Ueda_Angel Posted May 18, 2011 Share Posted May 18, 2011 What was it that I did To make you change your mind? What is it that I do not have That you can’t seem to find? We’ve been together for so long I gave you all my trust Did you really mean your love Or was it all just lust? I have not done a single thing To make you feel my pain But now you claim you are done There’s nothing more to gain I gave you everything I had And still it’s not enough But now it seems you want nothing more And you think your so tough I do not know what I should do But I will ignore the past. If I can make him feel my pain I’ll make sure it will last. 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harukei Posted May 18, 2011 Share Posted May 18, 2011 I loved it TwT... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amander123 Posted May 18, 2011 Share Posted May 18, 2011 Thank you so much tat-chan!!! You managed to make a sad situation sound so beautiful and poetic. That means so much to me 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 6, 2011 Share Posted September 6, 2011 I hope Ueda_Angle and Amander123 both of them like what I done with this... Somehow I feel Skip Beat of this scene will perfact for this poem... Any way enjoy! ^^ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ueda_Angel Posted September 6, 2011 Author Share Posted September 6, 2011 ....(is at a lost for words)....that's probably not a good thing....I need my words back! You're too good at this! You're images are better than my poems...hold on, anything is better than my poems... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 7, 2011 Share Posted September 7, 2011 ....(is at a lost for words)....that's probably not a good thing....I need my words back! You're too good at this! You're images are better than my poems...hold on, anything is better than my poems... I am keep saying... I pick the image from you poem... This is what image fit with the poem... Your poem is good!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted September 7, 2011 Share Posted September 7, 2011 ....(is at a lost for words)....that's probably not a good thing....I need my words back! You're too good at this! You're images are better than my poems...hold on, anything is better than my poems... oh come on! there you go again. believe in how good your poems are, tat-chan. the emotions you presented here is as unique and real to you at the time you wrote it. i liked the flow of the poem. i like the words you used. it has an ironic bite to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amander123 Posted September 7, 2011 Share Posted September 7, 2011 @hama71 OMG that looks beautiful!!!! I love it!!! I might just print that out and keep it lol 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hama71 Posted September 7, 2011 Share Posted September 7, 2011 @hama71 OMG that looks beautiful!!!! I love it!!! I might just print that out and keep it lol I am glad both you and Ueda_angel like it... ^^ There was other image I want to use buy it was little to much work need... So I pick little easy one... --;;; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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