EmiZea Posted May 11, 2011 Share Posted May 11, 2011 I used to write a lot, I still write, but not so often, so after reading some in here, I thought I would share a few of mine too They might be a bit dark, but I usually getting most inspired when I'm hurt or down, as most people do... I guess. Bitterness You took me You broke me You tore my heart out I loved you Till you almost took my sanity (Next 2 is in memory of a friend of mine) Rest in peace Thinking of you Feeling the tears Running down my cheeks Why did you do it? How could you do it? Without saying goodbye So young and sweet Why didn't you let me in? Why couldn't you say something? Its all to late you are gone You now only live in my mind The gun in your hand The bullet in your head You will always be remembered Someday I raise my head up to the sky The rain is kissing my face I smile and hold my hands up I feel your kissing me from heaven Caresses my body with the wind I know your looking down at me I know you miss me too One day I will come to you But not yet... Someday No more pain I laugh but I don't feel joy I laugh but I only feel sadness I wish I couldn't feel anything at all All this time I spent to fit in All this time no one even cares It is like I'm not even there Darkness everywhere I step Darkness everywhere I touch Bitter pills that I have swallowed So ridiculous to keep pretending So ridiculous to keep on trying It is all so very wrong So loud the blood floats in my veins So loud the voices inside my head Noises! Just leave me be! Help me I'm sinking ever so slow Help me please don't let my hands go ..don't waste your time.. it's over.. 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
현애 Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 Rest in peace and Someday is sad...:msn_red_fox 18:cuteonion24: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 . .ooooh, i felt the last poem, "no more pain" , it's like an EMO to me (well, obviously ) . .it delivers into this feelings: cold-hearted, confusion, bravery (fighting against self), deep sadness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmiZea Posted May 12, 2011 Author Share Posted May 12, 2011 @ BLover : Aye I know they are sad, but I had just lost my friend, he committed suicide, and I didn't see it come. So I was so hurt, angry and frustrated. But with "Someday" that I wrote a while after "Rest in peace", when I felt more at peace with it, I guess I had to believe that someday I would see him again and it helped me to move on.. Today I don't know what to think tho, but its a nice thought @ Cloudy: "No more pain" I wrote when I looked back at my life when I was most fucked up, and I was really far out, so the cold-hearted, confusion, fighting against myself and deep sadness is so right. But at least this is my past and not even close to how I am today 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 @ BLover : Aye I know they are sad, but I had just lost my friend, he committed suicide, and I didn't see it come. So I was so hurt, angry and frustrated. But with "Someday" that I wrote a while after "Rest in peace", when I felt more at peace with it, I guess I had to believe that someday I would see him again and it helped me to move on.. Today I don't know what to think tho, but its a nice thought @ Cloudy: "No more pain" I wrote when I looked back at my life when I was most fucked up, and I was really far out, so the cold-hearted, confusion, fighting against myself and deep sadness is so right. But at least this is my past and not even close to how I am today . that's a very good thing, "MOVING ON" rabbit14 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JenovaVII Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 Rest in peace (...) The gun in your hand The bullet in your head You will always be remembered -- No more pain (...) Help me I'm sinking ever so slow Help me please don't let my hands go (...) -- You're a genius with the words. Those are my favorites parts. So beautiful, really... I particularly enjoy the way they sounds and the meaning hidden behind them. It's always a pleasure to read your poems. :mashimaro1: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmiZea Posted May 12, 2011 Author Share Posted May 12, 2011 @ Jenova: Thank you so much, I really appreciate the feedback and it makes me smile to know that you like it, so thank you foxy3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amander123 Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 So ridiculous to keep pretending So ridiculous to keep on trying It is all so very wrong I really liked this line a lot. But I loved all the poems! They are really good 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmiZea Posted May 13, 2011 Author Share Posted May 13, 2011 Thank you Amanda Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmiZea Posted September 22, 2011 Author Share Posted September 22, 2011 New one. The White River Darkness creeping in on me Slowly poisoning my mind Lifeless shadows breathing down my neck Pretending to be kind The dark demons in every corner Tempts the weakness in me With the pure white lines of dust Making fake illusions for me to see Giving in to the demon inside Feeding my blinded soul But who is really the betrayer Trying to mend my darkest hole Wrapped around my wrists I feel you in any vein Feeling you in any breath I take Washing away all the pain Isolated in my broken mind Sorrow is the feeling I wish was fake I walking alone in the dark You just wait for my life to take You took me to the white river And slowly let me drown I don't want your betraying hands anymore You will only pull me further down. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matti_19 Posted September 22, 2011 Share Posted September 22, 2011 I like your poem, it shows both your emotions and your struggle. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 22, 2011 Share Posted September 22, 2011 Sorry... I am not feeling well so I didn't much time to find the image for it... I hope this is O.K. for your poem... If you don't like it let me know... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmiZea Posted September 22, 2011 Author Share Posted September 22, 2011 @ Matti Thank you Matti and no doubt that I'm struggling, but it helps a little to write about it.. its some kind of healing process for me I guess. Not sure how many actually getting what its about, unless they know a bit about me.. but most important is that it makes sense to me and helping me to get to the other side again @ Hama, I'm sorry to hear that you don't feel so well.. But thanks for making this, I like the picture, but in this case a more suitable picture would be one of these 3: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 23, 2011 Share Posted September 23, 2011 @ Hama, I'm sorry to hear that you don't feel so well.. But thanks for making this, I like the picture, but in this case a more suitable picture would be one of these 3: Sorry! That is dark as I could go... I am not much into dark one... --;;; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmiZea Posted September 23, 2011 Author Share Posted September 23, 2011 No need to say sorry, I appreciate what you made of it.. my mind is just pretty dark and twisted atm. Its not that I don't like it, I do, just me who is in a very hard and dark situation as it is right now. *Hugs* 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 23, 2011 Share Posted September 23, 2011 No need to say sorry, I appreciate what you made of it.. my mind is just pretty dark and twisted atm. Its not that I don't like it, I do, just me who is in a very hard and dark situation as it is right now. *Hugs* I believe everyone has that dark side... But, I hope you don't get to deep inside of it... I hope everything will get better soon for you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmiZea Posted September 23, 2011 Author Share Posted September 23, 2011 @ Hama, Aye we all have our dark sides and periods.. And thank you, things will hopefully get better soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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