yojichan Posted April 29, 2011 Share Posted April 29, 2011 Escapism You don't see the tears when you pour your heart to me You don't feel the pain as I listen to your anxiety You are not here to hold me tightly You can't reach me and comfort me softly I listen to your woes as I battle with demons on my own I absorb your fears as I watch mine and how they've grown You are troubled by your life, your love, your hate You have no idea I have more of those to date I care for you but you never see It has always been like this for me You don't know how I wish it were to be Someone I could show my misery the way you do to me Your confidence I value beyond measure Sometimes they can be such a pleasure Your love I truly treasure And then times I feel like having a seizure You don't know my crippling fears Or why I have uncontrollable tears And why I sometimes feel my end is near That I would lose everything I hold dear Am I a mere escape to you Do I even matter when you are not feeling blue You take it all out on me as I take it all in I fight the notion that this is how it's always been. AUTHOR NOTES: I wrote this years ago when I thought love was a destiny only for others to enjoy. I also thought it was fitting to post here since most BL stories usually have the unrequited love factor. 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted April 29, 2011 Share Posted April 29, 2011 . .i love reading your works senpai . .this poem, had a feeling of such burden, i can't really express through words, but "BURDEN", fits all my thoughts of this. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted April 29, 2011 Author Share Posted April 29, 2011 thanks so much for reading. yes burden could be heavily felt in this poem. looking back, yes it truly was a burden for me having to be the one as that person unburdened himself to me. yet knowing too well that i'm not the one he wants and never will. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Last_sky16 Posted April 29, 2011 Share Posted April 29, 2011 good job...im a poem fan...becoz i have a fwen who is an indie poet... i think urs is good n deep... wuuu....the 1st stanza makes me touched... itz reminds of my own story....kyaaaa 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Macys Posted April 29, 2011 Share Posted April 29, 2011 Thank you so much for the poem!!! This is my favorite part: "I care for you but you never see It has always been like this for me You don't know how I wish it were to be Someone I could show my misery the way you do to me" Very beautiful!!!! :leaf15: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted April 29, 2011 Share Posted April 29, 2011 hey cool, i really like it ^_^ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted April 29, 2011 Author Share Posted April 29, 2011 good job...im a poem fan...becoz i have a fwen who is an indie poet... i think urs is good n deep... wuuu....the 1st stanza makes me touched... itz reminds of my own story....kyaaaa Thanks so much for reading and that the poem has touched you of a past memory. Thank you so much for the poem!!! This is my favorite part: "I care for you but you never see It has always been like this for me You don't know how I wish it were to be Someone I could show my misery the way you do to me" Very beautiful!!!! :leaf15: Thank you so much for reading. Those lines were borne out of the inner turmoil of being needed but not wanted and knowing where you stand with this person who will never be yours. hey cool, i really like it ^_^ Hey there! Thanks so much for reading. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 2, 2011 Share Posted September 2, 2011 I don't know I got the right image for this... Somehow when I read in my head this image is keep coming up... So as I said it... let the picture show you what I think... ^^;;; I just hope you like what I did here... --;;; 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted September 2, 2011 Author Share Posted September 2, 2011 OMG! HAMA-SAN! OMG!!! what did you do? i was only expecting a review but you went ahead and made an image for my poem! KYAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! *HUGS TIGHT* ♥ ♥ ♥ thank you so much...no one has ever done this for me. this is incredible! OMG! thank you so much! *kisses* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 3, 2011 Share Posted September 3, 2011 OMG! HAMA-SAN! OMG!!! what did you do? i was only expecting a review but you went ahead and made an image for my poem! KYAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! *HUGS TIGHT* ♥ ♥ ♥ thank you so much...no one has ever done this for me. this is incredible! OMG! thank you so much! *kisses* You're welcome! I am glad you like it... This is what I do any way... well not really job... just what I good at... ^^;;; I just want you to be happy... ^^ Long as I make you smile I think I did my job.... ^^ You also have me on this relay story... So this is my way of saying thank you!!! ^^ I just hope everything will be o.k. soon... So see you around! ^^ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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