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Twilight Waters (here's another one lol)


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The colors dance around the waves

Reflecting off my skin.

The water washes over me

Cleansing me of my sin.

 

The sun’s began is journey

Beneath the crashing waves

But the feel of that light upon my face

It’s what I mostly crave.

 

The sight that sits before my eyes

Will keep me in a daze

If you could see that shimmering light

Even you would be amazed.

 

The sun it heats the icy waves

Enough for me so see

Although the sun is setting now,

It sets the night sky free.

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Man, you are really incredibly good. This left me with such a relaxed feeling, like it has a purifying effect of sorts (: It's so damn satisfying to read such amazing literature.

And brohne, yes please, do it NOW! It's gonna be a f*cking masterpiece *.*

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. .sooooooooooooooooooo REFRESHING onion2

 

. and i really agree with one-san (jenova), it's so relaxing :cuteonion7:

 

. .it delivers me to this scene: i was sitting on the sea-side (or any bodies of water), fully stretched legs, while my both hands supporting my half body, and looking at the sky, then my eyes closed, and starts to feel the cold breeze that this poem made :)

 

. .so COOL! onion2

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My fav. so far...

I love the twilight(not the film/books)but the twilight itself...

Brings me peace, and you're writing about it makes me rmember why i love it so much...

Thank you :)

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