Jump to content

Choices (yet another one requested from a few members on the forums)


Ueda_Angel
 Share

Recommended Posts

Taking things for granted can lead to uncertain

choices

 

Hearts can be broken but a soul can be shattered

 

Everyone makes decisions, but it’s the choices that

lead us though life

 

Believe in yourself and you can do anything

Live your life your own way.

 

Another day is around the corner. So sit back and

enjoy today

 

Clever people are everywhere, but clever choices are

rare

 

Knowledge isn’t everything. It’s how you use it.

 

Reality may bite you in the neck, but fantasy allows

you to bite back.

 

Only strength and trust can lead us to what we believe

in

 

Soar to the stars and you may reach you goals

Everything has a reason for happening.

 

Soul searching may be tough, but it pays off in the

end.

  • Like 14
Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • Replies 15
  • Created
  • Last Reply

Top Posters In This Topic

  • hama71

    4

  • Ueda_Angel

    3

  • Belita

    2

  • EmiZea

    1

What a beautiful poem! :banhbao45:

 

I like it so much! The line "Clever people are everywhere, but clever choices are

rare" is just brilliant! Thanks a lot for this wonderful poem! :msn_red_fox 15

  • Like 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Reality may bite you in the neck, but fantasy allows

you to bite back.

 

My favorite part, hands down. Your writing is clean and it's like a slap in face. It's like I have a person right in front of me reciting your poems, said words directed at me personally. It hits me hard and wakes me up to life. It feels real. It's crude and I just love it.

Keep posting more. You have a talent with words and not just in the way that you know how to create a compact and beautifully written text but there is actually a meaning there, not hidden but right there for everyone to see. Unashamed.

I'd love to keep reading them, have confidence in your skill (:

 

:mashimaro5:

  • Like 3
Link to comment
Share on other sites

I agree with Jenova, you have a way of stating things that is so direct and in your face, but also beautifully put.

  • Like 2
Link to comment
Share on other sites

. .this poem is my favorite, it all says LIFE, an inspirational poem :)

 

. .it's like FANTASY versus REALITY foxy5

 

. .and you are supah right, LIFE HAS CHOICES, i once read an inspirational story of a man, he's so brave facing every challenges that his life take, what was made his into this was that he believed that people has choices, at everything, and your destiny was just the result of how you decide for your choice, :)

 

. .by this poem, you're just making the readers encourage theirselves and give hope :hamtaro-005 (19):

 

. this is a poem that must treasure rabbit14

 

 

(can i keep it??? :) , that is, if you'll allow me :) )

Link to comment
Share on other sites

This poem is an eye opener and makes you think, I love poetry that makes me stop for a moment and think, in this case, about my life and the choices I have made, and where it has led me so far.

 

Only comment I else want to make and the way I feel like describing this poem is ..

 

Beautiful

Link to comment
Share on other sites

How lovely. It was very inspiring. =] I almost want to print this out and hang it to remind myself that life is hard for a reason.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • 3 months later...

Choices-1.jpg

 

I know it's not BL... but, when I read this somehow this image come up...

So I use the image from manga G-senjou no neko.

I hope you like what I done... ^^;;;

  • Like 2
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Hama, is just lovely...

It fits the poem perfectely...

 

It made the words glow... :)

 

Thank you! I just thought what this poem mean to me...

And then pick the image close to that...

And the letter fonts been choice with the image and poem itself...

That is how I work with... ^^;;;

I just hope Uega_Angel's like this...

  • Like 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Thank you! I just thought what this poem mean to me...

And then pick the image close to that...

And the letter fonts been choice with the image and poem itself...

That is how I work with... ^^;;;

I just hope Uega_Angel's like this...

 

Once again Hama71 you haven't disappointed except for my name misspelled again lol. But other than that no worries. I am truely honored by this.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Once again Hama71 you haven't disappointed except for my name misspelled again lol. But other than that no worries. I am truely honored by this.

 

Oh.. that is big mix take... I have to fix... --;;;

Sorry... T T

Well have you been I was waiting... our relay story been hold again...

Because next person wasn't decide and no-one is around... T T

Any way I will try to fix all the name...

Link to comment
Share on other sites

you've done it on quite a few of them infact I think all of them lol

 

Yes, I just put in word and copy and paste that and do...

That is why every name is wrong...

I am trying to fix them...

I did two... including this...

I have to go for dinner and come back and do the other...

I am really sorry...

I was tire when I was doing that... --;;;

But, still I was keep thinking that your name is angle... I just don't know why thought that... --;;;

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • 8 months later...

Very nice poem, Tat-chan.

You really should abide by your words here to keep soaring further and never give up.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now
 Share




×
×
  • Create New...

YaoiOtaku is a friendly community that has a lot to offer when it comes to everything yaoi - manga series, DJs, oneshots, anime, yaoi RPs and plenty of BL discussion topics.

Make sure to also check:

Yaoi Manga

KPop Profiles

Yaoi Dj

Manga Lotus