Ueda_Angel Posted May 17, 2011 Share Posted May 17, 2011 Take a deep look in my eyes And tell me what you see You will never see the world The way that it sees me Take a deep look at my face And tell me who I am It changes every passing second It’s never the same again Take a deep look at my body And tell me what you feel An empty shell that hides itself From everything that’s real. Take a deep look in my life And please find something right Take a way the tears I cry When I’m alone at night Take a deep look in my soul And tell me that it’s real That it’s not only pain and hurt That I am forced to feel. Take a deep look at the one Who stands before your eyes And tell me if it’s really me Or just one more disguise 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misakixusagi Posted May 17, 2011 Share Posted May 17, 2011 awsome, sounds just like i feel atm, ure depressed state really knows how to write wicked poems. i feel connected to this one in a way, n it sounds beautiful in a sad way . ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amander123 Posted May 17, 2011 Share Posted May 17, 2011 Oh my gosh I love it!!! I sorry that you are feeling depressed though But it's so amazing! The last stanza: Take a deep look at the one Who stands before your eyes And tell me if it’s really me Or just one more disguise My favorite part of the whole thing. But it's all written so well 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest alexander Posted May 17, 2011 Share Posted May 17, 2011 Its just soo similar to what i am feeling right now made me tear up. tatchan is so talented, she could reach right into my heart. dont ever feel depressed alone. Ill be here for u. *hug Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 5, 2011 Share Posted September 5, 2011 I read few time... And the image keep comes up is from XXXholic... Actuall image I had on mind wasn't this two... But, when I am doing it... this two look better... So here it is... I hope you like this two... ^^ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ueda_Angel Posted September 6, 2011 Author Share Posted September 6, 2011 I really don't deserve this! My poems are not that good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 7, 2011 Share Posted September 7, 2011 I really don't deserve this! My poems are not that good! Don't said that... Your poem is good... I pick all this image from reading your poem... Did I? ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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