K Posted May 17, 2011 Share Posted May 17, 2011 (been working this for 2-3 days (though not the whole time in each day) ) CRESTFALLEN You stood against earth Count to no one but your own This was destined from birth A journey of self-crown Hindrance took the path Wicked roads arise Evils of earth wrath Stealing chances from your dice Steel armor of a knight Sword sharpened from blood Soul of valor haunting at night And a heart collided in flood You walk in unhesitant Into the wilderness of no end Blessed by the holy light You fought the human fate This battle were for seeds Born and planted into the field Great sun rays awaits Undying power must be faith Trust and loyalty empower the sword Great mind commanded your actions Blazing crimson hands were your words You'd unmasked those deceiving lions Battle of hundreds You won and failed Whatever has ended You still in thirst and drained Weak by your knight You spoke words in gray You drown yourself in wine Glory wasn't a pay The seeds of your hope Grew into trees, some bears fruit From the war you cope This is the trophy only suits Dawn is breaking Early morn awakening Your tired soul enlightened But you still was CRESTFALLEN! . .i dedicate this to my mom, this was about her (and i also wanted to share it to everyone ) . .i had a hard time writing this leaf4 11 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morinaga's Girl Posted May 17, 2011 Share Posted May 17, 2011 Cloudy this poem is just awesome! I love it a loooooooot!!!! Thanks for sharing! :leaf3: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aoi Posted May 17, 2011 Share Posted May 17, 2011 Clody your poem is just beautiful! I like it very much! leaf4 I know you had a hard time writing it, but it was really worth it! :msn_red_fox 15 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amander123 Posted May 17, 2011 Share Posted May 17, 2011 So beautiful cloudy-chan!! Thank you so much for sharing this 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilredphoenix Posted July 16, 2011 Share Posted July 16, 2011 Wow cloudy you did this in a 2-3 time that was wonderful very expressive choice of words they seem to flow from you. Such talent please continue to share your work with us like to read more. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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