Ueda_Angel Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 Out of the dark, Out of the night, We've emerged from the shadows, Into the sun's site. Out of the shadows We come from dispair It seems like it's gone, But the nightmares still there. Out of the fire, the flames touch the sky The heat flows so gracefully, Like a sweet angel's sigh. The sun is our lord, companion, friend The magic is brings us, the wonders it sends. But the sun can't protect me.I belong to the night. I belong to the shadows. Away from the light. A stranger wouldn't know me My family wouldn't care. A tear slips down, my face. Because, you're never there. 14 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brohne Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 Very powerful and touching. Really like the lines: Out of the shadows We come from dispair It seems like it's gone, But the nightmares still there. gives an amazing visual. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 . .oooooooooh . .this one was a travel of your heart, it may had the metaphors, but as i was reading this, i got the meaning of what this poem really convey leaf4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amander123 Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 Very powerful and touching. Really like the lines: Out of the shadows We come from dispair It seems like it's gone, But the nightmares still there. gives an amazing visual. I agree! I really liked that part as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 It's beautiful Tat-Chan You write so well... It's like our dark moments, desire to be brightned... You described them fully... Thank you for posting it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goki Posted May 14, 2011 Share Posted May 14, 2011 i think u talkin about me "darkness" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChibiCiciChan Posted May 16, 2011 Share Posted May 16, 2011 God this is amazing... And so eerie and beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted May 17, 2011 Share Posted May 17, 2011 oh this is good, i love the words u use, i think my fav bit is 'Out of the shadows We come from dispair It seems like it's gone, But the nightmares still there.' keep it up x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 5, 2011 Share Posted September 5, 2011 I finally did this... When I read I feel it about vampire may be... So I use the image from Vampire Knight... I hope you like it... ^^ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ueda_Angel Posted September 6, 2011 Author Share Posted September 6, 2011 Oh my god! That does fit Kaname-sama! I never thought of that myself till now! Arigatou! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 7, 2011 Share Posted September 7, 2011 Oh my god! That does fit Kaname-sama! I never thought of that myself till now! Arigatou! Somehow when I was reading may be from the Vampire Knight... When I get there... that image just came first... And I said to myself... This is it! Oh... it was right choice... I am glad! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted September 9, 2011 Share Posted September 9, 2011 again, again! you did it again! i love the lyrical flow of the poem. you could almost put a melody to it. i like the words you've chosen. it's whimsical yet strong. i'm getting more of a feel of your personality through them. my only critique of this really is just do a spell-check next time before you post. other than that, it's a very good poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
memorex Posted September 9, 2011 Share Posted September 9, 2011 Correct me if I'm wrong. From the way I read your poem, you wanted to go out from the darkness but you can't because of someone. I think what you wrote really touches my heart. Anyway, it is a beautiful poem and I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ueda_Angel Posted September 10, 2011 Author Share Posted September 10, 2011 Correct me if I'm wrong. From the way I read your poem, you wanted to go out from the darkness but you can't because of someone. I think what you wrote really touches my heart. Anyway, it is a beautiful poem and I like it I actually wrote that poem back in 6th grade after my grandmother died. I was in a deep depression cause I felt isolated from my family after she died. I also missed her so much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
memorex Posted September 10, 2011 Share Posted September 10, 2011 I actually wrote that poem back in 6th grade after my grandmother died. I was in a deep depression cause I felt isolated from my family after she died. I also missed her so much. Oh, I'm sorry.. but, she will remain in your heart forever, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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