misakixusagi Posted April 29, 2011 Share Posted April 29, 2011 The Beach The wind I feel across my face Gives me such a sense of space. The ocean that’s so vast and wide Has such a very youthful tide. The sand that goes between my toes Feels so soft and always flows Towards the sea, the sun, the air The beach is where I stop and stare. 12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted April 29, 2011 Share Posted April 29, 2011 . .simple yet it gives refreshing ambiance . .but it's kinda hanging - "The beach is where I stop and stare" ... and ... (it was like that for me) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted April 29, 2011 Author Share Posted April 29, 2011 hmmm cool, maybe i should look at extending this one lol this is one of my early poems like years ago so maybe i could re-vamp it now lol thanks cloudykateechizen x 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted April 29, 2011 Share Posted April 29, 2011 hmmm cool, maybe i should look at extending this one lol this is one of my early poems like years ago so maybe i could re-vamp it now lol thanks cloudykateechizen x . .i think i should wait for that 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JenovaVII Posted April 29, 2011 Share Posted April 29, 2011 As I read this poem the only thing filling my head was this one song. Seriously, in my opinion, it fits so damn well *.* I really liked it, it gives a nice relaxing feeling and sense of peace. That's another reason, lyrics aside, that I thought of this song right away. Please, keep up your writing. I enjoy it very much (: 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted May 1, 2011 Author Share Posted May 1, 2011 Wow I have never heard this song , who is it ? Thatks jenova 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JuJu Posted May 1, 2011 Share Posted May 1, 2011 Thanks for the lovely poem ♥ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JenovaVII Posted May 1, 2011 Share Posted May 1, 2011 It's a song named I Wish You Were Here, by Incubus. Did you like it? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted May 1, 2011 Author Share Posted May 1, 2011 yeah i did jenova, have to find it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amander123 Posted May 1, 2011 Share Posted May 1, 2011 I loved the poem! It really makes me want to visit the beach now! lol. I don't live near the beach though But great poem! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata--chan Posted November 25, 2011 Share Posted November 25, 2011 Love this very sweet . would be good for a poster ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Posted November 25, 2011 Share Posted November 25, 2011 So cute, I love the poem, really really beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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