lilclover Posted January 8, 2018 Share Posted January 8, 2018 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ◊ Click the music note for song ◊ ◊◊ DEADLINE ◊◊ 31 January 2018 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sanka Posted January 11, 2018 Share Posted January 11, 2018 Sunfish Can Fly A rock, some string, and a heartfelt word Those are the things someones life is worth She sings a gentle tune to him in a tempered voice He sits on her soft papoose wrapped as tight as a noose They walked across the line to Sailors choice She whispered two final spruced up words and let the cloth unloose He sinks with spacious orbs, watching all the fish perform Sunfish fly above his eyes, their flat fins up against the sky Their quiet moves cut through the dull of uniform He tried to scream or cry or pray but what came out was his war cry He tries to breathe in his new worlds air But it seemed like the Sunfish didn't want to share With a soft blare in the back of his mind he sleeps elsewhere A rock, some string, and a heartfelt word Those were the things someones life had been worth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
voide Posted January 13, 2018 Share Posted January 13, 2018 g r i e f it was 3 AM it's quiet, and cold, and raining something is bound to happened e e r i e did you listen that? my heart stops just for a second s e c o n d a it feels like eternity when she's stopped breathing i stop breathe too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
auser Posted January 14, 2018 Share Posted January 14, 2018 aa.. can I post here? The first rule is confusing, can I comment on the lyrics/text? please don't shoot me! (or ban me!) bravo Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. & Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ! You are so amazingly talented, guys, the lyrics came alive for me! Sanka, did you just make it for the competition? Wow, that's really really impressive! Such beautiful imagery with such smooth lyrics.. bravo!!! it's so well-thought & well-written!! amazing! and wow, voide, really, wow, this little poem just broke my heart *breathes hard* really really something special. I don't know what it is about such simple words, and yet they hurt so much & it's really so beautiful & painful & vivid and just wow. honestly, don't know what to say, because I didn't expect like 20 words to do that to me. combined with the music - simply perfect incredible, guys!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sanka Posted January 14, 2018 Share Posted January 14, 2018 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. You're so sweet wow ;; thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodysadist Posted January 15, 2018 Share Posted January 15, 2018 Joining. Nameless dream The darkness that has taken it all, where am I going to come? The beginning, as if it can’t be seen around, a name, that was shouted through the dark. I hear a familiar voice coming closer, one step back, yet I fell down. Shivers going down my spine, I see, yet I don’t at all. A whisper through my ear, ”I breathe” it said and disappeared, as if it was all in my head, a dream, a miracle, something untouchable at all. I saw a figure in the dark, a woman smiling and waving her hand. Yet I blink and she is no longer there, only the feeling that there was anybody, remaining and slowly fading back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tetsu Posted January 30, 2018 Share Posted January 30, 2018 Poem of a Psychopath Flowing...flowing... Tears on his face. Resisting... Resisting... He wants to escape. But it's useless. It's useless. Flowing... flowing... Blood on the sheets. Thrusting...thrusting... There is white liquid. Feels good. It's good. Running... Running... He escapes. No he can't! Chasing... Chasing... I catched him. Good. Stabbing... Stabbing... Now he doesn't breathe. Flowing... flowing... Vision is blurring. We will be together. Forever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crystald Posted January 31, 2018 Share Posted January 31, 2018 . PATHS As the seasons pass us by under the moonlight glow, our lives are intertwined with shared moments of our past. We pass by on the street among us a sea of people. Can you sense I’m near? Can you hear my call? The music sounds all around us with our arms in the air jumping up and down dancing all night long. The time may come when we might part don't fret, just breathe that day is not today and it won’t be a goodbye. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
itsapanda16 Posted February 1, 2018 Share Posted February 1, 2018 I Write To Right One action can yield multiple consequences. However, one mistake can lead to many outcomes. I ask thee to reflect. How these broken deeds can connect. It’s those that don’t stop to breathe, That encounter many less than favorable deeds. I ask thee to reflect. How we all walk a path with no end, Left with only ourselves to defend, With these outcomes that we intend. I ask thee to reflect. And never leave it for neglect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Key Posted February 1, 2018 Share Posted February 1, 2018 || END OF ♪♫ MUSIC BOX ♫♪ || [YaoiOtaku B R E A T H EContest] Thank you all for taking part in our 'Music Box' contest! All entries were very good and we had a hard time deciding. Our winners are Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. The winners win as follows, - 6,000 points All participants get 2,000 points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crystald Posted February 1, 2018 Share Posted February 1, 2018 . Hi Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. !!! Congrats to Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ! Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ! Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ! Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ! Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. ! Thank you and have an amazing weekend! onion1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
voide Posted February 2, 2018 Share Posted February 2, 2018 thanks, key! & yay, guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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