misakixusagi Posted May 9, 2011 Share Posted May 9, 2011 I look through the darkness to expose your lies I hear your whispers under the starlit canopy I smell your fear while crossing diamond oceans I taste your love like a victim of faith I touch your heart and turn your tears to roses 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted May 9, 2011 Author Share Posted May 9, 2011 just something i came up with at lunchtime, i gathered words from a few songs and used them to mould the poem on let me know what you think.. ?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JenovaVII Posted May 9, 2011 Share Posted May 9, 2011 I hear your whispers under the starlit canopy The way you use words... Just... F*cking lovely. More, please. :mashimaro5: 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brohne Posted May 9, 2011 Share Posted May 9, 2011 This is truly beautiful. I love the way it flows together and the picture it paints in my mind as I read it. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JuJu Posted May 9, 2011 Share Posted May 9, 2011 No words are suitable expressing my feelings than "Love it Love it....".... You loved ...by all senses!!!! That's freakin' awesome!! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted May 9, 2011 Author Share Posted May 9, 2011 wow im really greatfull for your responses, it really makes me happy u guys say that stuff thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miro Posted May 9, 2011 Share Posted May 9, 2011 I really enjoyed reading this poem! As brohne said, I like very much the way it flows together! Very very beautiful! :msn_red_fox 6 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted May 10, 2011 Share Posted May 10, 2011 . .WOW! . .it was just five lines but it expresses more than of a long poem, deep words that yet to be meaningful rabbit14 . .thanks for sharing this poem to us misakixusagi :leaf3: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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