K Posted May 7, 2011 Share Posted May 7, 2011 . .cloudy's informal poem, but still wanting for everyone to read (i hope ) PLANET ROCK rabbit3 It's my sun and moon That livens my night and day It's my twinkling star Sparkling and glimmering, awakening my eyes It's my heavy drug That rushes through my veins It's my antidote That cures my wounded heart It's my strongest brewed coffee A hard kick in my heart and brain It's my super soda Soaking this body in high sodium It's my water 70% of this body contains It's my food Feeding my unexplained hunger It's my software That's naturally installed in me It's my processor That driven my actions It's my curse That can't be taken away It's my disease Nothing and no one can cure this It's my soul That this body can't live without It's my body That this soul's precious container It's my oxygen The reason why i'm breathing It's my world Where this life revolves This is my music Music is within me And ROCK is my everything! 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aoi Posted May 7, 2011 Share Posted May 7, 2011 Your poem is so cool! rabbit8 I like so much these lines: It's my heavy drug That rushes through my veins It's my antidote That cures my wounded heart I think exactly the same about music! rabbit3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JuJu Posted May 7, 2011 Share Posted May 7, 2011 lol Thanks for the greattt poem.... I like it a lot I also like listening to Rock sometimes....cause its so inspiring and makes me wanna dance.. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nena21 Posted May 7, 2011 Share Posted May 7, 2011 Cool poem! I really like it! This was my fav part: "It's my heavy drug That rushes through my veins It's my antidote That cures my wounded heart" :hamtaro-005 (8): 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matti_19 Posted May 7, 2011 Share Posted May 7, 2011 Cool Cloudykateechizen Another great poem from you! I enjoy reading your poems every time :msn_red_fox 8 I also like very much the one with Love food 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted May 8, 2011 Author Share Posted May 8, 2011 . .cloudy is SUPAH SUPAH thankful to everyone who liked this poem and left their comments rabbit4 . .SUPAH hugz to you guyz foxy3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brohne Posted May 8, 2011 Share Posted May 8, 2011 This is awesome cloudy-chan!!! I loved it but I think my fav part is: It's my software That's naturally installed in me It's my processor That driven my actions so cool!!!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted May 8, 2011 Author Share Posted May 8, 2011 This is awesome cloudy-chan!!! I loved it but I think my fav part is: It's my software That's naturally installed in me It's my processor That driven my actions so cool!!!! . .yeeeheee, supah thanks brohne :leaf3: rabbit4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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