hornier, hungrier for more, he sucked the sensitive skin under the blond's arms.

He moved to Naruto's nipple, taking a string from the blond's fish-net shirt and wiping his nipple with it while his left hand surrounded Naruto's left nipple between two strings, the blond's moans got louder by degrees of pleasure, his face was flushed and his mind went blank "his body's sensitive .. So cute" Sasuke thought.

Naruto gripped sasuke's shoulder closing hid eyes before Sasuke held the blond's hands and pinned them to the bed close to his head.

The raven man's tongue moved down licking his beloved's delicious bronze skin even if he still wore his fish-net shirt, he started licking and sucking the sensitive spots under Naruto's arm, his moans got louder which only made Sasuke hornier.

The raven man lowered himself, moving his lips down to lick to the sensitive spot around Naruto's belly button, he tightened the space between the two string which made the blond moan louder for more pleasure.

"S-sasuke! Enough, i-I can't take it anymore, I want it now!" the blond said as he wiped the sweat off his forehead.

"whataya want now?" sasuke said in a sexy way as he unbuckled naruto's belt then he unbuttoned and unzipped his jeans with his teeth, of course he knew what naruto wanted, nobody's stupid enough to not know, BUT, he wanted to hear it from his beloved naruto.

" I want you to fuck me idiot"

"not yet, my precious blondy" sasuke noticed that his (precious blondy) has no underwear on that erection. He licked it starting from his balls and ending with the tip, then he licked the sensitive spot there in a round motion before he took the tip inside his mouth and sucked it, naruto's moans got louder and louder by degrees of pleasure.

The raven haired man sucked the tip a little bit more, then he took all naruto's dick inside his mouth and started sucking it back and forth. He took naruto's dick outta his mouth and lifted his legs up a bit before he licked naruto's entrance, he pushed his tongue in as a preparation, naruto's eyes opened wide because of the sudden pleasure "ah!" he moaned as sasuke's tongue went deeper and deeper.

"s-sasuke, enough" naruto begged his lover, wanting more than just a tongue inside his entrance, and the raven knew that very well se he lifted naruto's legs a bit more and rubbed the tip of his own dick against naruto's entrance before he pushed the half of his dick inside, naruto's closed his eyes as he released a loud moan of pain.

"I'm gonna move .. naruto" sasuke said as he too closed his eyes and moved outta the blonds entrance, then he pushed it all in, starting to thrust into the blond, and it was only seconds before the raven-haired man hit naruto's sweet spot, naruto opened his eyes wide as a loud moan of pleasure escaped his lips "AHH!"

Sasuke stared at the blond's face, loving his expressions.

"ah, d-don't look, it's embarrassing" the blond ordered as he gripped to the sheets.

"I can't help it, you're too sexy, now open your eyes" the raven man said as he increased the speed, hitting naruto's spot harder and faster, the blond obeyed sasuke and opened his eyes, he was turned on by the scene before his eyes, he just couldn't help loving the way his lover gave him pleasure, and how his longing for his beloved sasuke's warmth has finally stopped.

The raven man grabbed naruto's arm as his other hand was helping him to thrust into naruto, he pulled him, so he would sit on his thighs, the blond moaned in pain because of the sudden change of position, but he got used to it as soon as he felt the pleasure overwhelming him, sasuke wrapped his arms around naruto's waist, giving himself more control in the thrusting.

Naruto bordered sasuke's shoulders with his arms and pressed his lips to his neck, causing sasuke to moan in the pleasure of naruto's warm lips on his milky skin.

"ah! H-harder sasuke!" the blond ordered and sasuke obeyed him by going harder and faster, they both felt their climax close.

"i-I'm gonna"

"yeah me too" sasuke said as he did his final thrusts before they both came.

Naruto fell on the bed as sasuke fell on him both trying to get their breathing back to normal sasuke looked at the blond's crystal blue eyes as the blond exchanged the looks with him, their lips gathered both wishing that this moment lasts forever, the moment they've longed for, the moment that satisfies their thirsty hearts with passion, the raven man got off naruto and laid next to him keeping eye contact.

"you're a jerk and a chicken, you know that?"

"don't you think that's a little harsh?"

"nope, you're a jerk for breaking my heart, and a chicken for breaking my heart because you were too scared to confess"

" I guess you're right, I'm a chicken. And a jerk, and you love me, but I don't blame you, I blame your stupidity, and I blame love whose also stupid, and I blame my charm"

"shut up, let's go on a date"

Naruto looked at the clock on the cupboard beside the bed and said:" it's 6.pm … and I don't know why, but I don't feel like going out right now, I wanna do it and do it and do it again and then sleep"

"then let's go tomorrow, I wanna start a hole new life with my usuratonkachi, with a~~ll the g'morning kisses and a~~ll the other romantic shit'

"I didn't know you have that part in you'

"well, now you know, and yayyyy we're going on a date tomorrow"

Naruto stared at sasuke as he clapped and did some other stupid stuff, he thought:" is this really sasuke? The quiet. Unfunny, dead serious sasuke? Oh god I love that cute part of him!"

"you know, you're SO cute when you're drunk"

"say that again and I'll fucking beat you to death" sasuke said as he gave naruto an elbow in his arm.

"you're SO, SO cute"

Sasuke hit naruto but hem just kept repeating the sentence "you're cute, SO cute" so the raven man just kept hitting naruto as they both laughed their ass out!

"hahaha. Alright, alright, hahaha, I'll stop!"

"no, you could go on, coz I really feel like breaking something right now"

"your room's really cool" naruto said as he looked around sasuke's room

"thnx, so when I was … drunk … what did I do?"

"well. First you thought I was abaddon, and then you kept looking for an empty beer can for your so-called abaddon, hahaha, and then you thought we were going to moon, and when we got to your room you were like "why does the moon look like my room? Hahahaha" naruto said as sasuke burst out laughing "why did ya get so frickin' drunk in the first place?" naruto asked.

"coz some jerk broke my heart" sasuke said staring at naruto.

"that jerk loves you, you know"

"I love him too"

"hey, when did this happen?" he said as he took the pic where naruto hugs sasuke and showed it to his lover.

"when I learned how to work on Photoshop"

"hmmm, wow" naruto said, he stared at the pic thinking :"damn, he's good"

"so, was it good?"

"ya tease too much" naruto said while he returned the pic on the cupboard.

Sasuke got up and leaned on naruto, he whispered in his ear saying: "I bet ya loved it"

Naruto felt a pleasurable tingly sensation that made him all horny and hot, he laid a hand sasuke's neck and pulled him closer, he whispered in his ear saying: "shut up and fuck me" the blond licked sasuke's ear lobe before he got up and pushed the raven man down to the bed and kissed him like there's no tomorrow while he placed each one of his legs on a side of sasuke's body.