Ueda_Angel Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 Taking things for granted can lead to uncertain choices Hearts can be broken but a soul can be shattered Everyone makes decisions, but it’s the choices that lead us though life Believe in yourself and you can do anything Live your life your own way. Another day is around the corner. So sit back and enjoy today Clever people are everywhere, but clever choices are rare Knowledge isn’t everything. It’s how you use it. Reality may bite you in the neck, but fantasy allows you to bite back. Only strength and trust can lead us to what we believe in Soar to the stars and you may reach you goals Everything has a reason for happening. Soul searching may be tough, but it pays off in the end. 14 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miro Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 What a beautiful poem! :banhbao45: I like it so much! The line "Clever people are everywhere, but clever choices are rare" is just brilliant! Thanks a lot for this wonderful poem! :msn_red_fox 15 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JenovaVII Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 Reality may bite you in the neck, but fantasy allows you to bite back. My favorite part, hands down. Your writing is clean and it's like a slap in face. It's like I have a person right in front of me reciting your poems, said words directed at me personally. It hits me hard and wakes me up to life. It feels real. It's crude and I just love it. Keep posting more. You have a talent with words and not just in the way that you know how to create a compact and beautifully written text but there is actually a meaning there, not hidden but right there for everyone to see. Unashamed. I'd love to keep reading them, have confidence in your skill (: :mashimaro5: 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brohne Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 I agree with Jenova, you have a way of stating things that is so direct and in your face, but also beautifully put. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 . .this poem is my favorite, it all says LIFE, an inspirational poem . .it's like FANTASY versus REALITY foxy5 . .and you are supah right, LIFE HAS CHOICES, i once read an inspirational story of a man, he's so brave facing every challenges that his life take, what was made his into this was that he believed that people has choices, at everything, and your destiny was just the result of how you decide for your choice, . .by this poem, you're just making the readers encourage theirselves and give hope :hamtaro-005 (19): . this is a poem that must treasure rabbit14 (can i keep it??? , that is, if you'll allow me ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 Couldnt agree more... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmiZea Posted May 15, 2011 Share Posted May 15, 2011 This poem is an eye opener and makes you think, I love poetry that makes me stop for a moment and think, in this case, about my life and the choices I have made, and where it has led me so far. Only comment I else want to make and the way I feel like describing this poem is .. Beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChibiCiciChan Posted May 16, 2011 Share Posted May 16, 2011 How lovely. It was very inspiring. =] I almost want to print this out and hang it to remind myself that life is hard for a reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 3, 2011 Share Posted September 3, 2011 I know it's not BL... but, when I read this somehow this image come up... So I use the image from manga G-senjou no neko. I hope you like what I done... ^^;;; 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted September 3, 2011 Share Posted September 3, 2011 Hama, is just lovely... It fits the poem perfectely... It made the words glow... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 3, 2011 Share Posted September 3, 2011 Hama, is just lovely... It fits the poem perfectely... It made the words glow... Thank you! I just thought what this poem mean to me... And then pick the image close to that... And the letter fonts been choice with the image and poem itself... That is how I work with... ^^;;; I just hope Uega_Angel's like this... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ueda_Angel Posted September 6, 2011 Author Share Posted September 6, 2011 Thank you! I just thought what this poem mean to me... And then pick the image close to that... And the letter fonts been choice with the image and poem itself... That is how I work with... ^^;;; I just hope Uega_Angel's like this... Once again Hama71 you haven't disappointed except for my name misspelled again lol. But other than that no worries. I am truely honored by this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 6, 2011 Share Posted September 6, 2011 Once again Hama71 you haven't disappointed except for my name misspelled again lol. But other than that no worries. I am truely honored by this. Oh.. that is big mix take... I have to fix... --;;; Sorry... T T Well have you been I was waiting... our relay story been hold again... Because next person wasn't decide and no-one is around... T T Any way I will try to fix all the name... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ueda_Angel Posted September 6, 2011 Author Share Posted September 6, 2011 you've done it on quite a few of them infact I think all of them lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 6, 2011 Share Posted September 6, 2011 you've done it on quite a few of them infact I think all of them lol Yes, I just put in word and copy and paste that and do... That is why every name is wrong... I am trying to fix them... I did two... including this... I have to go for dinner and come back and do the other... I am really sorry... I was tire when I was doing that... --;;; But, still I was keep thinking that your name is angle... I just don't know why thought that... --;;; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted May 30, 2012 Share Posted May 30, 2012 Very nice poem, Tat-chan. You really should abide by your words here to keep soaring further and never give up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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